The_Jordanator

This is my second-best story you've done, Comsie. This is brilliant! I hate to be one of those blood-thirsty vultures who crave for more chapter updates, but the truth is I do. A LOT! I guess you can expect that from an eager fan-base. So maybe more frequent updates on this please? And maybe for 'My only escape' while you're at it (this is my favourite of yours). Update soon! Jordan

Awesome! I love this story, please keep working on your captivating and purely brilliant writing! Don't leave me hanging!

O,,,,M....G! I am moved so much by that story, it was legendary! It's not just the typical "love-at-first-sight" story that we all enjoy, but it goes to another degree, where the character has done it all before (apart from sex) with his ex and when they'd split up, he was really torn, even so after he mets Brice. I really thought Brice and Danny would never get back together, I even thought that Adam and Danny would get back together as boyfrends! But no, you did an awesome job with the ending, and it was really moving. The emotion in it was intense. And even better, you finished it! This story doesn't need to go on, otherwise it turns pointlessly pornographic. This is really good! Thank you for another marvellous story!

Another great work of art from the brilliant Comsie himself! Great job, but I STILL WANT MORE!!!

whoops, my mistake, youve started this story 3 years ago. Please keep writing Mr Comsie!

I am new to this site and have read the GFD and a few other stories, but the thing about this story that stands out to me is this: That is one of, if not the most, best gay story ever that I have read. Mr Comsie, i have to say that this story engaged me so much, hell I was finding it hard to get to sleep at night because I was thinking about what was going to happen next! The thing with this story is that it has so much emotion in it, it frustates you but excites you at the same time! It is brilliant! The one problem with it is that I wanted more. I didnt want it to end at chapter 17. I liked how Brody and Zac would be boyfriends forever but i kinda wanted to know or find out a few things. What would happen if Zac told his mum what his father was doing to him, what if he told Brody? I was hoping that the father would get busted or something that would keep the story alive. Maybe the Holly girl (is it holly?) would ask out Brody if it happened. What would he say? That's the kind of I wanted to find out. I know you wrote this what, 3 years ago? but even so, i still love it! The age of the two boys was more "appealing" to me aswell, i would most likely read stories of yours that included people in the ages of 14 and 15. Just my opinion anyway. Even if you dont plan on writing more of this story, please keep the reviews of mine and others in mind. Comicality - I give you a big well done!