Petey
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Love this story! While the path to love is sometimes excruciatingly slow it's nice to see true love developing. Love watching Emmett come to realize how much he really loves Jian. Can't wait for more.
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I think there is more of a story there about the (hinted at) feeling that Alex may have for Tracy. I'm not sure about the purpose of all those winks if those feelings are actually real or if he is just toying with Tracy. Looking forward to the next update
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You've got me hooked, can't wait to see how this story plays out. Hope there is some happiness for both brothers down the line. It's good to see such a close relationship between them. Hope you give us some back story on Chewy, bet it's an interesting one,
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Very disappointed with this chapter...too predictable and cliche. There was no suspense or tension, we all knew this was going to happen (even with whom). I had enjoyed the story so far, I wish you hadn't fallen victim to the cookie cutter story line so many other writers fall for.
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Thank you for another wonderful optimistic story. It is so nice to escape all the drama in our lives and live vicariously through all the boys in your stories. Your have a masterful way of telling a story, bringing to life all the emotions of these young boys. Please keep writing more stories like this, we need all the innocent, sweet love we can get.
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Enjoyed this chapter. It was nice to see the person that was on the receiving end of the bullying be able to stand up for himself(even if he lost the fight). Glad you allowed the principal to show fairness and understanding toward both boys(unlike Kenny's coach). Love the way Zac stood up for his former friend, showing compassion when it would have been so easy to do otherwise. Now please let's bring some real happiness to Zac because he sure deserves it.
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Such a beautiful, optimistic romantic story, yet tempered with reality. Can't wait for part 2!
