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Gemini - Prologue. Prologue

She was slowly walking through the silence of the night. The smell of smoke, beer and vomit was still lingering in her nostrils. Every now and then, a soft noise emerged from the two bundles in her arms, disrupting the quiet peace.

They were so beautiful, so innocent. She had hoped that Bill would change, that he would finally turn his life around with these two little souls depending on him. He had promised it. It had lasted for two, maybe three days. Then she had come back from her cleaning job and found him passed out in the trailer, surrounded by beer bottles, the babies on the floor, crying.

She had given him another chance, but the only thing that came from it was the bruises on her body. When he had started drinking again that night, whatever little hope she had, was extinguished.

She loved the little boys and she had wanted to see them grow up and blossom, but she knew she couldn’t provide them with what they needed; a safe environment, and money for food, clothes and education. When she got pregnant she knew that it would be tough, but Bill had been better, and he had told her he would do anything for her, and for them.

When he had started beating her again that day, she knew that she had to do something. It was only a question of time until the babies would suffer at his hand, she had to go to work, so she couldn’t always be around to look out for them.

She was so ashamed to have failed them. She hoped that when they grew up, they would understand, and forgive her. That was all she could hope for.

Standing in front of the fire station, she looked down at her two sons, savoring her last moment with them. She kissed them gently on their foreheads and whispered an ‘I love you’, before she laid them down on the ground in front of the door.

She rang the bell and quickly walked away. As she left, the babies began to cry and it broke her heart. From around the corner, at the end of the block, about 60 feet away, she watched as the door opened and a bear of a man knelt down to pick up the boys. He put the note that she had pinned to one of the blankets into his pocket and gently rocked the babies in his arms.

He read the name tags on their blankets and spoke to them soothingly. After a moment they stopped crying, and the firefighter went back to the station. Now the only thing left of her in their lives was the note she had written for the firefighter.

“These are Joshua and Jacob. They were born on July 3rd. Please make sure that they have a warm home and a loving family. I love them very much and I want them the best. Please tell them I will never forget them.”

Silently crying, she turned around and walked back to her trailer.

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A fantastic prologue, setting the scene for the story brilliantly. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next :)

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On 11/28/2013 06:35 AM, Graeme said:
A fantastic prologue, setting the scene for the story brilliantly. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next :)
Thank you! :)
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On 01/01/2014 07:55 PM, Suvitar said:
What a sad beginning for a story and for those little boys :,(
It is, isn't it? :(

But as an author, you sometimes have to be cruel, I guess. ;)

Thanks a lot for all your reviews! Since you took the time to write one to every single chapter, I am now going to try and reply to each and every of your reviews! :)

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On 02/11/2014 03:07 AM, lonnie biko said:
amazing beggining even though sad it's captivating can't wait to read the other chapters
Thanks a lot! :)

Enjoy! ;)

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Sammy that was great. I love stories about Twins,. Can't wait to read more to see where this is going. Captivating beginning had my attention right away.

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On 02/21/2014 12:50 PM, Jammi said:
Sammy that was great. I love stories about Twins,. Can't wait to read more to see where this is going. Captivating beginning had my attention right away.
Thanks a lot! :) Looking forward to reading how you liked it! :)
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Wow. This was a really great prologue. I almost had tears in my eyes as I found myself empathizing with the mother that had no choice but to give them up. I'm looking forward to reading more!

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On 02/22/2014 01:34 AM, A.J. said:
Wow. This was a really great prologue. I almost had tears in my eyes as I found myself empathizing with the mother that had no choice but to give them up. I'm looking forward to reading more!
Thanks! :3

And don't cry AJ :hug:

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Wow! That was a heart-breaking start that definitely captures attention and immagination. I am looking forward to reading on.

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On 09/27/2014 08:28 PM, Jaro_423 said:
Wow! That was a heart-breaking start that definitely captures attention and immagination. I am looking forward to reading on.
Thanks a lot! :)
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On 09/29/2014 03:45 AM, Providence said:
OMG!!! I cry a the drop of a hat... You have hooked me and I must now finish this or else.. Great Job!!!
Thanks a lot! Let me know what you think of it when you're done, I'd be happy to hear your thoughts! :)
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Excellent Prologue many tears came down, please keep the chapters coming, I am hoping for a beautiful love story with the twins

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On 01/10/2015 02:31 PM, Ray169 said:
Excellent Prologue many tears came down, please keep the chapters coming, I am hoping for a beautiful love story with the twins
Thanks a lot! :)
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This was an awesome opening. I'm looking forward to reading much more of this story. You posting a chapter update just before I did the same caught my eye, and with only reading this prologue, I'm very happy it did.

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On 01/12/2016 10:25 AM, WolfM said:

This was an awesome opening. I'm looking forward to reading much more of this story. You posting a chapter update just before I did the same caught my eye, and with only reading this prologue, I'm very happy it did.

Thank you! It's great to have a new reader around who writes reviews. :D

 

I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

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On 27.6.2017 at 8:22 PM, David Santos said:

I'm crying on the prologue. That's a good start.

Thank you! :)

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Heartbreaking but an understandable decision, even though I wonder if it is more common to give your children to a baby hatch.

Will they ever see their mother again? Will the situation of their mother have a huge impact on their later lives?

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On 3/1/2021 at 10:44 PM, Zuri said:

Heartbreaking but an understandable decision, even though I wonder if it is more common to give your children to a baby hatch.

Will they ever see their mother again? Will the situation of their mother have a huge impact on their later lives?

Hey Zuri,

I actually researched this a bit... had too look it up again though, it's been so long. :D

There are barely any baby hatches (as you might know them) in the US as of now and from what I (Wikipedia) know they've first appeared around 2016., so way after I wrote this.

However, all states have so-called "save-haven-laws" specifically for NY state -> https://ocfs.ny.gov/programs/safe/

So from what I looked up and heard, this is pretty realistic in the how and why of how she does things.

Thanks for your review :)

 

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Hey Sammy,

wow, I didn't know this. Quite interesting. Thanks for that in-depth research!

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