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Zal's old friends and acquaintances are not doing him any good right now. Finding a Faceless is going to be a tough job. Hopefully he can turn Eistaf's plan into something usefull.
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I love this chapter. Darren is such a good character. I'm so happy Danae is realizing his worth. Ahh cliffhangers!
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I really enjoyed the chapter. Darren is a much deeper person than he gets credit for. I'm loving how you're writing Danae's softening towards him.
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Great beginning. I'm excited to see the story continue.
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Great chapter! Bartos saved the day. Now, he needs to learn to use the newly discovered type of might at will. Andreuz, as has been pointed out, is amazingly lucky. I can't wait to find out Otello's information. Next week feels long way off.
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Wow! A terrifying reunion. I hope a miracle does happen
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BONUS CHAPTER , YAY! And , wait to go Joel! Also, Dad finally grows a pair.
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Perfect ending to an amazing story. My only disappointment is that Roy didn't end up in a throuple with the Ames twins. Lol
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Great chapter. Zal"s misplaced trust will gnaw at him until he takes care of Renn. I hope Zdain isn't caught in the crossfire. Anden must be a sight for sore eyes .
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As quick as Jolanda is, she totally misjudged the situation. The Darkness demands a price and now she is trapped. It was beautiful to watch. That said, I feel sure she will rise to the task given her.
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Okay, this was the best thing ever!
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Omg! This took me back to every Friday night post game in the small town I grew up in. Really enjoyed the boys' interactions too. This chapter is great. And Jaxton?
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Nooooo! This one makes my heart ache. Renn is despicable and poor Zdain has fallen into his trap. I'll be dying until next week.
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Yay for an early chapter! Thanks! This one is really good. I like seeing Colt being more open although he needs to think before he talks.
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This is a beautiful way to end this part(?). Nick is hopeful but prepared for things to be hard sometimes. Jack is not alone and knows he's not alone. I love Tommy and Jonah's date. Tommy is already being pulled into the circle. I hope they do well. Thanks for the ride. It's been awesome.
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I get the feeling that Ivas is going to be a character I'm going to love.. Great chapter
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As I read this , I realized I was holding my breath. Jack's breakdown is heartwrenching Nick's realization about the cutting is too. His feeling of helplessness is palpable. Tommy is the friend Nick has needed for so long and needs more now. I hope Jack can get through his jealousy issues because he'll be good for him as well.
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Poor Jack. He's terrified of things going back to "before". He needs to work through the jealousy but it's understandable. You can feel how much he and Nick love each other but jealousy can be suffocating.
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I feel bad for Jonah but he did cross a line. I hope they can get past it but the friendship is never going to be the same. Nick may have been a little harsh because he was mad at himself too. We finally get to know what's next. Can't wait for the next chapter
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I hope that's not foreshadowing 😑
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Great chapter! We finally have Josel's family history and it's a doozy. It explains so much and creates quetions too. How will Josel react when he knows the story? *starts counting the days until the next chapter *
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I'm happy the boys made up! However, I don't get why Nick is withholding the pics. He doesn't seem to realize that they could make so much difference at the outset. Does he think that he's going be the knight in shining armour and whip them out just as things go bad? He needs to get out of his own head.
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I love this chapter. Nick and Jack learning and loving. Nick's mom being the coolest mom ever. Nick coming out to Tommy. It feels idyllic. I can't stop feeling like a shoe will drop when they go back to school, though. Seems like our boys never have an easy time of it for long. Until next week, I'll bask in their joy. 😊
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I really enjoyed this chapter. I just hope Josel works out his feelings about Zdain in time to save him from Renn or that Renn is exposed for what he is soon.
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I love seeing more of Franz. I was thinking that we hadn't seen him in a bit. Now we know he got his adventurous nature and restlessness from his father. Also, more mystery surrounding Sandkan family. Looking forward to next week!❤️
