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  1. Miles Long

    Chapter 40

    Wade needs counseling, a lot of it.
  2. Miles Long

    Chapter 39

    JP is the best person to have in your corner when the shot hits the fan.
  3. Miles Long

    Chapter 38

    Uh oh.
  4. Miles Long

    Chapter 37

    Something bad is going on back in Wade's home town. He should have stayed with Matt.
  5. Miles Long

    Chapter 36

    I hate that parents treat their kids so conditionally. The best thing parents can do is give kids a safe environment to become who they are meant to be and not who parents think they should be. Thanks for the thought provoking work.
  6. Miles Long

    Chapter 35

    At least with Cody Max knows what to expect, and I know that Cody actually cares for Max greatly. Love the family dynamics.
  7. Miles Long

    Chapter 34

    This is where I have to wonder about Marcel. How could he have let Max go? Thanks for keeping thing interesting.
  8. Miles Long

    Chapter 33

    Carullo's a super guy and giving him a ticket home was super thoughtful of Matt.
  9. Miles Long

    Chapter 32

    Wade is struggling and while I understand that Matt is hurt he has set them on a course that will ultimately be unsustainable. Thanks.
  10. Miles Long

    Chapter 31

    Feet wiggling yippee squeal for Wade and Matt.
  11. Miles Long

    Chapter 30

    The beautiful thing about this wonderful family is how they error on the side of kindness and generosity. Matt wants to help Cole and JP works his magic and Cole is helped. Now the flip side is those that threaten the family have limited life expectancies , but no family is perfect.
  12. Miles Long

    Chapter 29

    I'm torn and I think the only solution is a Carullo, Wade and Matt sandwich.
  13. Miles Long

    Chapter 3

    I wondered about Treadway when Spencer brought him up. Excellent job creating such an immediately compelling character. More please, thank you.
  14. Miles Long

    Chapter 28

    JJ found his thing and Cody is making amends, good feelings all around.
  15. Miles Long

    Chapter 27

    Matt is a good friend; Cole is lucky on many levels to have him.
  16. Miles Long

    Chapter 26

    The famous cuddle chapter...yay! Amber is a used douche nozzle; when Cole wakes up he's going to feel like crap. Thanks.
  17. Miles Long

    Chapter 25

    Wade (dreamy sigh) you're almost as awesome as JP and Stef. I must give Mark accolades for giving Wade the funniest line in the whole book: “Dude, all the guys kept saying you had a really big mouth. How was I supposed to know they weren't talking about you not being able to keep secrets?” Thanks.
  18. Miles Long

    Chapter 24

    Thanks as always for the creativity.
  19. Miles Long

    Chapter 23

    Once again I wonder, how did Brian became such a dick?
  20. Miles Long

    Chapter 22

    Something wicked this way comes me thinks.
  21. Miles Long

    Chapter 21

    Brilliant craft seamlessly including major events like Shepard's killing into the overall story and making it feel so true. My compliments to you Mark although I cried through most of the chapter.
  22. Miles Long

    Chapter 20

    Any chapter with Danfield is a good chapter. As for Cody, I can't blame him for Brian's whackadoodleness, Brian owns his "stuff" and Cody is clearly not ready to commit to anyone despite the love he feels for Matt. Excellent writing, thanks.
  23. Miles Long

    Chapter 19

    Luckily for Matt Stanford doesn't have locking doors as a prerequisite for admission.
  24. Miles Long

    Chapter 18

    Cole regardless of his size is a delicate soul. Thanks for the work.
  25. Miles Long

    Chapter 17

    I love how Matt's goal isn't do well in school but catch a glimpse of Cole's manhood . I really want to believe Brian, despite having foreknowledge of the future. Thanks.
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