I made a tiny-tiny mistake in chapter one and mixed up religious denominations, It was supposed to be Baptist... so thus the change / revision.
Now let's see which one of you spots WHO Kenny's Dad might be.
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Moms are far too smart for their own good, at times. Or at least they thought they were. Steve’s Mom was a clerk at the Merrickville courthouse, while his Dad was a security guard that worked on one of those heavy armoured trucks that picked up and refilled ATMs. All body armour, shotguns, and mess with me if you dare.
So yes, Steve was engaged in a life-or-death struggle with his Mom that morning about keeping his precious Motorcycle.
“I need it to get to school!” Steve prote
Yeah, as I said, I really struggled with having him do this.
I think @Jeff Burton was right to push me into letting it happen. It evolves the character and let's me tackle a very tricky and challenging problem. The fact that Billy was a witness, the boy Hugo raised accusing him of being a hypocrite is a hammer blow.
I think Hugo is in a bit of shock here. It's one thing to shoot people in combat... another thing entirely to shoot an unarmed old woman in cold blood. (From Hugo's perspective and sensibilities) He's going to struggle with this, has to. It wouldn't be the Hugo we love if he just shrugged it off. He needs to forgive himself what he did, and that takes a beat or two.
I'd like to sincerely thank @Jeff Burton for his wise advice, and help with this book. It was much stronger, and thus better because of his guidance.
Check out his writing, it's exceptional. Nicest guy as well.
we need to trust that Hugo raised Billy right.
If he raised him right, And brave boys are Wise, and Loyal, and Kind...
Well I have faith in Hugo, even when Hugo doesn't.
Stoker ain't about t' loose 'is 'usband.
That man will go and find him, and a little Monster with the Aggregate of Self, might find himself Gibbs-slapped until he does as he is told.
Nothing worse than an enemy you created yourself.
Hugo made this one, Reagan just seeks to use the best weapon he can to deal with the AOI, AOM, and AOS and what's better than someone who knows Hugo.
And Miller, Stoker's going to get him, I don't know how, or when, but we all know WHY
Down Stairs – 1953 – November 25th
The air, thick with the sharp scent of gunpowder and the metallic tang of blood, hung heavy and cold. Splintered wood, shattered stone from the planter, and upturned earth lay scattered across the polished floor like the remains of a violent storm. In the center of the carnage, the brass elevator doors gleamed, a silent, unblinking promise of escape. Hugo, his body a trembling testament to his ordeal, stood over the still form of a
:: High fives his Ottawa Bro :: See, some one gets it And besides, more South Carleton High! Now to figure out how to Merrick - the - ville outta this story
This story is now complete.
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I appreciate it, I know this one's been really heavy