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Carlos Hazday

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  1. Rebuilding a house and a life simultaneously had to be a challenge. I'm sure arshall insisted the keep Sauerwood as the name. Very enjoyable, Val. Great work. FYI I haven't watched the show but I've seen promos recently for Good Bones on HGTV, where they're renovating an old Victorian with a turret. In one of the commer ials, they mentioned cladding it in copper. David would have probably approved.
  2. Kai Palakiko was at the Air Force Academy at the same time Ritch was. A couple of years older if I recall correctly. He was the first one who said he wanted to fly Air Force One.
  3. Thank you, Tony. Since the story was meant to be reachable to everyone, I didn't want to include too many details, but making Joel and Kai CJ's Air Force one pilots I figure would be noticed by regular readers. I bet his husband was surprised the first time Joel came home and said something like: Honey. we're invited to dinner at the White House on Thursday. LOL Glad you enjoyed it.
  4. I'm glad I'm not the only one who holds grudges. I never forgave my dad for selling the 1973 Pontiac Catalina I had inherited when he bought my mom a new car. So what if it only gave me 8 miles per gallon. I could fit about a dozen people in that tank.
  5. In the future, you may want to follow the seven Ps. Proper prior planning prevents piss poor performance. A character of mine has used that line several times.
  6. Carlos Hazday

    Chapter 1

    Do the King Rangers evolve into Space Rangers? You should find 15 minutes a day to write. As is always the case, your busy schedule deprives readers of your world.
  7. Carlos Hazday

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for the confusion and the ensuing chuckles! Loved it.
  8. Carlos Hazday

    Chapter 1

    A round of Bellinis on me. Very enjoyable.
  9. Screw the uniform, we'd rather see you naked.
  10. Bah, better late than never. Funny things about weddings, CJ and Owen have two they attend over the 2022 summer, and in my next story a couple gets engaged.
  11. In the last couple of years of his life, my dad would write things down, stick the note in a pocket, and promptly for get about it and whatever it was he wrote down in order to remember it. The moment I start finding notes in pockets when I do laundry, I'm checking myself into an assisted living facility.
  12. One good thing about memory loss is I often forget to complain about aches and pains.
  13. I had outlined 2 other stories about the dolphin's origins. Once Atlantis sank and they left the area, I planned a short story about their time in Portugal, and one about them finally settling in Eastern Canada. Not sure if or when I'll get to those. Aside from time constraints, I wasn't entirely happy with Explosions, and any sequels will require lots of thought. For some weird reason, I want to like my own work.
  14. Of course, these days, remembering what I had for breakfast yesterday is an accomplishment.
  15. I'm liking all these biker references.
  16. Keep that in mind. If the twins are 4, Owen's 35 the same year. I honestly dont' recall my 35th lol
  17. I think Owen put them on time out only once during the entire week.
  18. @Reader1810 Next story's also set in the future but 2027 instead of 2048. We get to meet Roo and Jeffer as 4 yo kids. The little angels.
  19. This was a boo boo.
  20. Thanks, Gary. Although a few people may have recognized some of the characters, I treated the story as if they were all new and I had to introduce them. This was written before the queen died and there were indications Harry would be folded back into the family. We were told King William would be at the wedding, and we can assume since Lilibet's in the wedding party, her parents would also be there. I was pushing reconciliation ahead of time.
  21. Thanks, 1810. Can you believe how fat time has gone by? Lol
  22. Carlos Hazday

    CDMX • XX

    @Clancy59 So... I got a notification someone had reacted to the chapter, couldn't recall what it was about, and---as happens way to often---I wound up reading the chapter and the comments. Guess what I found, ma'am? See? I know shit but my memory sucks at times.
  23. Jesus! I knew that and I go and screw it up. Embarrasing to no end considering I've corrected others when the commit the same faux pas. You may punish me.
  24. Thanks, Tor!!!
  25. Thank you, sir. Yeah, patience's not a virtue around here. LOL I think you now have a better idea of how I go about getting stories ready. I'll write, then tinker until right before publishing. LOL
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