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Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
Hmmm... I would self-publish, but most GA-related self-published books I've looked at suck. Why do some writers think they can put makeup on crap and it'll make it look better? I'll stick to trying to get more chapter and story likes and comments. -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
About that... You may have to wait until the next book. Ritch has to report back to the Academy, and that means he won't be around to discuss the matter. -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
At least we know a bit more now than at the end of Hail to the Chief. -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
I have no idea what you talking about, short stack. Go bite someone instead of trying to rile up the masses. -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
I want to write a dog fight, but I need to wait until Ritch can be at the controls. It'll be part of my efforts to provide updates on those who've already had their own story. A couple of times I mentioned Ritch having model airplanes in his bedroom while growing up. I think he could identify planes the way some people recognize cars with a single glance. -
Over The Rainbow • Part III
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part III
@BlueWindBoy I love the fact you pay attention while reading. Some want to get to the end so fast, they miss the subtleties. Sucking the air out of the city was but one of the interesting events that day. The stupidity of exaggerating the crowd's size because Orange's ego couldn't handle having a smaller one than a black man's was another. I mean a smaller crowd. I just read what I wrote and want to ensure everyone I'm not referring to smaller hands. The scarecrow claiming it was all due to 'alternate facts' blew my mind. Every wine I mention in the series is produced where I say it is. I have Mr. Google to thank for that. I also had to google Ziva David; I've never watched a single episode of that show. I enjoyed writing about CJ's visit to Israel. Some of it was based on experience, a bunch on the internet. Interestingly enough, I'm about to mention another trip to Jerusalem in 2027. Maybe I should have him meet with Mossad agents. Grandkids you say? Let me see what I can do about that. Some pictures I posted directly and a series of software updates messed them up. Other I posted a link for, and those may be gone. Tell me which ones you'd like to see and I'll try to find them for you. I'm a chronic planner and often drop hints of what I've outlined for the story's future. That was the case with Martin's Tavern. The fact I've had a couple of meals in the place made it easy. The restaurant was in the news recently and not in an entirely favorable way. -
Over The Rainbow • Part II
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part II
LOL Now and then, a word captures my attention, and I feel the need to include it. Easy to justify them since Brett claims CJ's expansive vocabulary is proof of over education. I think he blames Otto Hentz, S.J. and his Problem of God course for a lot of his confusion. Environmental Sciences. Interestingly, after I wrote this, my niece earned a similar degree and is now about to graduate from law school. I'd love for her to get and MBA to match Owen, but considering she accepted a six-figure offer from an Atlanta law firm after interning for them... -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
I would make a big deal out of a road trip between Vail and Colorado Springs, but its only a couple of hours. Ritch does put a few miles on Heinrich in the next chapter. -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
Awesome. I keep trying to balance military and personal aspects. Did anyone notice this chapter's the beginning of Ritch's third year at the Academy? I'll have a little personal stuff next one and maybe I'll include something to show how he's developing as a leader. -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
Diaper use is real. I had Ritch refusing to wear one and relying on the absorbent gel at first. Someone advised me that was probably not realistic for a rookie. -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
Deep breaths... Your intoxicant of choice might also help. -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
He talked so much, the cartel offered the American ambassador money if she would take CJ off their hands. Either that, or they'll all associate members of The Squad by now. I hope I captured some of what you experienced in my description. -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
Funny thing is no matter how much I read about the Air Force and the Academy, I end up wanting to learn more. I can't wait until we can safely travel so I can fly to Colorado Springs. Doesn't matter if this book will be over before that, chasing down knowledge is always fun. -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
LMFAO You like stirring the pot, don't you? I shouldn't have removed Ritch's line about how it took a REAL president to care enough about his people, he'd call a State Department official to express his concern. Of course, I could also include a line about 'preppy-ass" Trump supporters who denigrate the service of women in the military. Republicans already lost Will Bender in 2020, I think the party's about to permanently lose the possibility of Ritch ever supporting them. Maybe I'll fix those oversights in the next book -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
Blame CJ for any cliffie-like stuff. I mean C James, not C Junior. I'm still traumatized by Circumnavigation. Due to atmospheric condition, shrinkage was pronounced in Alaska, Ritch's missile refuse to fire. In Key West he was at a gay B&B, his options were limited. As for CJ and Owen, you have to know I'll revisit that trip from their point of view, so we may get to see what they do while Uncle Ritch plays in the pool with Liebe. -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
What are you talking about? I described the Russians approaching Alaska (Sarah Palin waved at them) and the Norwegians 'shooting down' Fitzpatrick and Peterson. Not enough drama for you? -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
Interesting... Carlos Hazday makes an appearance in a couple of future books. You do recall the ancient biker has been cleaning and publishing those stories Owen makes up for his daughter, right? -
Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
Something I thought of while busy doing something else. Some readers may not know what we're talking about, and since my previous use of @Parker Owens characters Michael and Blaine has led to at least one person reading Predator Pray, I'd like to highlight what story I stole the name from. Y'all should check this story out..- 57 comments
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Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
Neither. But now that I think about it, maybe we can start calling Ritch Rikki.- 57 comments
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Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
Quoting Ritch in Cadet's prologue, WTF stads for What the Frijoles. Somewhat appropriate since we're talking about Mexico!- 57 comments
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Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
CDMX is currently being written. When I last heard from CJ and Owen, they were stumbling home with Liebe after spending an afternoon in a Mexico City pub.- 57 comments
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Cadet Second Class • I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • I
We're sorry, the author you're trying to reach is currently unavailable. He's scared of pitchforks. Last time he was heard from he was hiding in a cold basement somewhere in Michigan. www.state.gov/cj- 57 comments
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When the class of 2022 graduated, Ritch and the rest of the 2024 cadets moved up in rank. The newly minted Cadet Technical Sergeant caught a flight to Alaska shortly after the semester’s end. He had been posted to Joint Base Elmendorf-Richardson. During either their Second or First Class summers, all cadets enrolled in Ops Air Force, a three-week program focused on life at an operational Air Force Base. Cadets could end up anywhere from Korea to North Dakota, and depending on the base assig
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Over The Rainbow • Part I
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part I
It hurts to laugh this hard. When I wrote the scene, I expected someone to say: Wait, why didn't Longoria complain CJ didn't tell her he knew Obama? You've come the closest. Guess you get my humor. -
Where the kids part of the Abrams brigade? The news made it sound as if she spearheaded the whole registration and GOTV efforts.