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Glad you enjoyed it, Starry!
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Thank you! I figured most of the cast's the right age and dealing with a serious issue in a humorous way may help raise awareness.
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Muchas gracias!
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A baby CJ? Not sure the world's ready for two of them!
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Sometimes CJ missed home. Even if home was a ten-minute walk away. He sipped from the steaming mug and smirked, wondering how long he would continue thinking of his parents’ house that way. Seven months after getting married and moving into his own apartment, the townhouse on Prospect Street still beckoned. Particularly on weekend mornings. Although the setting had changed, the routine remained constant. He woke up before his husband, started the coffeemaker, and sat to page through the Wa
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CJ By Carlos Hazday - Series Discussion
Carlos Hazday replied to Carlos Hazday's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
A few readers have been clamoring for a baby, so I'm delivering tomorrow. Well, I'm not delivering a baby, but one will be in the chapter. Start guessing sex and name now!- 3,873 replies
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A reference to Liam in the previous chapter and one to Mr. Harris, his handler, in this one. Why do I suspect Corbin may not be his real name?
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Carlos Hazday replied to Carlos Hazday's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
@Reader1810 The Post wanting money may be because of your location. I think in the US they allow a small number of monthly reads. CJ's done it twice. Once at Walls where Brett came to the rescue; once at a football game where he manhandled the young guy (remember how you disliked the violent reaction?)- 3,873 replies
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Okay, I'm still interested, LOL. Liam's a small detail into whatever Corbin's running from, but you're doing well in escalating the suspense. Definitely good bones to the story. Once it's clean, it should be a total pleasure to read.
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Carlos Hazday replied to Carlos Hazday's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
Art imitates life, or life imitates art. Anyone remember CJ doing something similar to what this kid did? https://www.washingtonpost.com/education/2019/02/17/florida-sixth-grader-charged-with-misdemeanor-after-refusing-recite-pledge-allegiance/?utm_term=.af7237d38269- 3,873 replies
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As long as we pay attention, most of us improve with experience. Every time a new reader binges on my stuff, I end up reading at least part of the chapters and fixing errors. Not so much with my current book, but older stuff's riddled with typos and bad punctuation.
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I think I already mentioned this was one of the most fun chapters to write. It was fluffy, but I was able to insert a couple of serious lines in it. Stop trying to ruin my reputation!
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Parts of this chapter were sketched out on the train traveling to Florida in a great journal someone gifted me. Can you believe how long it takes me from conceptualizing to posting?
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An interesting star that intrigued me enough I'll read the next chapter. Pretty well written, the grammatical errors won't bother most readers. Unfortunately, these days I read with a mental red pencil in line; I blame it on constant harassment from my editor. The initial section describing the cabin bordered on overload; the details could have been spread out over the chapter and subsequent ones. But the mystery is the primary cause for my interest. I look forward to discovering who or what he's running from. Good job.
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Trying to catch up with your stories on the day off? I thought about you soooooo much while writing this chapter.
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@Jaro_423 I disagree. Whatever happened to Jose-Maria was not bullying. You can call it retribution, revenge, or punishment, but he was not abused without reason. I believe he earned what he was put through. We can disagree on whether it was wrong or right, but he did bring it upon himself. By not stopping the attempt to drug and rape CJ he was complicit in what his cousin initiated and just as guilty as him.
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Just trying to show CJ's not so obstinate he won't listen to advise and learn from others. The letter was the first time he poured ALL his feelings out at one time. I felt that would help him continue healing.
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Nice little example of how perseverance often pays off.
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