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Caz Pedroso
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Six months later “If you ever touch me again I will kill you. Do you understand?” Dillon yelled at Lor, as another pain ripped through his abdomen. The pains had started the day before, right in the middle of a training session Dillon was giving Ziel. It felt like the baby was trying to push its way through Dillon’s stomach to get out. All Dillon could think of was a sci-fi film he had seen once, and the alien being born hadn’t been a nice sight. Ziel had sent for Lor immediately, and they h
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Oh yes, I learned my lesson last time I left that part out. One chapter to go.
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Still one more chapter to go. Hope you enjoy
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“Listen very carefully, I will say this only once,” Cade addressed the crowd of reporters standing in the small front yard. “My mate is deaf and mute. He can read lips and either sign to you or send his thoughts into your mind. If anyone here doesn’t wish for him to ‘speak’ to their mind leave now.” No one moved so Cade continued, “Now, this is how this is going to work. I am going to give you a statement, then my mate will. Then and only then will we be answering your questions. As you can se
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The day of the departure dawned clear and sunny. Dillon was standing at the window of their room on the ship and Lor was watching him from the bed. The view was good for Lor as Dillon was naked, just how he always liked to see his mate. They had decided to sleep on the ship as Mora wanted to be able to protect Ziel better and everyone wanted to be able to leave if they felt threatened again in any way. The last three days had been busy making sure everything was done and the hope of an early de
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Sorry I often keep my chapters short. I find it easier to move the story along that way. I am trying out different ways of working stories though...so watch this space... for the comment
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a writer always likes to hear that they've made their characters likable.
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Yep, a lot of governments often want to experiment first and ask questions about morals later. for the comments
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Oh yes , I remember the first time seeing the screen and the first time I heard her heartbeat too, it was so fast... Explaining to Lor? Well...he'll get there
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Well, I can't tell but I am enjoying the speculations. Thanks for the comments
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Glad you like the twist. Hope you like where the story goes next.
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Of course, women are always right MPreg was requested by the prompt writer when we spoke about the story content. Glad you're enjoying it so far.
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Glad you liked Lor's reaction. I was going to go further but it didn't really fit. Thanks for the review
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Well, why not check out some of the other great stories on the site and the time will go before you know it
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I won't beat you up as long as the next prompt ha some major feel good vibes to it. Great prompt piece but I hope you don't leave it there. *Hint*
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Lor watched as Fred waved a small bottle under Vincent’s nose that made him start coughing. He helped Vincent sit up and then looked at Fred. The doctor seemed to find something immensely amusing. “What is going on? And what is a granddad?” Lor asked. He was exhausted and close to sleep, but he wanted to know that Dillon was okay. Fred looked at Lor. “It means you’re going to be a father. I assume you know what that means?” Lor stared at Fred and then turned to stare at Dillon. A father? But
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Lor was running behind Vincent when he heard Mora and Ziel starting to argue. “You are not coming with us. You will go back to the ship with the twins. I need to know you are safe,” Mora was saying. “But Dillon is my friend also. I want to help him as I know he would help me if I needed him to.” Lor saw Mora stop and pull Ziel into a hug, “I know, my mate, but I must insist. Please go to the ship with Dyra and Dyla. Help them to check the ship and make sure we have everything we will need for
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The most shocking thing is, that it doesn't actually shock me that this venture was a success. These days there seems to be a market out there for anything and everything. The only limitation is a persons imagination.
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Ha, I had to reread the chapter to see what cliffhanger everyone was referring to I'm glad I decided to post every day and weekly like i was going to
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Glad you liked it hope you like the rest. Thank you for the review.
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Now, that would be telling, , I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
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Dillon woke up slowly. He shook his head trying to clear the remnants of sleep. He realized he was lying down and tried to bring his hand up to rub his eyes only to find his arms were shackled to the surface he was on. Checking the rest of his body, he found his ankles were shackled too and there was a band across his middle pinning him down completely. He considered calling out to find out who was holding him but decided to wait and see what happened first. It wasn’t long before there was the
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Thank you so much all comments are gratefully received.
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