Jump to content

Miles Long

Members
  • Posts

    4,579
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by Miles Long

  1. Miles Long

    Chapter 7

    Despite his aggressive tendencies, Brad really does have so much to offer. CAP Rules!
  2. Miles Long

    Chapter 6

    One minute Brad's outing Lark saying he gets what he gets and the next he's blowing him. I am enjoying being reminded how all over the place Brad at 17 was. Nice work, thanks.
  3. Miles Long

    Chapter 5

    This one event has stuck with me throughout the saga. It's very telling into how Brad thinks and works. Again I thank you for the work.
  4. Miles Long

    Chapter 4

    High school is a fickle place and boys who are confused by their sexuality can be very cruel. You're a master of teen drama Mark, thanks for taking me back .
  5. Miles Long

    Chapter 3

    Stef is such a great character. It's great to revisit him as a youngster as well. Thanks.
  6. Miles Long

    Chapter 2

    Teenage bravado reigns supreme in this chapter. It's perfect combination of hilarious and sweet. I've missed Tonto. Thanks.
  7. Miles Long

    Chapter 1

    I forget just how young Brad was. Nice start to the fourth book, thanks.
  8. Miles Long

    Chapter 1

    Literary crack is what this is Mark Arbour. I love how you put Brad in a fragile situation, but at the same time slowly introduce a new character that subtly peaks his interest. I also appreciate getting Matt's perspective and that he finally realizes the cost of his behavior. Thanks for all the effort.
  9. Miles Long

    Prologue

    Celebratory "Yes, yes, yes" dance. Thank you Mark Arbour for keeping the CAP love flowing. I'm glad to have some Matt perspective and look forward to all that Flux offers metaphorically and literarily.
  10. I love how this story test the limits of believability by combining a rags to riches tale, a first love story and a black ops attempt to overthrow a nation or two into one thoughtfully researched thrill ride. Great job putting it all together in a delightfully fun and chilling way. Thanks to the author and his team.
  11. Miles Long

    Epilogue

    Happy Helen pulled through and good for the guys and smart of Helen to leverage the publicity to make the guys' lives easier. Thanks again.
  12. Miles Long

    Endgame

    Karma is a bitch, the engineer outsmarted Jerry after all, good for him.thanks.
  13. Miles Long

    Impact

    Thanks as always for another well executed chapter in this adventure.
  14. Excellent work, great action. Thanks.
  15. Miles Long

    El Vohzd

    Chase has good instincts, kudos to C James for such a thrill ride.
  16. Miles Long

    Dead Man's Hand

    Evil man leaving us with this last one . Gripping work I can't stop reading, thanks.
  17. Miles Long

    Cold Steel

    Yikes that man is scary!
  18. I can't gush enough over how thrilling this story is, thanks.
  19. Miles Long

    Greylag Goose

    Super work, thanks.
  20. Jerry Clump is goin' down and not in the good way.
  21. It's all coming together...very exciting.
  22. Miles Long

    Fire in the Sky

    Man I'm going to need an hour maybe two of yoga just to unwind from this cliff hanger. Good job.
  23. Miles Long

    Prometheus

    Another informative chapter in the bank, thanks.
  24. Fantastic use of history to further the story. Thanks.
  25. Haven't read the other story but I love the idea and will check it out once I've finished LTMP. Thanks.
×
×
  • Create New...