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Yes, he would be 18 but my comment was meant to say a 16 yo would see only black and white. Scary to think I'm outlining a story with him at 30. The first one off happens in the middle of a book. It was my reaction to Charlottesville. The second one i wrote after cops were killed in Dallas. I'm on my tablet without access to my timeline spreadsheet I had a problem reacting to events that affected me because I was already writing beyond them. Now I have character spinoffs that help. The fiasco at Lafayette Square's photo op I covered in Thiago's story. And promptly put a hold on the story because I wasn't ready for the rest. LOL The BLM movement also gets coverage in Ritchie's story. Jan 6 I'm not sure how I'll cover. It gets mentioned in one story for sure, but I'd like to show instead of telling and haven't figured out how yet. Roar comes from Katy Perry's song. Every chapter in the first 5 books shares a name with a Springsteen song. The 4 books covering GU evoke that in their titles. Walls was all dates and I wanted to revisit songs.
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This chapter isn't perfect, but it's one of my favorites. Obama"s note makes me tear up. Which if you think about it is totally stupid. I wrote the damn thing! Did I already have CJ use Hoya Saxa? LOL
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I don't change him that much as he ages. He's too much fun to write. Get ready, he's almost a freshman at GU.
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Maybe the unsophisticated writing is part of the charm. I have similar love-hate relationships with the early CJ books.
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Last I heard, CJ and Owen just received a case of Shiraz. Of course, since they're in Mexico City, I get to introduce a hunky Aussie who facilitates the private shipments through the Australian embassy. Yes, I'm working on THAT book.
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LOL Damn Liston wines are getting popular. CJ and Owen were not in Oz at the beginning of 2020, but I wonder if Brandon ran into Owen's brother Spencer. I volunteer to go fight fires with those guys. No way would I get nervous around firefighters. Naked, yes. Fearful, only if they're hung too big. Nah, no such thing.
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That man's obstinate and often in denial. He sees what everyone else does, but prefers to interpret whatever it is his own way.
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@BlueWindBoy Google Maps is our friend. I also took to trips with DC stops while writing the series. There were a lot of places I wanted to use I'd never been to.
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Cadet Third Class • IV
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
Once due diligence proved there was no nefarious intent on her part, they were willing to let the money flow to a good cause. CJ will NEVER forget. He may have little episodes again, but he even admitted to having made peace with his stepfather and mother exiling him. -
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Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
Thank you, Jeff. Some of the interactions are based on my family's gatherings, some on how I wish my family had acted. Mine's far from perfect, so I try to make CJ's better. The beauty of fiction. -
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Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
ROTFLMFAO @Mann Ramblings would probably agree with you! -
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Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
Something a little different to spice up their lives. As for CJ, he's obviously having issues with his supervisor. That may have kept him from blowing up over Defiant's demise. -
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Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
It's one of the reasons I had him get the Porsche. All other family vehicles are American, and in my effort to differentiate Ritch, I figured he would want a foreign fast car. We know about his need for speed! LOL I had Brett rent a Lambo in California to introduce the idea of a European vehicle being acceptable, getting ready for this. This is Melissa's second appearance, and she'll show up a couple more times in the story. -
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Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
Heinrich was a replacement, but the one Brett bought for California did increase the number of vehicles. Funny thing is with most of them in D.C., they don't accumulate a lot of miles. The dads walk to work, and CJ and Owen ride public transit. Since there are no Metro stations in Georgetown, I looked in other neighborhoods when trying to find the guys a home. -
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Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
I'd been wanting to highlight animal rescue/rehab for a while and while trying to figure out details for Aunt Melissa, I figured it was a good fit. Someone down to earth like her would do well with critters. You may have noticed I make it a habit of highlighting causes and organizations I believe in. -
LMFAO I love how you distill the chapter and end up with some of my best lines which often went unnoticed. I wasn't aware Trump change the policy, but nothing that idiot did surprises me anymore. I told you about my brother giving up pots because at the time he considered applying for a job, the CIA required at least two drug-free years. I think (hope) most Federal weed restrictions will evaporate under a Biden administration. Even if Harris has to take over at some point. EDIT- You enjoying the Washington travelogue? I did say at the beginning the city would be a character in the story. As far as I recall, and you've got to realize I wrote this years ago, every state they traversed allows reciprocity when it comes to concealed weapon permits. Hell, he could carry openly in a couple of them. I think it was Elmer's glue. White and flaky after drying. Once again, "Secret Agent Man" is firmly lodged in my brain.
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Cadet Third Class • IV
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
My landlord owns a Cayenne, I've ridden in it once or twice, and it served as inspiration. If you want, I'll give you Mike's number. He likes ethnic (mostly Asian) twinks though. LOL -
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Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
I have a confession. Originally the car was Fritz. I wrote several chapters using that name, but I wasn't entirely happy with it. I borrowed/stole Heinrich from @Parker Owens current story, Double Concerto. If anyone's not following it, you should. It's pretty darn good. -
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Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
Thank you, my friend. -
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Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
Last Friday was somewhat crappy for me; today the sun's shinning a little brighter. Good way to start the weekend. -
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Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
You'll get to enjoy Christmas 2021 again in the next CJ book. It'll be from his POV, and I'll focus on different scenes. I need at least one with CJ and Randy going at it. LOL -
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Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
Thank you! I'd not written a scene with so many family members in a while, and it was fun to describe their interactions again. -
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Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
Figures you'd ask that! I wrote this a long time ago and can't honestly recall. Because there'll be another Porsche mentioned at one point, I remember omitting details so I could expand on the next one. The idea of cluttering two chapters with gearhead info was not appealing. The average word count for chapters posted runs over 5k words. Whenever I send Mann an overly long chapter, I hear him groaning all the way from Michigan. -
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Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • IV
I think for those who celebrate the holiday, a Christmas setting puts them in a positive frame of mind. Even if these guys are not very traditionally sappy about it. -
“Goddamm!” Brett ran a hand over the Cayenne’s slick, chalk-colored roof and turned to stare at César. “You knew about this, didn’t you? And you didn’t tell me?” Brett shook his head and opened the back to toss in his luggage. “I think I have a woodie.” Ritch chuckled and César groaned. “I saw the charge, knew it was a Porsche, but had no idea what model he’d gotten. I mean, all we told him was it couldn’t be a two-seater, and it had to have all-wheel drive.” Ritch would later find out Amer
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