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WHAT?!?!?! End it like that?!?! I'm sitting here with my jaw having driven a hole through the floor and into the slab under my house! I want to know what happens next like now!!!
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a Lovely fitting end to the story. Well done!
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Chapter 6 - The Prince Defends Himself
WriterJT commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 6 - The Prince Defends Himself
The developments in this chapter should make things interesting in the palace for a while. I can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully the King and Queen will take some time to think about how they screwed the pooch on this parental moment and try and make things right with their son. -
Another Amazing chapter... It would be interesting to see how Hector is handling the Justice sized mass dropped into his world. With all of the interactions between both men, there have got to be cracks forming in their "masks". The drawn between them is palpable, Once they crack I think it's going to be BIG!
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Amazing ending to a wonderful story! I look forward to the sequel!
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Well I'll be damned if this chapter doesn't make it seem like a final goodbye, so sad!
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I know it's not going to be the last we see of Reagan and Derek, but if we never were to see them again it would be too soon! I look forward to the postmortem discussion with Noah's Library crew! That should be fun!
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Always ending a chapter like that... I want more now!!!! LOL simply amazing chapter I love love LOVE the characters!
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AMAZING Story!!!! Two things: One, I want my own Meg, she is just awesome! the second thing is that I hope there is more coming! I want to see what happens next!
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Chapter 5 - The Prince's Fire
WriterJT commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 5 - The Prince's Fire
What an evil way to end that chapter Andy!!! I look forward to the next chapter and seeing just what he walked in on! -
I am absolutely loving this story. I can't wait for more. It will be interesting to see how things are going to develop. I look forward to more chapters!
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Just WOW.... You know how to craft a scene! Utterly floored, another amazing chapter
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The morning after that our night out on the town was not pleasant. Sure I had gone drinking a few times but that night I pushed myself WAY beyond my normal limits. My head hurt for hours and I couldn’t stand the sight of food any more complex than dry toast. Excedrin & water were my best friends for the first few hours. Of course I also made myself scarce from Kasey as well. I’d come to realize when we were at the bar that I wasn’t going to be as okay with Kasey staying with me as I original
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Another amazing chapter! I can't wait for more!
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Another great chapter... I am full on hooked to this story. I can't wait to see what is in Jason & Toshiro's future! I really hope that this isn't the end to them.
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I love this first chapter. Great way to set up the characters. :-) Can't wait to read more
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Amazing chapter!!! Loving it!
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*picks jaw up off the floor* That was a fabulous chapter... I feel almost scandalous having read that!
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AMAZING chapter.... Is it bad that I want more now?! Such a good story!
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Great start to what looks like it will be a promising story. I can't wait to see what is to come next. Celethiel makes a good point about long detailed explanations, they do break the moment a little bit. While Emmett may notice all of these things he probably really only picks up on a small portion of everything he sees. Plus narrowing down what he may pick out of each area also helps develop the character. :-)
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Looks like the story has a promising start. I look forward to seeing how it unfolds from here.
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Kasey's Journal Joural Entry # 821 Well after a few months of going back and forth with things, I finally did it. I caved in to my therapist's advice and took a couple weeks from work before I go deciding on the job offers I've been presented and face matters head on. I still can't believe I'm keeping these journal entries going after 8 years, I'll give it to all of the doctors I’ve seen through the years it has helped quite a bit. Of course all of this writing does no good if I don't actually d
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Thanks Knotme. You're right on the nickname. For me I prefer writing Kasey over K.C. to go along with that I have more freedom to toy around with altering the nickname when it's written out as Kasey. I know my first chapter was rough, I'll definitely give it a comb over in the next day or so and should have chapter 2 in the pipeline for next week. Thanks for the feedback, and the pressure! LOL :-)
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I'll be going into the past of their childhoods somewhere in the next couple of chapters. I think chapter 2 is pretty well blocked out, but I'll take a look at things and see what I can drum up. If not chapter 2, definitely chapter 3.
