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Will Kieran and Rory survive 2 more trials? When your relationship is in trouble because your partner thinks you’re cheating, a good F**k sounds like a good idea but as Kieran found out does not solve anything. It just comes across as desperate and manipulative. Kieren is forced to confront many uncomfortable truths about himself. Hopefully he learns from them and becomes a better person and king.
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Happy you’re continuing this exciting adventure. At least we know there’s another story awaiting us when this is finished lol They should dispose of Zerenth as soon as possible; self important traitor that he is (let him join Oeus in his final tomb). Maybe include Ash’s poor excuse for a mother as well.
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This resonates so powerfully with those of us who have walked this road as well.
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“For now” sounds pretty ominous! When is Kieran going to find time to complete his five challenges, with Scarlet posing such a threat.
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It’s going to take both kings with Ash and Desmond to be in complete sync to defeat this evil. What’s the saying? Love will conquer all!
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This is a fantasy story, right?
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I was hoping you’d give Desmond a big dick, think of how he’d use his magic on Ash !
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Why do I get the feeling this is the calm before the s**t hits the fan. Ash and Desmond - slow burn. You’ve outdone yourself, two romances in one story!
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Is Zereth somehow connected to Scarlet? There had to be a reason he left them unprotected as if he anticipated the attack.
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The fae elders showed their true cowardly and treacherous selves. Ash was right - a bed of vipers. No signs of fae magic to save their own people; wthey let the 4 boys save their useless hides. Time for Zereth to get his just reward for his intrigues and treasonous behaviour. Really hope you continue to get better. Losing weight is a hard journey, good luck.
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The fae seem like useless self serving creatures that want everyone else to do their dirty work while they keep their own hands clean. They don’t deserve the kings. How will or can they respond to a threat like Scarlett; dress in splendid gowns and squeal like frightened girls?
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Ding dong, the wicked king is dead! I think Ash may find himself not lonely anymore after he’s helps the blonde priest boy. Riveting chapter, heart stopping action, love overcoming evil.
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They will need a well coordinated team to face Lachlan. The three together will be a force to be reckoned with, but fate will determine their destiny. I wonder how Lachlan spun his bond with Scarlet the possessed. I guess this must have been when “fake news” was invented. interesting times ahead…..
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I picture our author huddled over her phone, rapidly typing with a look of gleeful anticipation as she devises more misfortunes for our boys. And Lachlan isn’t even here yet. Why are they not using more magic to protect themselves? They easily overcome anyone that stood in their way.
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So Lachlan wants a new and improved heir, good luck with that! Such grandiose and selfish plans; let’s see what the Fae and Cian think about them. As the old commercial said “You shouldn’t fool with Mother Nature” So the chase begins….
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So much for basking in the after glow of great sex! Not sure what Lachlan’s end game is. Why does he want both boys out of the way? Will he leave himself without an heir or does he think he can sire another one? “Cia be damned” Famous last words?
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Lachlan isn’t as clueless as we thought but much more dangerous. The boys have more help than they anticipated but they’re going to need all the help they can get for the trip ahead, sounds like it’s going to be a perilous one.(maybe only sooo fun for our scheming author lol)
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Maybe they can just follow the yellow brick road!
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So much intrigue but to what end? Now the only people the boys can trust are themselves.
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While Lachlan is blissfully oblivious, evil is swirling around him. Thankfully Rory and Kieran are taking matters into their own hands. Where does Desmond fit into this. I’m concerned with the events by the lake. Just had cataract surgery so can identify with blurred vision. You’re a trooper for soldiering on, it’s appreciated
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Lachlan is a dangerous idiot, not sure what his game is yet but it sure isn’t going to end well. Can’t wait to see him dethroned. For not usually writing fantasy you’re writing an excellent story; my favourite one that you’ve written so far.
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Pessimistic me thinks something is going to happen to spoil the perfect day. I hope the only issue is they run out of condoms and lube lol It’s good to see them both so happy. It’s good that downer Dad is not around, Justin can finally be free to be the person he is meant to be.
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So many parents fall into this homophobic trap without realizing the immense pain they are inflicting on their children. Fortunately SOME will become fierce allies when they are confronted with the fact their child is gay.(wishing it were all) Hoping Justin’s father will change and accept his son as he is. My father did, but the hurt remains two decades later.
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What I feel for John right now is better left unsaid 🤬. When will parents realize the harder they try to control their kids, they inevitably lose their child. Ah Nico, I think you’ve finally lost your ❤️
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It’s good that Kalum hasn’t given up on his brother and recognizes that Jasper needs and is getting help. I’m glad Kalum is getting his fresh start. I have enjoyed the story in spite of some very dark moments. Thanks for sharing.
