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Grammar Guide 21 - The End of the Sentence
Carlos Hazday commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Yeah, but we need consistency. One fix here and there ain't enough. -
Grammar Guide 21 - The End of the Sentence
Carlos Hazday commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Thanks for the fix and the lesson... It's time to brush off the cobwebs and offer your services. There's always a lack of editors around here. -
Into the ninth month of CJ’s posting to the American embassy in Mexico City, he and Owen felt comfortable navigating life in their temporary home. Tuesday nights, CJ sparred at the Embassy with marines, Owen practiced on Thursdays and played rugby most Sundays, and Liebe flourished while spending large amounts of time with both her fathers. It was a comfortable routine. They tried to expose their daughter to as much of the city as they could, including visits to historical structures and n
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argentiferous - Word of the Day - Thu May 26, 2022
Carlos Hazday commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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argentiferous - Word of the Day - Thu May 26, 2022
Carlos Hazday commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Grammar Guide 21 - The End of the Sentence
Carlos Hazday commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Been there, done that. I've faced a similar issue when ending sentences with an ellipse. A certain author/editor hated them, removed them, and I had to sneak them back in when he wasn't looking... -
I'm expecting a massacre. Which is why I forge ahead with CJ's more equitable future. The whole world faces changes in the foreseeable future. CJ said something about being a globalist and believing in free trade to a point. McDonald's and Starbucks, along with others exiting Russia entirely, are but the tip of the iceberg. Globalization is here to stay, but I suspect there'll be big changes.
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Because those power hungry mongrels care more about staying in power and lining their pockets than in governing!
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Although I've backed off a bit from using real people, I would enjoy killing off a Justice or two. As long as I don't have real people do anything that wouldn't be in character, there won't be legal repercussions. Additionally, that freedom of speech some government officials praise so often, allows to me to say almost anything. As long as I don't personally threaten a SCOTUS member, writing one died in a horrific way might be gruesome but it's my right to use my imagination any way I see fit.
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I really need Edwards gone, but I think I want to keep him around because he pisses Thomas off. I'm leaning towards restoring sanity to Associate Justice Joseph Bradley's seat. It was the one Thurgood Marshall occupied. Of course, if I free that up, I may just have to take a spouse out at the same time. just for kicks and giggles. Last time I wrote about a Supreme Court Justice it was Scalia and we know what happened to him shortly after my story was published.
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Hey! At least Australia dumped their right-wing PM. I suspect Liebe won't be a fan of pantyhose or too much makeup either. Can we say tomboy until she realizes she can get away with murder by flirting?
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GA's Newest Promising Author: astone2292
Carlos Hazday commented on Graeme's blog entry in Gay Authors Archive
Congratulations, Aaron! I hope you realize this is one step with more ahead. I told you before I saw promise in your writing, and I'm glad others agree. Looking forward to your future work! Papi Carlos- 36 comments
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Thank you! You mean to say I broke new ground? It's a lovely day for that stroll...
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Too bad... thirty can be scary, but it's really nothing. Trust me. Now that I've double that age I know I was just an immature kid at the time.
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Damn! I wrote two concerts for this book. I need a break. As for Peter,apparently he's apparently settled into his job. And I'm sure he realized the relationship his client has with CJ and Owen takes priority over most anything else.
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CJ and Chipper will be friends forever. We know in 2040/2041 they'll be rivals to see who's more popular. Pssst - Chipper wins thanks to his international following.
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Like I already mentioned, there's a piano back in Washington waiting for her. But last time I saw Liebe, she was playing castanets...
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Is that based on personal experience? There's a piano back in Washington, maybe lessons would help her forget about a drum kit. I made a big deal out of 3 CJ birthdays, but this is the first of three stories where I'll help a couple of other characters celebrate.
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I do too, but I couldn't keep up. How're you gonna handle the groups. Some might even include women! <gasp>
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Glad you enjoyed it, Theo!
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I should have been that lucky. The guy I was dating dumped my ass 2 days after returning form Key West. My goal was to provide a little justification for both CJ's and Peter's actions. The former can be insensitive while not meaning to, and the latter has that damn Sequoia parked on his shoulder because he was bullied at a younger age. They find a balance in their relationship... CJ restrains himself a bit and Peter learns to give back. Amazing what compromise and dialogue can accomplish. Scary how alike we think at times. I outlined something where Liebe was pissed at the Australian ambassador in the US, threw a party, and invited the entire embassy staff except the ambassador. Not sure I'll use it, but you never know.
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House parties with live music were always the best!
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Why, you little troublemaker. LMAO I know everyone's missing him, so Steven returns in the next chapter.
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We now have an idea of where Chipper will be for the next year or so. I think the next time we bump into him is November 2023 when he celebrates his birthday with a concert at the Air Force Academy. Unless I decide to write about his whole tour, which I don't think I have the stomach for. All those late nights at my age aren't a good idea.
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Thanks, Tor.
