Cachondeo

I’m willing to bet Mr Goldman’s a self-made millionaire and that deranged bitch spawned him. I guess I always suspected either Biily or Rhys had overheard Mason talking to Toby at some point or other but honestly even if they had I never thought they would believe it to be true... I mean It’s not every day that you meet people who can actually communicate with the dead, is it? Now who Mr/Mrs. gloved hands could be, hmm? We’ll have to wait and see... Write faster dear Mrs. author, you!!🙏🏻🙏🏻

Yes I was ecstatic to be right and rightfully pumped! Also, I’m relived Po is one of the good guys💪🏻 Now I need Rhys to turn up safe and sound and for him to finally move on and smell the roses, otherwise I’m afraid Mason will make himself scarce once Toby’s murder is solved; he’s adamant Rhys’s still in love with Toby (and maybe he’ll always have a special place in his heart) but I think he’s developed deep feelings for Mason too and contrary to our departed friend, the bodyguard/detective/ghost whisperer is very much alive. ...also what’s with Mason suddenly seeing ghosts? has he always have the gift and somehow repressed it? did his adopted mother also know about it? So many questions 😅

I too have developed a soft spot for Po and it would break my heart if it turned out he was somewhere involved in Toby's murder. We’ll have to wait. What did Toby had on Levine that got him killed? It has to be something big...

Wasn’t he fetching the saddle though?👅

...also, spoiler alert: murder weapon? “...looking at the case in which an arrangement that appeared close to a part of a pool table, complete with a pair of cue sticks crossing each other, laid. “For instance, this piece was inspired by the way French nobles used to play pool at the end of the seventeenth century. Certainly, the cue sticks were nothing like Mason knew. For a moment, he stared at the curved head of one stick. In the milky red lights, the brass appeared stained, old.” Hint, hint!

So slow...sigh Love the characters though

agh...too much suspense!! trhow us a bone, wil you? please!!

I loved the story the first time around but yeah, I have to agree that Jason needed to hear those three words face to face. All throughout this story feels like watching a movie (Jason’s thoughts and reactions intermixed in the dialogue were a gem and so funny and endearing) and I truly loved every minute/word of it. Thank you!!

If you enjoyed this, check lomax61, he's also a wonderful author and his stories are great. Cheers!🙌

Me thinks Bill is some kind of private eye or at least an undercover copper of sorts but there's definitely more to him that what meets the eye!

Yes!! It reminds me of The Maltese Falcon for some reason (troubled and fragile little Rhys being the damsel in distress, or maybe that's poor Mason after all? 😂😂

Well since the story is told from Mason's perspective, either he has at least another personality he doesn't know about or he is definitely not involved in Toby's murder; as to the rest...all seem shady even Rhys!

Thank you for taking the time to explain it to me; also: "Cut out the Gay shit?!"...rude!! The nerve on some people😡 Best wishes😘

Hi, I really enjoy your work! What do you mean by separating MM fron fantasy? Isn't it all fiction with Lgbt charcters? Just curious...

I say like in any good mistery worth of A. C., the murderer is the butler.; now we need to find that butler😅 ...and even if Levine turns out not to be the culprit, I still won't like the guy one jot!

Yess, pretty please do (with a cherry con top!)🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

I thought Klaus had come to terms with the fact that he was in ove with Jake...? Seriously, how thick can he be? Not liking the guy so much right now😒 He'll learn soon enough It's funny because I'm reading this for the seconf time and I still get so frustrated😹

Yeah, and it’s so descriptive as well! Really on point and funny/creepy; not only hangovers can give you barf-breath but also sometimes you’re so pooped you go to bed without brushing your teeth and maybe you had some unsavoury delicatessen the night before and/or you have gastric reflex (this is getting quite technical 😂) or you chain smoke and next morning your mouth, your whole throat really! feels and tastes like a trash bin or as you so eloquently put it: as if an army of stray cats had been pissing in your mouth the entire night. Greening like crazy over here! Your characters are so likeable and they grow on you so damn quick (yeah, even ice cube Klaus) and that to me is the true seal of and author: creating whole universes within a paragraph

"He felt like an army of stray cats had been pissing in his mouth for the entire night." That cracked me up so much I almost died from laughter!!😝

My guess?: Toby is the ghost and Rhys was somehow involved in his untimely death or at least that’s what he thinks and feels guilty about it. We shall see🤷🏻‍♀️

Found a typo in case you want to fix it: “Jett took care of it. You should have seen your boyfriend, telling the Z brothers off for you. I should have recorded that stuff. If you hadn’t been in love with him already, you would have fallen for...” Loving it so far! Cheers!

Hey Brian, It would mean the world to me if you decided to continue this story😟. It seems the only two things I enjoyed during this confinement are music and books, and I really enjoy your writing style, so please pick it up. Is this child going to be the end of them? Is Anna evil intended? Have we seen the last of Kit or is he coming for Collin? What about that suspicious Santa? Come on man, have a heart!!

Once again I beg you to continue with this story🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇

This is the most romantic statement I've ever read

Hi, THAW means The House Always Wins. I also enjoyed Confounded1. They are both on this site, look'em un. Great Stories!