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Did i miss something the drama between Ryan and Colby . Things seam to be going to well for Sam and Brett at the moment waiting for the new years eve party
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It looks as though it could be two weddings Ryan and Calebs parents have their best interests at heart even though Connor gave them a hard time . Now Christmas is over and everything is back to normal cant wait for the fireworks for new year
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Leave the wedding planning to Mererdith and Midori hopefully be they will come to a comprise . I love the sound of a Japanese American wedding with Kim and Midori wearing kimonos . And Midori didn't seam to mind too much adout Sam changing his name but what will Amber have to say . At least Caleb and Ryan manged to escape from Amber . I'd like to hear more about Colby dose he like Sam and Brett or dose he put up with them because Sam is her best friend he seems to keep a low profile in front of them
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Amber at her best sticking her nose into things she is so jealous of the love that Sam and Brett for each other . Amber was right about the four of the boys and I think she always had Sams best interests at heart lts just that she goes in all guns blazing . Where was Colby while all this was going on he should of been there for Amber to give her support . At first I didn't like Colby but then i got to like him but now I'm not sure why won't he hug Sam and Brett
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Jordan and Cody Chapter 1
paul.b commented on connorwhite104's story chapter in Jordan and Cody Chapter 1
I started reading Cody and Jordan on another site and have read all the chapters so far a great start to your first storey looking forward to reading lots more about them -
Just like the movies you see on TV this time of year well almost Brett And Sam still madley in love with each other and Caleb and Ryan back together again And we still got Amber And Colby to arrive . At first I didn't like Colby I thought he was using Amber so he could get to Sam or Brett but hopefully I was wrong lets hope we get to hear more about the couple
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At last they have realised that the four of them living together is a bad thing and It would never work. Calebs done the right thing telling Sam and Brett his feelings for Sam .what about Ryan and Brett they have known each other a long time . If Ryan decides to come over and Amber and Colby turn up are we going to have fireworks on Christmas Day
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Chapter Two: One of a Kind
paul.b commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Chapter Two: One of a Kind
Great to have 2 new carictors Stuart seams very intriguing looking foward to finding out a lot more about them -
Good for Brett letting Amber have it . Brett is so thoughtful thinking of kim and getting Sam to take her to rehearsals . Will they survive the night apart
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I started to read book 2 and then decide to read nemesis and realy pleased I did its a great story and I thought you dealt witth the situation with Craig and Nick realy well . I also like the way Dave and Nick have eyes for each other even though they both had a chance with Matt And Nick with Andy lt makes a change from most stories where the boys always want to have sex with lots of different boys , also the situation with Dave and his father it makes a change Dave didn't get thrown out of the house. And what a great friend Matts turnd out to be . It's the first story I have read of yours and I will definitely be reading more Thanks for sharing it with us
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Calebs always tired all that studying and work but as soon as Sam and Brett get back he finds the energy to go with Sam its not surprising that Ryan was upset and wanted to go all the way with Brett just to get some love back in his life . It was a big mistake to spend the first night back all together especially as Sam has to skate again to night lets hope it doesn't effect his performance . Well I suppose Amber will say lam always right . Now Ryan and Calebs Christmas is going to be ruined lets hope it goes well for the others
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It nearly went to far this time and house rules nearly broken it will end in tears . Especially if Ryan and Caleb love for each other is slowly drifting apart . Amber is right it will end in heart brake she needs to calm down and talk to Sam in a more friendly way
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Amber is right Sam especially should spend the night whith his sister and mother poor Kim she loves her brother and she needs a father figure snice her father is no longer around , Brett and Sam have just spent two months together two nights apart shouldn't make a difference. I think Amber is jealous of Ryan and Caleb with Brett and Sam spending so much time with them . Let's hope Christmas passes whith out to much trouble
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I think you were right to tell him he should keep his opinions to himself and his friends . In the UK we have a lot of eastern Europeans most of them work hard and do the jobs that others won't , but there are always the exceptions and those are the ones that we hear about the most and turn people against them
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Kim is so proud of her big brother l think it will brake her Hart I've Sammy doesn't spend time with her. I think it might be good for Sam and Brett to spend a little time apart they still have 2 months of the tour to go .l hope Colby keeps Amber under control
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Chapter One: Too Many Friends
paul.b commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Chapter One: Too Many Friends
I have enjoyed the first chapter and really looking forward to how Nick and Dave get on going to different colleges and what happens to Craig -
Poor Brett getting bored in the hotel room he needs to get out with the other parents so he can take his mind off the wedding it's alright for Sam he's got plenty to keep his mind occupied . The s..t will hit the fan if they stay at Ryan and Celeb's Sam will want to spend some time with his mom , , sister and Amber and Amber will want to spend time with Sam is Colby going to be the peace maker
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A steady start to book 4 . It's great that Sam and Brett are still madly in love with each other spending 6 weeks in hotel rooms together . Is this the calm before the storm when they get home for the holidays
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The boy and his friends were seen stealing 2 cases of beer on servalence camera ,speeding , 3 times over the legal blood achol leval and had 7 passengers in his Ford f 350. I hope in the USA when you take the test for your driving licence that it's not only against the law to drink and drive but also very dangerous. If so he has no excuses for his actions
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Happy birthday have a great time
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It seems that the twins have thought of almost everything even eating dinner , apart from the deodorant which thankfully Ethan noticed Looking forward to school on Monday how's Josh going to cope being around Ethan all day
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It seems that the bullys parents are the ones at fought if they cant see what he is doing to other kids . You must be a very proud mum the way yor daughter is bringing up Kyle and a very proud grandmother as well . It must be hard for Kyle because the bully doesn't get punished . And good on Kyle for sticking up for the smaller kid
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I'm pleased that Josh told Jacob he is gay after what Jacob said to Ethan about them not being gay l thought he might back out . Looking forward to Parker meeting jacob i hpe his in for a surprise . A great story so far and I cant believe that you haven't been to an English speaking country your English is so good
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Billy please don't waste 2 years of your hard work by wrapping up trials and tribulations to quickly there's still a lot more for Andy and his friends and plenty of time to do it
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Great start to the story looking forward to reading lots more about Max and Jason . Pleased you changed the status
