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Noah is a serious asshole and Nick is way too easy on him. Even at fourteen, I would've made him tell everyone he lied and then I'd never speak to him again. His confusion here makes my head want to explode. Noah is such a manipulator. GRRRR
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Nick needs to the daylights shaken out of him. He finally seems to be realizing that he's the bad guy. I know he's 14 and navigating a reality that is new to him but he's obviously never heard the phrase "you can't have your cake and eat it too". Subconsciously, I thinks he knows Noah isn't forever and he wants Jack to just wait in the wings. He's infuriating in this chapter. This chapter filled me with strong emotions. The sign of a great writer. Thanks and well done!
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Nick is too naive to see Noah for what he really is. Nick also likes the danger of him, whether he knows it or not. He wants experiences and he seems headed for some painful ones
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I will read as many books as you write. Even with the frustrations. Zdain's fear is complcating, not just his life, but the others as well. I hope Renn dies in a spectacular and painful way.
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Key people and glossary (books 2 and 3)
chrstphrl commented on Lupus's story chapter in Key people and glossary (books 2 and 3)
Thanks for this! -
Chapter 8 - Finding A Family
chrstphrl commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Finding A Family
He's my favorite character! -
Chapter 29 - Inevitable Collapse
chrstphrl commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 29 - Inevitable Collapse
I'm really excited to seee a new chapter in this! I worry for Jake and his friends. -
Chapter 28 - A Survivor's Story
chrstphrl commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 28 - A Survivor's Story
Thanks for this chapter! I've been hoping for more of this story. Also, I want to say; Preston is my favorite character , especially after reading Miles To Go. And Sonny! 😊 -
Chapter 27 - Moments Of Clarity
chrstphrl commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 27 - Moments Of Clarity
I'm so excited to see a new chapter! it's a heavy one but so good. Thank you! -
I hope Richie takes his new circumstance well. Justin will be crushed if he doesn't. Is there more of this story that I'm missing? I see it's marked on temporary hold. I just want to be sure.
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I suspected a shapeshifter from the moment they appeared with Taryn. It wouldn't make sense for him to go that far yet. I feel like the Jewler knows it's too soon in Justin's development. Losing Taryn would send Justin into a spral none of them could handle. He expects Taryn to die and I agree that he is in grave danger. The Jeweler sees him as only a part of the prophecy. I don't trust the Jeweler. He's a zealot and they're always dangerous.
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I have cried through this entire chapter. I'll miss Dylan so much. I held out hope right to the end that Justin would miraculously find a way. This chapter is heartbreaking and beautiful.
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I'm speechless and sobbing.
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I'm taking this one slow because it's so heartwrenching. I need a breather after a couple of chapters. This one wasn't as hard on me as the previous ones. I just ache for Taryn AND Alec and knowing where it ends breaks my heart. All that is to say, great addition to GFD.
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Thanks! I'm reading it now. 😁
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I literally gasped when I realized that Rage was Alec, Taryn's little brother. I'm hoping this is picked back up we get more of the story.
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I've so enjoyed this story. Your details are beautiful and more than once I caught myself holding my breath. Lovely, lovely work.
