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Discovery - Chapter 12
Cole Matthews commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Discovery - Chapter 12
Interesting theory. However, the civil case is over. The criminal case has begun. Twyla is struggling with her husband's illness. I think she's actually relieved it wasn't an accident. Rush and Ben discuss things in the next chapter. Thanks for the idea, but Bailey Safety is out of it. I can reveal that. Awesome!!! -
Discovery - Chapter 12
Cole Matthews commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Discovery - Chapter 12
Well, I don't have a butler and Miss Scarlett has left the building, but you're right. I'm having a great time devising a mystery, and the clews are definitely there to be found. The next chapter has Rush and Ben discussing the situation and what connections Wylie and Ogden may have had. Thanks for the awesome compliment!!!! -
Salix Babylonica 1 - Listless The grounds of the place were dominated by several large, old willow trees that towered over the surrounding stone wall and swayed soundlessly in the wind like lost souls. Haruki Murakami Ben saw Rush sitting on a park bench, under the enormous weeping willow, next to the pond, so close to their home. He was looking straight forward, not moving, and he seemed so alone. As he neared, the paralegal got the impression Rush was shrinking and the
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Discovery 12 Hennepin County Medical Examiner Autopsy Report Assistant ME Jennifer Doyle, ME, MD Consultant: Forensic Research Anthropology Facility – Dr. Miles Canter DOD: 10/2/2017 DOE: 10/10/2017 Subject: Steven J. Wylie Weight: 17.26 kg. Height: 172.72 cm. … decedent has experienced advanced decay with most of the soft tissue removed by insect life. There are no signs of traumatic avian dissection, which considering the site of the body, is su
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Thank you so much. Those are the events we remember. It's the flaws that can make something interesting and even beautiful. It makes me feel good you are loving the characters because that's my favorite part. Very much appreciated!
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You are very correct. Bisexuality is a real thing and it could play a role. We will find out more about Steve and his connections. Lots more to come, and you have some pretty good instincts!!!! Thanks so much!
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You're absolutely right! Many times, the public thinks kinky only belongs to the queer community, but it doesn't. That's why assuming things can be problematic, yet we see that all the time. Thanks for the comments.
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People do odd things around a loved ones death. Jake's mom is struggling with her son's death and living in a fantasy world. It's unfortunate, but she's a mess. The plaintiff's expert is supposed to figure out a way to blame the defendants. She couldn't do so very clearly. Of course, the defense expert didn't know what happened either. You're very right. There is a big investigation coming, and things will slowly become clearer. Thanks for the awesome comments!!!
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate the excitement because I'm really loving this story! I'm glad you appreciate it.
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Excellent observation. However, these are teens who happen to be gay. They are very group oriented and status driven. Teens are usually clannish and look at others with suspicion. Clay's different with a history that is daunting. He's coping the best he can. I'm sure being seen as ordinary is solace to him. Thanks for the insightful comments.
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The deposition is the examination of a witness. The ADA knows the whole story already. This is the formal questioning, but they've been interviewed and have the reports from the event already. There are no secrets revealed in most depositions. Great question!!!
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Clay's doing all right. He's coping with things and there may be hint spring in the air soon!!! We will see. They are definitely rushing to stop the investigation. I think you'll see in the next chapter why the plaintiff's counsel is so nervous and edgy. Thanks for lovely comments and observations!!!
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Discovery 11 “Meet at Hen House 1 pm for brief,” the text message read. It was from Detective Hammond’s personal phone, not his official cell or his office number. Rush really didn’t want to go. He knew Hammond wanted his help and working for Hammond in the best of times was painful. However, the cop had assisted a bit with the space heater case. Rush sighed, and that made Ben ask, “What’s wrong?” “Hammond,” he answered, clearing his screen and popping his phone back into his messen
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Yeah! Thank you.
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Hmmm! It is based on my experiences. The story unfolding is about what these characters would have faced. It’s a good question, and I think it requires more reading. 😘 there is a case with a person who died, and it spurred a case. It was suspect. Keep reading. Not everything is cut and dried 😎 Thanks!
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This is the continuation of the story that becomes SWTW. It’s the guts of the story. These are people finding family, and it is reflected in the next generation of the story. Thank you so much!
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Amen. This is a huge problem we don’t deal with. People use children and this falls through the cracks. Sadly it doesn’t seem a priority to some people. It is to me. Thanks for your comments and observations.
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Thanks so much. The story needs to be considered. There are too many sexual predators and the prey who live with the consequences. I appreciate the comments.
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Thanks so much for the thoughtful comments. This story came about because of my witnessing a debate about sex predators and abuse of children. Clay’s story isn’t unique. It touched me deeply. More of Clays struggles are part of my work. Thank you!
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You got it exactly. Ryan loves Darren. They have a family and a life. What does Ryan do? Does Darren have an excuse? I love these explorations. Thanks for some interesting thoughts.
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Great questions, which I love you for asking. Are intelligent people wiser? Do they make better moral judgments? What does the doctor think about a life taken, and their family’s life lost? Is this even possible? After all, they are going nowhere fast, as a result of your prompt. The car won’t start.👍
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I don’t think its done. I started it with the idea we are all susceptible to doing something extreme. No one is immune from that. The second one was someone pays for it. This final one was suggestive that it isn’t just the guilty who pay. Is Ryan a victim? What about Christian? Is he guilty at all? How do we stop it? Thank you you for the probing ideas. This is why we interact!
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Twyla's very astute, like her brother. Her attorneys are pretty sure of themselves. We will see what happens next. Rush is happy Clay is communicating with him. I think Clay is happy in their home. Even the best relationship isn't all candy and flowers though. Thanks for some great comments. Very much appreciated!
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I have a suspicious mind as well. Hammond thinks it may be a serial killer at work. Twyla isn't sure what to think. Rush doesn't buy easy stories. There are facts and suspicions galore, but there is clarity coming. Thanks for the interesting comments.
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There is plenty of suspicion to go around. Twyla did see the issue and it's a problem that needs to be understood. The firefighters are key investigators, and they have parts to play. At this point, the case is a civil one, and the discovery process of collecting evidence is the stage we are in. As we clear up ambiguities, the picture will become more clear. Thanks for an energetic comment. I'm glad you're invested!! Makes me happy!
