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Great chapter, Air magic as the next key! nice touch and I agree with chris191070 in that Havar is up to no good, he has a plan and is buttering up our Prince to get where he wants to go with it...........
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I agree with Buz AWESOME, our young Prince finds out about all his collected trinkets and kicks the ass of another General, need to read it again and again will be waiting for that next chapter, so much more to understand....................
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good chapter, short but informative, hoping for a speedy recovery to your writers block......
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Trouble is brewing, Great chapter, descriptions of the realm are amazing. looking forward to the next chapter..........
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Great story, well done, Thank you
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Such a powerful chapter, filled with so much feeling........... looking forward to the next chapter.
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as I think I have said before this is one of the most interesting and well written stories I have read in a long time, the characters are so life like and I feel I am interacting with each and everyone of them, well done gabz2000. I so look forward to every next chapter...............
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Chapter 15: The truth is out. Will Aidan return?
yarameb commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 15: The truth is out. Will Aidan return?
So all is lost to a new King,......... Or is it? -
always something new and exciting, great chapter. Looking forward to more............
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very interesting, lots of action, some strange twists.............looking forward to the next chapter
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WOW, I did not see that one coming............................
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Chapter 8: Aidan's introduction. New enemies arrive.
yarameb commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: Aidan's introduction. New enemies arrive.
3 dark warlocks and a dark Prince, how will Prince Aidan handle this?............... -
Chapter 7: Aidan and Luis are in love. A visit from the past.
yarameb commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: Aidan and Luis are in love. A visit from the past.
So looks like Aidan will find out why he has his new found powers after all............. -
More questions, questions and not enough answers, shows you are keeping the readers on there toes, great chapter.........
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Chapter 5: Aidan makes a mistake and strange occurrences.
yarameb commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Aidan makes a mistake and strange occurrences.
Well, that was very unexpected............................
