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Chapter 66 - "Hello, It's Me"
Lutheros commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 66 - "Hello, It's Me"
This chapter almost makes me wish that I had told my mom way back when, but in the 1970s it would not have gone so smooth, especially after my homophobic father finds out. Way to go Randy! -
There is a lot going on in this chapter. I'm glad that F'drun lost out, but I'm sorry to hear that Ryth got hurt. F'drun needs to pay more attention to his dragon's needs instead of just sitting around and letting the healers tend to Ryth's injuries! I really dislike him. I also wonder what is going on with M'rell. Is he really that shallow as to blame D'gar for his not getting picked as the wing-second, or is something else going on? Only time will tell, but I hope it doesn't take too long. Finally, I hope that Southern gets reopened soon. I'm curious as to how they are going to manage that. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter!
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This was a good chapter. I like how it shows the different beliefs, or feelings, between the old-timers and the modern riders. The modern riders don't have the experiences of losing friends to thread and feel each death more personally than the riders who lived through thread-fall for turns.
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So they want to reopen Southern. That would be one way to get rid of F'drun! It would take a lot of work to repair the place though, work that might keep F'drun out of trouble for a while. I can't remember the reasons that Thread doesn't kill off all the plant life on the southern continent. I remember that there is a reason, but I don't remember which book mentions it and I'm frustrated!
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So, D'gar and H'rek have new digs! Good for them. I hope that they 'break in' the new pool properly
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A good chapter! I'm surprised that F'drun tried to be sociable to D'gar while they talked with the other rider, although it didn't last with his comment about suicidal riders. I'm glad that H'rek didn't get hurt by a stray blast of fire or a 'missed' clump of thread. I still think something needs to be done about F'drun though, but what can be done?
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So, D'gar and H'rek are going to be were-mates! It took them long enough 🙂 It also looks like F'drun is up to something. Hrek needs to watch out during the next thread-fall because I wouldn't put it past F'drun to set him up.
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Thank you for posting this chapter so soon after the last one. I look forward to reading more of your story.
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I also agree with Carlos. F'drun deserves a lot more than a demotion! He had his dragon assault if not try to kill D'gar! F'drun needs to be transferred to another wing, if not sent back to his old weir.
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I was actually thinking about the whole 'going between back in time' thing! It is a good and logical explanation. Maybe you should follow through with it. I'm wondering if the problem D'gar is having with F'drun is because F'drun is homophobic? It could explain things. This is an interesting chapter and it has me guessing at possible outcomes. Keep up the good work!
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This is a great chapter. I'm glad that D'gar has finally gotten over the age difference between himself and H'rek. F'drun dropping D'gar's shirt into the puddle was a childish act. I'm glad that D'gar didn't respond to it in a childish way. F'drun's being put in charge of the 'exercises' has me worried though. There is the potential for a lot of harassment there. I'm looking foreword to the next chapter.
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A great story so far. I'm glad that D'gar and H'rek are coming together. D'gar needs to get over the age difference and enjoy spending time with H'rek! I would like to see D'gar put F'drun in his place. I'm looking foreword to the next chapter.
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This is an interesting chapter, to say the least. I'm glad that D'gar has met H'rek and seems interested in him. I hope that Herebeth catches Rioth when she rises for her mating flight! I think that H'rek needs a man that is interested in him for more than just the mating flight.
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I was not aware of that novel. I will have to locate a copy. Thanks.
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This was an interesting beginning to what I hope will become a novel-length story. I've sorely missed reading about Pern!
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I also am looking foreword to your longer story.
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I look foreword to reading your longer story. I hope you begin posting it on this site soon.
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A well written and fast paced story. I think the writer should go for a longer version of it with multiple chapters.
