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  1. Truly intense. I can't seem to turn off that conspiratorial smile I get everytime I read something so intimate. When love and passion come together in harmonic symphony, the result must be only idolized at its magnificence. Whoever can stir up those feelings inside you, my friend, has to be very special. Enjoy life, Gary. Never forget it. Until next time.
  2. I must say I'm disappointed (but not surprised) by Carly's treachery. I should have seen that one coming. Marrying Jared was obviously a bonus, but preventing Craig from being happy, was the actual prize. Honestly, is her jealousy of her brother blinding her judgement? And their mom? She's the one I feel sorrier for. She won't know how to justify her dauther's actions, even though she is not responsible for any of them. If I was Craig, I wouldn't let my guards down now that we know what a snake.... excuse me, Carly is capable of. I guess it was an exhausting chapter to write. Sibling quarrels are never easy. But hang in there my friend. As long as there's love, there's hope. Take care.
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    Chapter 2

    For me, I like this kind of stories because I can see myself in a lot of characters. A young boy, shy, insecure, dealing with puberty, questioning why suddenly I'm attracted to other guys. They seem simpler, yes, and that's how teen's world is: home, friends, school, sports, nothing more (unless you count summer camp or visiting relatives in the country). But you gotta given them credit: they act as a pack because they don't know who they are yet, so they act just like everyone else does. Once they have learned more about themselves, that's when you see a major difference in the plot.
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    Chapter 1

    Hi Palantir. I just want to say that your story is being highly recommended by a dear friend of mine. I always appreciate when my friends do that, because sometimes is hard for me to find new material. And this one is already on my reading list. As far as I can tell, the fun is yet to start.
  5. I completely understand your approaches with Last Run to Mosul. First, you were getting out of your comfort zone (so I believe) and second, you wanted to show another aspect of human nature: we all are capable of love both emotinal and physically, just not the same person (so I'm sure).
  6. Ummm.... can I borrow that angel... for a few hours?
  7. A Class by Himself, definitely. Once I started reading it, I just couldn't stop. And the turns, twists, plots, ups and downs, comic and romantic moments, have me asking for more.
  8. Happy Valentine's Day, my friend. I hope you have a wonderful time.
  9. Michael is a lucky fellow. I'm sure he know that.
  10. Your poem gives hope, Gary. Hope that whatever is holding us back, it's not stronger than ourselves. That it is possible to move on, to let things go for good, and to try to live once again. Thanks for sharing that piece of your mind, heart and soul.
  11. I've missed so much Chet and Arron. Best Godparents Kendall and Michael could ask for. And their planning fatherwood are amazing news too. Can you imagine the possibilities, Gary? A best friend/partner in crime for baby Aceto-Dooley (the same applies if it's a girl). Kendall trully has a heart of gold. He goes beyond duty to bring hope and happiness to others. And I wouldn't want him any other way. Take care Gary. Until next chapter.
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    Chapter 3 Tsunami

    Yay for first love!!!! I thought for a moment that Craig would have to drag Jared kicking and screaming, but maybe the hugs work better. It's not my intention to defend Carly (that would be the last thing on my mind), but I'm starting to understand her deceiving ways. Like all the teenagers before her, she felt the peer pressure to stand out and become one of the "cool kids". And letting Jared and Craig find each other would have left her at the starting line. And now, because she's not happy, no one is going to happy either (so she thinks.... silly woman). I think it's time to fight fire with fire, because it takes one twin to know another. Gary, this is a delicious dramance. Keep more chapters coming, please.
  13. Wow, speaking of sibling rivalry.... I honestly think Carly is taking it to a whole new level. Does she really believe that waving her bony finger everyone will do as she says, especially her brother? Maybe Jared (if she keeps threatening him), but not Craig. Or their mom (I love that woman and I expect to hear more from her in the future). I really hope Craig and Jared can work things out and face that evil twin. I guess I should stick around to find out, right?
  14. I was feeling anxious when you first mentioned you were working on a new project. Anxious to read it, of course. And here we are: at the beginning of another promising story. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us, my friend. See you.
  15. Sorry for the delay Gary. Hopefully, I won't be the last one. Does Big Mike and Colleen need an extra son? I mean, you can't help but love them for their acceptance and caring. And asking to be called Gramps and Grams just sealed Bodie's welcome into the Aceto home (it reminded me when they asked Kendall to call them Pop and Mom... such a wonderful memory) Bodie and Nate's relationship will only grow stronger (just like uncs Kendall and Michael's) and Bodie's determination to provide confort to his boyfriend shows how commited he already feels. I'm happy for both of them! Give it to K and M to save the best present for last. Take care my friend. See ya!
  16. Ok. One thing at a time: Kevin/Stephen: Zune is right. They're playing with fire. Eventually, feelings get in the way. I'm not worried about Mr. I'm-so-full-of-myself, but Steph is a different story. I hope Zune can talk some sense into his friend. Jake/Jeremy/Mysterious detective: Yeah, Jake is afraid to love and get hurt again. But he's missing life and happiness. Those are worth fighting for. If Jer is the kind of guy I think he is, we're going to see Jake smile once more. About the meeting between Jer and that Daniel... I'm keeping my eyes and ears open. Just saying..... Ed/Zune: Those two are not the only ones who are getting frustrated here, you know? I just want to drag and lock them in an empty room and wait for them to talk or kill each other (preferably the first, mind you) Wow! That hickie was really the cherry on top! I don't know, maybe Ed's got a good explanation, but right now he needs to let Zune vent a little at Carol's. I'm sure Carol will make the world right for Zune again. Great chapter, Sacred. Until next one. Take care.
  17. I hope you guys are talking about me
  18. Hi Robert! It's so good to have you back. Here's a welcome for you.
  19. Here's a fiendish for you, my friend. And you can save this other for later. I hope you'll feel better tomorrow.
  20. Paul is amazing and so are you. Isabella and Paul are my second and my third favorite people in the world, because they gave you what you need the most: caring, like you really matter (because you do, never doubt that).
  21. HAPPY BIRHTDAY KRISTA
  22. You deserve every single one and many more, my friend. I hope you had enjoyed your day.
  23. HAPPY BIRTHDAY DUGHLAS!!!
  24. The kind of relationship every father should have with his son. Too bad it goes down the drain when the said son doesn't fulfill his father's expectations. I it!!! Hopefully one day I'll be reciting to my son.
  25. HAPPY NEW YEAR, EMI!!! (See all in red, and technically is still jan. 1st, so I'm safe )
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