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  1. Carlos Hazday
    Yeah, but Parker at least made me think I was safe because he used rhyme. That's a good point about the vests. I really enjoyed every comment suggesting Northman would be involved in the climax. Hopefully readers won't mind I ended his appearances with CJ calling him an asshole.
  2. Carlos Hazday
    Y'all are forgetting I'm good at delayed gratification. The longer I hold out clearing loose ends, the more you guys appreciate it. I know you do! LOL
  3. Carlos Hazday
    I see you and @JayT share the repetition bug. LOL
  4. Carlos Hazday
    I got readers attention didn't I?
  5. Carlos Hazday
    LMAO - Damn college kids are so touchy... Jimmy, Spike.. Linc's out of commission for a bit. Could the two of you send a couple of drones to control the mob?
  6. Carlos Hazday
    I'm getting too predictable. LOL
  7. Carlos Hazday
    I publish chapters around 6 am. You may want to sign into GA overthe weekend in case I decide to post the ending instead of waiting until next month. Oh, and you're repeating yourself. LOL
  8. Carlos Hazday
    He's big so he may be able to survive even if he wasn't. Or could he?
  9. Carlos Hazday
    Most of the aftermath's details will be revealed in the next chapter. A new character but not the one most readers suspected. I think Domogarov was the leading candidate for a while and Northman was atop the list of suspects.
  10. Carlos Hazday
    More like a hundred, but who's counting? LOL
  11. Carlos Hazday
    Really? Poetry in the comments? I'm flattered! Nobody's ever written me a poem before. Bring on the pitchforks, the tar, and the feathers... Where did I put that .38 again?
  12. Carlos Hazday
    Time to call the morgue and check the hospitals! Thank you, I'm glad my efforts paid off. I think I mentioned Liebe would get kidnapped to Mann even before I wrote her birth. This has been years in the making and the details changed along the way. As nervous as I was about it, the chapter's reception has been everything I hoped for. I'm glad I was able to surprise readers and do so in an enjoyable way. You guys are the best!
  13. Carlos Hazday
    I like to live dangerously.... I should have ended the story with this chapter and waited a while to show the aftermath.
  14. Carlos Hazday
    LMAO I think I recognize that cliff! One more to go, buddy.
  15. Carlos Hazday
    Time for breakfast!
  16. Carlos Hazday
    Thank you! I've been nervous about this chapter like I was with the one at the Russian embassy. In both instances I tried a slow burn, getting everything in without rushing to the conclusion. I'm glad the pacing worked. Let me think about when I want to post the Epilogue.
  17. Carlos Hazday
    Thank you! The entire story has been posted since February, so all the next chapter needs is someone to hit the publish button.
  18. Carlos Hazday
    We'll revisit Ritch's reaction to the news and his trip to see his brother and niece. I don't think he appreciated being kept in the dark.
  19. Carlos Hazday
    I'd like everyone to know Jose Antonio was aware Liebe was kidnapped. I screwed up when he beta read a future story and I forgot I referenced this thing. Thanks for keeping quiet, Jose. Northman's head must be ready to explode after CJ told him to fuck off. I kept their interactions free of cursing, which had to be an effort for CJ, so when the explosion came it'd be more shocking. I've been on a character recycling kick lately; we might see or hear from Northman again.
  20. Carlos Hazday
    LOL They didn't have a dog in Mexico, so I had to use the kid.
  21. Carlos Hazday
    The Mexico incident was mentioned in Hail to the Chief. That was published in June 2019. I tend to use cliffies sparingly, only when they feel right, and this is one of those instances.
  22. Carlos Hazday
    Yeah, but plenty of readers thought whatever happened would involve Domogarov or Northman. Elpidio was the first new character I introduced in this story on purpose. Then I kept him in the background and concentrated on the other two idiots. I'm amazed at myself for holding out for 36 chapters before the shit hit the fan. We know he writes a book about their experience; let's hope Hollywood comes calling.
  23. Carlos Hazday
    Aren't you impressed I managed to keep the details quiet for a bit? It wasn't easy deflecting when some guesses came close.
  24. Carlos Hazday
    This too shall pass, Tony. Keep breathing for a bit longer.
  25. Carlos Hazday
    LMFAO For three years you guys have been hounding me about the 'Mexico incident,' claiming it was a cliffhanger. I figured you guys wanted a real cliffie! 🐐
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