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Reader1810

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  1. Reader1810

    Love On Hold

    Oh boy, Sister bear is feeling the need to knock a knucklehead against a tree...
  2. Hey tim Your words can be tough to read, but read them I will: -to show appreciation for your skill as a writer -to show support for you as a friend as you use words to slay what haunts you As always, nicely done
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    Chapter 26

    Nice chapter Lit. I really like how Jason and Corey mesh together perfectly. Add the icing on the cake that Jason's parents love Corey like son also leaves me with warm fuzzies for this family. No if only I didn't have this foreboding feeling that Luc is going to mess up Jason's trip.....
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    Chapter 3

    Hey tim Three chapters in and I'm liking this story very much. I have to admit, I was a little worried as to the direction the story was headed after reading about the band of bad guys, but it seems Samuel has a band of his own and they're all good men who want to dispatch the bad guys. At least I hope that's what they are - and not a bunch of wolves in sheeps clothing. You've painted a very believable picture of life after the past. For Dave and Jae and Barry and his sons, I hope that life continues for them. Looking forward to the next chapter.
  5. I was thinking about a photo of her in hospital when she looks a little better and more recognizable so that they can see that she's still their mommy - in spite of the bandages and bruises, As for them being traumatized, I agree with you. Poor little guys.
  6. That's very true. I'm not sure if the boys would believe their uncle's that "mommy is better". Alan and Peter might think of showing them a photo of Lisa looking more like herself before they try again.....
  7. Admit it LBO, Zombie made a funny. I wonder how long will be mine?
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