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  1. Awesome Chapter, Thank You
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    Retribution 1

    hmm, get your head on straight quickly, don't leave us hanging like this too long.......... awesome chapter...
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    A New Place 1

    Nice that Chris gets to meet his Matra, strange that some things are making him feel uneasy, is there a hidden agenda waiting in the shadows? Looking forward to the next chapter...
  4. awesome chapter, Thank you.
  5. Poor Chris, Victor runs into an ex. and now Chris is just a friend, so sad.....
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    First Surge 3

    Chris is becoming more powerful way to quickly, without the right training he could become very dangerous to himself and all around him.... looking forward to the next chapter...
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    First Surge 2

    Now that is a show of very dangerous raw power.... looking forward to more...........
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    Battle Lines 3

    All good valid questions, so looking forward to more..
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    Battle Lines 1

    Very interesting twist to the story, looking forward to more..
  10. Another great chapter, looking forward to more..
  11. Great chapter...
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    Holiday Cheer 3

    Very Interesting. looking forward to more, please.
  13. Wow, I am very impressed with this chapter and need more. Thank you
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    Meet the Family 3

    Again an awesome chapter. The only problem is you just get into it and it's over. looking forward to much more..
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    Meet the Family 2

    William and Victor took that way too easily...........the suspense is becoming more and more of a challenge. looking forward to the next chapter...
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    Meet the Family 1

    all of that seemed to well, looking forward to the next chapter.
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    Days of Calm 3

    Great Chapter, need more...........
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    Days of Calm 1

    Well, gabz. I have to say that with Victor, Henry , Raymond and William being in such prestigious positions as they are to let something like Chris's new found abilities to just slide over their heads with no real question or investigation. I can see how the blood army can move in so easily. That said I also must say that this story is one of the best I have read in a long time. well done, looking forward to much more.
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    Discoveries 3

    looks to me that Chris is going to try to be forced to give up life as he knows it..........................................
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    Titles a Plenty

    with Tala's power over the council and more importantly all alphas I see no reason that with the help of Jay and Toby he does not take his rightful place as Alpha King.
  21. Great story, looking forward to more.
  22. What, only 2 more, this seems much too soon..................
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    Chapter 26

    So Awesome, So Emotional and so Good, Thank You
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    Chapter 25

    Damn, what would we do without facial tissues. Another great chapter. Thank You
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    Chapter 23

    as much as I want to comment on what you have put into this story I become so overwhelmed and emotional I just can not find the right words. so looking forward to the next chapter.
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