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Carlos Hazday

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  1. Carlos Hazday

    GMA I

    LMAO. In the next chapter...
  2. Carlos Hazday

    GMA I

    Cliffhanger? Where? Follow the story and you'll get notifications when a new chapter posts.
  3. Carlos Hazday

    GMA I

    Thanks for catching that. It's been fixed. Welcome to reading on GA, the story will continue to be posted on CRV on a delayed basis.
  4. Carlos Hazday

    GMA I

    Well, our hero and the Goat King do share initials...
  5. CJ Abelló and Owen Liston return from their honeymoon ready to tackle married life. CJ's last two years at Georgetown University are filled with family, friends, and adventure. The events carry the couple to new heights of happiness and depths of sadness. Their lives will never be the same afterward.
  6. THE SQUAD César Marcos Abelló, Jr. [CJ] – Born 1997 in Miami, Florida. Cuban-American. Georgetown University Edmund Walsh School of Foreign Service. Martial arts black belt, motorcycle enthusiast, and architecture aficionado. Owen’s husband Owen Zachary Liston [Ozzie] – Born 1992 in Pokolbin, New South Wales, Australia. Attorney with an MBA working at The Nature Conservancy. Oenophile raised in the family’s vineyard and winery. Rugby player. CJ’s husband. Bradley Thomas Kennedy [Brad
  7. This was by far my favorite CSR featured story of 2018. That's saying a lot considering I was featured earlier in the year. I gobbled up the story, left a review, and hope I one day can do the same for another installment. The Storm brothers were fun and the story deserves a sequel.
  8. Idiots follow rules without ever questioning them. I refuse to be any more of an idiot than I already am.
  9. Eight for me which is not a surprise. More than once I've skipped looking at stories on GA because of bad grammar in the description. If the author can't bother to ensure 5 likes are clean, what does that say for the rest of their story? However, I think I follow Cia's approach; I differentiate between dialogue and narration. I'm pretty sure I've used all the items in the quiz wrongly when writing dialogue. A reader once pointed out I often end sentences with a preposition. I showed him each instance he mentioned was in dialogue and that's how real people speak. As I've gained experience, there are a few rules I find silly and delight in flaunting. But I do try to do so consistently. It's MY style, not a mistake.
  10. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB XII

    @Toddten I've posted the date and a couple of sneak peeks in the CJ Discussion Thread. You should check it out and follow it. CJ and Owen return in 4 days.
  11. Carlos Hazday

    Tomorrow

    @Will Hawkins Thank you for reading and reacting. I like it when my stories create a buzz and I can make readers think.
  12. @Mikiesboy Happy birthday, kid. Hope it's a great one. Merry Christmas to you and Michael.
  13. Carry a big purse with a ham steak in a plastic baggie...
  14. Pinstripe Bowl = College football game on 12/27 at Yankee Stadium featuring the University of Miami this year. Def met my friends in NYC who I usually stay with. They'll be in Tokyo visiting their son who's there teaching English so they offered me their apartment if I decided to go up for the game. I have 2 brothers. One lives in Brooklyn and the other one in Chicago. They'll both be in South Florida this week. EDIT - my friends' apartment happens to be in the same building CJ and Owen have theirs. LOL
  15. Kids, Christmas, and sugar... You want to borrow my flask? Almost went up for the Pinstripe Bowl but decided to stay home since both brothers and the nieces and nephews are coming down this weekend. It was tempting though, I would have had a certain UES apartment to myself, the residents are spending the Holidays in Tokyo.
  16. I love feisty character. Regardless of character gender, a good story's a good story. You gave us one.
  17. Carlos Hazday

    Chapter 1

    Damn! Libertarian much? Your views on government programs, journalism, and liberal arts education comes through loud and clear. I do object to the thought there's no discrimination, even if it was dumb to think he was being picked on because of being Irish. I have no idea how far in the future this takes place, but I'm certain bigotry is alive and well. Part of human conditioning I don't see disappearing anytime soon. Fascinating political commentary, Boss.
  18. Carlos Hazday

    GMA VII

  19. Carlos Hazday

    GMA VI

  20. Thanks for reading! So, what time did you get to sleep? You only have about 130 more chapters to go.
  21. Ooops, I was sleeping when you posted this. I love it when a book enthralls me to the point sleep is an annoyance. I'm glad my little story did that for you.
  22. Carlos Hazday

    Chapter 1

    What I got out of that presentation is I'm smarter than the average breeder... 'Nuff said.
  23. Carlos Hazday

    GMA V

  24. Carlos Hazday

    GMA V

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