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I've always loved reading this, so being featured here myself is really an honor! Especially among Valkyrie, Andrew and Dark! I hadn't thought it'd be so soon. I also didn't even realize you read Gemini. ^-^ Thank you so much for that!
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What is Christmas really about?
Sammy Blue commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in What is Christmas really about?
Thank you for your review! I agree, as Djadi said, Jesus would probably find it sad that people needed an occasion. I also think if one was to think about the old lady and try to answer the final question of the story (What is Christmas really about?) one would be well advised to consider what Djadi said. -
Offense is the Best Defence
Sammy Blue commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in Offense is the Best Defence
Thank you so much for your praise! It means a lot! To be honest, I was skeptical at first, too, but thanks to the help of my Betas, Editors and all the reviews I've been getting, I've managed to make it work. I will try and get the next chapter up soon, but since the English version is bound to wait for the progress of the German version (which is sort of on a posting schedule), it will sadly take a few weeks. I will try to hurry, though. -
Offense is the Best Defence
Sammy Blue commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in Offense is the Best Defence
hey :* Yeah, posted at last. I also hope to finish within the month. And I think the paragraph (or really, it was like half a sentence) was my mistake. I didn't delete the full paragraph after checking the translation, so there were like one and a half lines in German randomly between the paragraphs. :3 -
Offense is the Best Defence
Sammy Blue commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in Offense is the Best Defence
Well if he is reported missing it would become a police matter. If not, they wouldn't know. In any case, he was lucky they either didn't report it or the police didn't think to check the bus station (or had too little/wrong information to think of that). It might be that the boarding school only reported it in the morning when it was already too late, for example. Since he didn't run into the police, it's not really important anymore, though the question certainly has to be considered. Thanks for your review! -
Offense is the Best Defence
Sammy Blue commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in Offense is the Best Defence
Thank you for your review! -
Offense is the Best Defence
Sammy Blue commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in Offense is the Best Defence
Thank you and ops! I fixed it. Thanks for letting me know! I'm glad, too. They were lucky that it was Jacob. Josh might not have been as quick to escape. -
Offense is the Best Defence
Sammy Blue commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in Offense is the Best Defence
Hey skinnydragon, actually, two years back when I had a (much worse, much shorter) version of Gemini already finished (before I decided to rewrite pretty much everything starting from chapter 5-6) - back then it wasn't a military school, but some sort of boot camp specialized on gay conversion therapy and it was Josh, not Jacob. Let me tell you, it wasn't pretty. I'm much happier with this version. As for the rest, well, you will find out in the next chapter. Thank you for your review! -
Jacob 36 hours before It was past midnight when we landed in Albany. We were out of the airport in almost no time and took a taxi from there. I was dead tired from the long day. I had already spent the last half an hour in zombie mode in the airplane. By now even beating myself up over forgetting my charging cable couldn’t keep me awake anymore. Only the sound of a car door slamming shut woke me from my deep sleep. I looked around confusedly, rubbed my eyes and yawned loudly. When I got out o
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Aww Ross, don't be doing that I hope Lauren will figure it out... or something else will happen? Anyway, I hope he still goes to train with the Leopards. Maybe he'll meet Neil? ^^
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Ah, seems like the silent competition for Ty is really starting up now. Wouldn't if be great if all the major players are drafted by the same AFL club? Unlikely though Anyway, I hope this Stuart won't cause too many problems for Ross. Interesting set up though. :3
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I'm really happy to see this story! Particularly the new kid is promising an interesting plot. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Thank you! I agree. It's not nice but some things do get easier/are safer because of it...
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You did well <3 And yeah, well, I assume it will appear in 5-7 weeks
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Hey, thanks for your review! Yes, Jacob was going to DC. Chapter 19 is when they trade places and Jacob leaves. Chapter 20-22 is Josh's weekend while Jacob is away (Friday afternoon to Saturday afternoon). Chapter 23 is Washington DC, where we learn about Jacobs weekend (Saturday evening). At the end of chapter 23, Jacob suddenly has to return to Albany, we don't know why. After that Josh doesn't hear from him at all, making him worry. That comes to a head on Monday, in chapter 24. I hope my little summary helped. In chapter 25 we'll jump back 36 hours and learn what happened to Jacob. Thanks for your review and for being happy despite the confusion. <3
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Hey, the disadvantage of being an author (or someone who reads a lot) is that you look at what happens in a chapter and you can predict with great certainty what will happen, isn't it? Whether you really are correct with Jacob's whereabouts remains to be seen, but the different reaction of Josh and Jacob is spot on.
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hey, no problem Good guesses. As you already know, the next chapter won't tell you much. The one after it will be Jacobs POV again, though. Thanks for your review!
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Hey, thanks! Hehe twinnanigans, I like that word. And yep, it had to end at some point. It's sorta bittersweet isn't it? ^^ The next chapter is going to be Jacob's POV. It will take a while though. I think for the rest of the story the English version depends on the German posting plan. That is usually one part of 800-1200 words per week + time for translation. I haven't completely finished writing the next chapter yet, but I think it will take something around 5-7 weeks for the German chapter to be completely posted and translated. I'm just too busy with work and life to do it any quicker. Sowwy <3
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That was my intention exactly (the hugging part^^). I'm glad to see I succeeded. Josh has a long way before him, have fun joining him on it.
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Thank you! It's great to have a new reader around who writes reviews. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
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Josh I had just entered my room when I felt my phone vibrating in my pocket. I got it out immediately and looked at it, only to grunt disappointedly. Jacob will most likely come to the park, just like we agreed. Don’t worry too much, that won’t help anyway, Luv u :* Reading Ethan’s message made me smile and I felt my heart warming. I sighed as I put my phone aside and started to get undressed. As I took off my chain, I stopped for a moment and looked at the silver Gemini pendant in my hand. I
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What is Christmas really about?
Sammy Blue commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in What is Christmas really about?
Hey, thanks for sharing that story! Glad to hear there are people out there who care -
Interesting ideas! Sorry for the very long delay. You should learn more soon.
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Hey, sorry, seems it took me longer than planned, but I hope this time you didn't forget all. There should be an update very soon.
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Well, better late than never, the next part is going to come some time during the next days
