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Carlos Hazday

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  1. When I published Singer, I promised regular updates on Chipper. Just keeping my word.
  2. LMAO
  3. Aussie's come up with great nicknames. LOL
  4. Carlos Hazday

    CDMX • Epilogue

    “LIEBE! CJ!” Owen’s arrival and shouts coincided with Lincoln groaning and rolling onto his back. “Oshieee…” Liebe’s cry was accompanied by sobs, tears streaking down her face, and snot streaming from her nose. She crawled a couple of inches before Owen scooped her into his arms. “Are you okay, Munchkin? Are you hurt anywhere?” The girl wailed louder when she noticed her other father laying in a pool of blood underneath her kidnapper. “Ceej! He’s hurt! Help him, Oshie.” “Some
  5. Dakota sounds like a good ole Southern boy. Great use of the prompt and writing what you know and hear.
  6. I wonder how that name came about. @drpaladin, you're always good with word roots. Ideas?
  7. Tomorrow morning around this time. Around lunchtime for you.
  8. Leave him alone. He's busy designing the cliffhanger one.
  9. I tend to expand on details in the comments. Sometimes it's just to clarify a point, others I'm simply wanting to drop hints of what's coming.
  10. LOL - Go back and read what I said to spark Frosenblum's comment.
  11. You can find out details I reveal in the comments not included in the chapter. We're now over 200.
  12. It may take a while... I'm thinking of recycling Northman when CJ becomes ambassador to Cuba.
  13. It's okay to be upset with those you love... I KNOW you love me.
  14. I waited a bit to mention the publishing day, and figured it'd get lost amongs the other comments. You're the first one to react.
  15. Hey! I spilled blood in this chapter. I'd like to point out @Kitt also pointed out your serial killer approach to characters.
  16. I have most of those details outlined. I've delayed further Squad spinoffs due to lack of time and not wanting to write about them in the same time frame. Because I'm working on two multi-chapter stories set in 2027, I may have to at least start Biker and Baker, posting the opening chapter then waiting for the main story to catch up. I did that with Thiago and I hesitate to have multiple incomplete stories. Something to figure out over the next few months.
  17. YOU GET ME! LMAO Glad to see someone appreciates the finer points of keeping readers on the edge of their seats.
  18. I'm going back to short stories for a bit. No more weekly postings for the next 3 or 4 months.
  19. Don't worry, Jeff. I'll take the blame. I may have tried to direct attention elsewhere before dropping the hammer.
  20. I'll assume you're exhausted the supply of stories here on GA. There's so much older stuff we rarely hear about.
  21. We could reach 9 by the end of today... EDIT - And we've now reached 8 pages of comments. I'm starting to think it might be a record after all.
  22. Sounds like CJ's fixation with asshole. LOL
  23. I just looked and this is the most comments any chapter in this story has received. And in less than 12 hours! It goes to prove when one gets readers energized, the become active participants. And it's why I preach quality over quantity and speed. If we take our time crafting a quality story, we'll be rewarded by readers enjoying themselves and letting us know. There's got to be a chapter with more comments. We have some authors who are excellent at starting conversations in their comments sections. EDIT LMAO, we just hit 8 pages.
  24. Welcome to my world! And I didn't think you'd read all the comments. This chapter may have one or two more than usual. If and when you start at the beginning, now that you've read how I currently write, you may be surprised at the change. Positive, I hope. Stupid does as stupid is. Or something like that. I clear up loose end in the epilogue coming on Sunday.
  25. Not sure yet. Let's see what my mood's like after tonight's basketball game.
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