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    Chapter 1

    Hello Sasha. Truth to be told, I haven't read this chapter yet. Not even the description. But I know I'll enjoy this story as much as "Ladies' man", maybe more because of that asshat Nate. I feel he will be a more complex character to read about (his issues to deal with, the dislikes he gets because of his actions, the loneliness he must have felt after Clem). His story will be worth to follow till the end. Count me in!
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    Cornered

    LMAO! Talking about keeping the relationship insteresting. Now thanks to you, I want all my date nights like this. Anyway, good job.
  3. Hi, metajinx. I really like the different turn that you're giving this story since chapter one : about building a relationship first, making things work, depending on each other. Great dynamic between Jared and Darwin. Finally, our submissived friend realized his feelings for Jared are real. But, giving up the control of his life is going to be a tough test, after all it was what kept him alive all those years. By the way, who said that they have to follow every rule set for the others packs. As far as I'm concerned, they can make their own rules, keeping things balanced of course. Good luck with everything and see you soon.
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    Chapter 9

    I thought the encounter would be more casual, you know, in the diner, at the farm, but that was way better! I remember the old saying "if looks could kill..." Well, I guess the next chapter is about to get ugly when Nate comes face to face with Ashlee and Clem steps up to prevent any physical contact. I think all the teasing and the foreplay are really entertaining, but on Clem's account, pure torture . Great chapter. All hail Rodeo Master!
  5. This has been a great story since Officer Jack Albertson. To be honest, I was afraid that you'd stop writing, and guess what? You proved me wrong, thank you. I always pictured Pleasant View as a quiet, nothing-goes-wrong-around-here city, but it's obvious this is not that kind of city. I wonder what new adventures await Jack, Brad and the rest of the gang. I believe I have to wait, don't I?
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    Winky

    This is a lovely story, Cole. I'm sorry that I missed it on Christmas. Of course it had to be 1550 LL style, a Winky miracle!
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    Epilogue

    Hi, Krista. Just want to say it was truly an honor to follow you, Corey and the gang in this adventure. Life is like that: we win sometimes, we loose sometimes, but in the end what we learn about ourselves is what really matters. Amazing story and I hope you could take the time to write a sequel (or maybe two, who knows). Take care of you and your wonderful gift. Bignick
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    Chapter 35

    I couln't be happier with this chapter. I had a nice feeling about Andy and Keith, and they didn't let me down (and by they I mean you, of course). They're the best friends Corey could ask for. And Jenny, supportive as always, because we know our "cute couple" are going to need that when the school year starts. Two thumbs up for Couch. He may be a hard bone to pick, but it seems that bone has a heart too. I'll be waiting patiently (yeah, right!) for the next chapter. P.S.: I hope the dynamic duo get their hands on CJ any time soon.
  9. For a novice, I have to say, this is pretty good material. I foresee lots of fun. Please don't hold anything back and give us your best shot.
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