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Everything posted by Carlos Hazday
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But we don't know that! There may not even be a connection. CJ's speculating and both Jimmy and Jake appear more interested in his reasoning than the conclusion. And they're silent on what the CIA thinks, although Jimmy produced a picture taken in Panama, suggesting any Chinese delegation could be under surveillance. I wouldn't dare trying to figure out all the interactions and intricacies involved in that business.
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How about if I just carry a banana in my pocket?
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Professional Association of Diving Instructors. The people who teach you how to dive and give you a card to prove it. THE FOLLOWING IS SUBJECT TO CHANGE This is my current outline for chapter 3 of a book I haven't even started writing... Wed, 22 Jun 2022 Fly in to Providence • Drive to Newport • Registration • Dinner • Drinking Thu, 23 Jun 2022 Sailing • Clambake • Drinking • CJ & Owen's 4th Wedding Anniversary Fri, 24 Jun 2022 Golf • Rehearsal Dinner • Drinking Sat, 25 Jun 2022 Sightseeing • Grooming • Wedding • Drinking Sun, 26 Jun 2022 Fly to Washington
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I wasn't sure what emoji to react with. I'm not a fan of Will's, so I generally skim over references to his work. Days after taking the final exam for a couple of college English courses, I forgot all the Shakespeare content.
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I was harking back to the previous chapter and their time in Manhattan!
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My intent from day one was to have as varied a cast as possible. The Elite, The Squad, and The Wing were all diverse. So are the newer members of the supporting cast. I firmly believe exposure to different races and cultures enhances our lives. And since CJ's the idealized individual he is...
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Jack... Jack, where are you? Since visiting the place near me, I've been paying closer attention and noticing them more. There was a single yellow one fluttering around the other day and I stood watching until it left. You have a decent idea of what's coming. I keep wanting to write shorts and everything seems to balloon. Not sure how I kept the last one you read so concise. Shorter stories mean more frequent posts and that's been my goal over the past year or so.
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Nah... I'm still not happy with what I wrote before. I know where I would go next, but it might mean having to justify some changes to what I previously wrote. The time's not there right now. Anyway, my previous reply was wrong. Dragon's still in DC; Danno sold the bar and moved. Time for my nap.
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The first remark proves the second one. I think even in their 30s, I'd probably not have the energy for anything except a nap.
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Yep... but Dragon sold his bar and moved to Hawaii. Interestingly enough he gets at least a mention in two separate upcoming stories.
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Probably less after finding out about the contribution made in his name!
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Ozzie the Aussie (I'm so glad I kept the nickname in spite of Mann hating it) is no slouch. He can sling one-liners just doesn't do it as often as CJ or Brett
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But, but, but,,, Jose Maria? Hi, it's Carlos. You know those pills your cousin crushed into a drink a few years ago? You think I could get a couple of them? How's that for a blast from the past?
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One theory: The Chinese assume the CIA will figure out the new guy's a spy sooner than later and decide on a preemptive strike. In the process, the send the Americans a message, letting them know they're on to their newest boy toy, CJ. Problem is they got it wrong. I can add more twisties if those aren't sufficient.
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Sounds like your experience was better than mine. You're most definitely forgiven. After all, I do have a shitload of named characters in the series. Funny thing's I introduced Elpidio first because I planned to use him repeatedly. He sort of became their go-to bartender/server for gatherings in their apartment. LOL - it's too hard with higher prices to land on a specific number. The damn dial moves too fast these days. Well, thinking about it, since next chapter involves Chipper in Mexico, I could end the chapter with the explosion at the concert venue and wrap things up in another story in a year or so. Waddayathink?
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We're sorry but your attempt to modify the physics of the CJverse has failed. You're not an authorized admin.
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LMAO - We're still in Mexico and you're already thinking about what's next? Breathe, smell the roses, relax and enjoy the story. If I crash my Harley tonight and die, y'all will have to hope someone on staff publishes the chapters I've loaded. The rest... well, it'll be up to my heirs.
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Our man's a PADI certified diver.
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I recently mentioned to Myr I would drive traffic for a few more months. CDMX began posting last November as 6 mos is long enough to keep one story going. You, better than most, know I don't like to post unless everything's ready, and any longer than six months would probably need about a year off from posting. So yes, I'm impatient to be done with Mexico. There's something quasi related to CJ coming in June and again in July. We'll see if I can have anything else ready by August.
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How did you get a picture of the Chinese tattoo artist in my upcoming story?
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Did you see my comment about never having visited Butterfly World before even though it's just a couple of miles north? I did it for Liebe!
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Ritch may just get spanked, Air Force cadet or not.
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CJ ability to connect the dots and reach reasonable conclusions will serve him well in the future. And not necessarily in politics only. If Cesar has a knack for investments, I think CJ inherited some of the critical thinking that helps make them money.
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I suspect they may experience similar encounters in the future. Since the CIA declassified at least some of the Domogarov situation, and CJ's involvement was obvious, he's on a few radar screens right now.
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When's your birthday? I expect an invite. https://www.callawaygardens.com/the-gardens/places-to-explore/day-butterfly-center/
