Twisted_Dreemz

Oh yes. Especially a door like this one. Thanks as always for reading and commenting. Always appreciated!

Indeed...how did that happen? And Glen is okay. He just didn't want to go back to school and face questions. Thanks as always for reading and for commenting.

“I knew you shouldn’t have gone to school today. I just knew it.” Grandie remarked, as herself and Nancy rode home in the car. “It was a dream, Grandie. It wouldn’t have mattered if I was in school or not.” Nancy replied. “And what were you dreaming about anyway? The teacher made it sound like you were hysterical.” For a moment, Nancy hesitated to answer. Did she tell the truth, and sound like she was a few cans short of a six-pack? Or, did she leave out the crazy part?

One week and a few days later, there were still more questions than there were answers regarding the Gray Case. The captain of the Springwood police force did not like that one bit, especially not after having specialized teams come in to confirm that by all intents and purposes, the story was what the story was. The results of the DNA and substance test that’d been performed on Tina were heavily anticipated to shine a bright light on things. But they had only served to confuse and disapp

Indeed. The plot doth thicken. Thanks as always for reading and for your comment. Feedback is the lifeblood.

Lieutenant Donald Thompson of the Springwood Police Department was just getting back into his patrol vehicle when, over the police radio, he heard two paramedic units announce their arrival at a residence. When he heard the address of the residence, his heart skipped two beats. The address was Lynn Gray’s. Instead of getting on the police radio to ask for more information, Donald reached for his personal phone to call Nancy. As he was pressing the button to dial her number, the screen shif

Thank you both very much for your comments and for reading. I'm always hoping I'm on the right path with this tale.

The sound of something clattering against something else roused Tina from her sleep. Not sure what the sound was, or if she’d even heard it in the first place, she listened for it to happen again. After a short while of waiting, the sound didn’t present itself. Thinking nothing more of it, Tina allowed herself to doze back off. The clattering happened again. Tina’s eyes snapped back open. She was sure that she’d heard the sound this time. She looked over at Rod to make sure that he wasn’t

Two weeks later, on Friday night, Glen, along with Nancy and Rod, were spending the night at Tina’s house for a first time ever event. A full night together in a house with no parents at all. At least no parents there physically. Tina’s mother, Lynn, would be keeping a remote eye on all of them. Initially Lynn, had felt very unsafe in her house without her husband there after their divorce. So as a result, she’d gone the full gamut with security. Cameras. Motion detectors. Sensors. Lights.

...That's a very interesting idea. Thanks as always for reading and for commenting.

Having to physically go to the very place that she’d just had a nightmare about didn’t help Nancy in forgetting the experience at all. An unshakable sense of paranoia hovered over her all throughout the church service as she hoped (and prayed), that none of the speakers, especially Pastor Kincaid, brought up the topic of sin. Nancy also found that more than once she had to stop herself from looking around at the other congregation members for any signs of smoke coming off their person.

Many thanks for your comment and for reading. I'm very glad you liked this chapter. It was a hot time!

Sunday morning meant getting up and going to Springwood Baptist Church’s 11 o’clock service for Nancy, Tina, Rod, Glen, and their families. Springwood Baptist was unique due to having three different “versions” of the same church. There was “little church” which was for all of the kids 12 and under, “middle church” which was for 13 to 17 year olds, and “big church” which was for everyone 18 and over. Each “church” taught the same lessons of the day, but broke them down in an age app

Thanks as always for the comment and for reading. And I hear you. If it were me, I know I wouldn't be going back to sleep after that. Maggots are some nasty little creatures.

Though Tina’s shower had gone normally, the dream she’d had about the shower continued to haunt her throughout the day. She remembered it when she got ready to wash her hands at the movie theater. She remembered it while she was watching the movie. She remembered it after the movie. And she even remembered it later that evening as herself, Nancy, Glen, and Rod were together in group chat doing a live stream review of the movie that they’d gone to see earlier. Gl

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'd definitely say its a warning. But of what?

The start of the next morning was signaled by the high-pitched digital screech of Nancy’s old beside alarm clock. After fully rejoining the world of the awake, Nancy and Tina decided to check on how theirs, and Rod and Glen’s, videos were doing. Using their phones to check, what they saw brought smiles to both of their faces. “562 views for us, and 507 for the boys.” Tina cheered. “This is the best debut any of our videos have ever had. Look at all these comments.” Nancy said.

Thanks for reading and for commenting. Yep. All is quiet. There's nothing to see here. Yet...

It was the newest challenge to sweep social media: The Deadly Nursery Rhyme challenge! To do the challenge, participants only had to follow three simple steps. To start, participants had to stand in front of a mirror while in complete darkness. Then, participants had to sing the Deadly Nursery Rhyme to the mirror. After that, participants had to stand in front of the mirror for thirty seconds to see if the person named in the Deadly Nursery Rhyme appeared in the mirror or not. If that name

The Legend of Fred Krueger is a re-imagining of the original 1984 classic horror film "A Nightmare On Elm Street". Set in present time, the story introduces us to Nancy Thompson and her friends Christina Gray, Rodney Lane, and Glen Lantz as they take on the newest challenge to sweep social media; The Deadly Nursery Rhyme Challenge! But is the challenge just another in the long line of urban legend challenges, or is there something waiting to be unleashed?

I was not sure what to expect when I walked into this story, but I had to see how in the world somebody wrote one about a fire extinguisher. This felt like old school Twilight Zone to me, and I liked it! You should keep this at only the single chapter. Meant to make us wonder if this is just a drunken dream Dean will wake up from in the morning, or if his new red colored friend is really possessed by a spirit looking for atonement. Seeking to leave, and prevent another from entering The Twilight Zone. A +'s all across the chalkboard!

Very well done! It made me think of what it's like to start life as a child and then growing up to find out the truth.

Let me echo that with some force! Logged onto the site and POW, saw this. Still getting over the surprise. lol. Thank you, AC, for an awesome review. You readers are what keep this story alive and make writing it fun. Without you, I would've gone out of business long ago. You've made GA a good place to be!

Greetings all! Been on GA for almost a year now and I don't think I ever took the time to introduce myself . I go by the attribute Twisted Dreemz and have been a fan of this site for quite some time. This place has always housed some great stories and good people. I've got two stories going on currently. The first is an original story called Denn's Mobile Circus. Check it out if you're looking for a different kind of story about werewolves. Yes, I know there's a ton of those stories out right now, but hopefully you'll all find this one worthy. The second is an original fan fiction called The Black Spider, which is an urban take on Spiderman with a few extra liberties taken. I know everyone is getting tired of superheroes and anything Marvel related, but hopefully you'll all check it out anyway. Reviews of my stories are always welcome and I plan to do some reviews for other stories I've been checking out myself. Thanks, GA for having me!

I would just like to apologize to everyone. It's my fault Cia had to take us back to school. That last chapter I posted finally broke her sanity. Joking aside, I can't say anything else that hasn't already been said. Your patience, knowledge, and time are appreciated and acknowledged.