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  1. Thank you all so much! I keep running out of likes!
  2. Thanks so much! I'm purple now! My favorite color (I finally figured it out! Thanks so much!)
  3. Thank you everyone!!!
  4. Chapter 21 Martin stared at the door that Casey had just closed in his face. He was still in shock at Casey's blunt response to his demand as to what was taking the boy so long. The kid had never been so brazen before. Where the hell was all this new-found confidence coming from? he pondered again. That Casey would respond to him with such a lewd answer was so unexpected it had thrown Martin off. He headed back down the stairs to his study to wait for the boy. The full moon was in two
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    Chapter 18

    Thank you. I really like to show a relationship developing, rather than the jump into bed together kind of thing. I totally get waiting for more chapters as I often do the same thing! Enjoy!
  6. craftingmom

    Chapter 20

    Glad you enjoyed the shower scene. I think I imagined Thomas and Martin getting plush towels (or basically really good towels) so that they would last longer and they wouldn't have to keep buying new ones... Martin is definitely getting more and more shocked by Casey's boldness... which isn't necessarily a good thing.
  7. craftingmom

    Chapter 20

    Oh, yeah...
  8. craftingmom

    Chapter 19

    I probably need to be more detailed about the slide lock. I imagined Thomas putting it in when he was younger so that he could lock the door and hide should anyone like Harris come for him. I also imagine another hidey hole in his closet, but writing about all that seemed like too much extraneous info. Though I may have to go back and add a little bit of explanation for that now that you mention it...
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    Chapter 19

    hehe, it will only get more intense from here on out...
  10. craftingmom

    Chapter 19

    Shawn's definitely beginning to wonder about the 'tests'
  11. craftingmom

    Chapter 19

    It does start Shawn to thinking and wondering...
  12. craftingmom

    Chapter 19

    hehe, very true
  13. Chapter 20 Casey deliberately kept from being near his uncle. He was sure the man would hear his heart beat right out of his chest, he was so panicked. But then Uncle Martin seemed to be unaware that anything was up, so he slowly began to relax. He had no idea, though, how he was going to get Shawn out of the house. Maybe after Martin went to bed? Or maybe he could just stay the night? Casey thought deviously. Shawn would be his prisoner. He had to fight to keep the blushing giggle f
  14. craftingmom

    Lunch Break

    Thank you so much! I'm so glad that the characters seem as real to others as they do to me. I do hope to write more shorts and delve a bit more into his therapy and their growing lives together.
  15. craftingmom

    Lunch Break

    I think that Avery might be a little scared about that when Matt brings it up--sounds like a good topic for another short!
  16. craftingmom

    Lunch Break

    Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope to write more soon.
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    Lunch Break

    Thanks you! It's been a while since I've done the prompts, since I've been focused on completing BTC. But needed a break so, here it was! I think they would too.
  18. craftingmom

    Lunch Break

    Wow, thank you so very much. That means so much to know that the characters are that 'real'--hope that means I'm doing a good job as a writer! They certainly are real to me, but to know they are to others also is very humbling. Thank you.
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    Lunch Break

    Yes, they do need a little more time to settle, but the thought is now there in Matt's head to bring up with Avery.
  20. Hey, there! Happy Birthday!!!
  21. Prompt #419: List of words– a plastic bag, a small child, a hamburger, an orange, and a green jacket. Lunch Break Matt sat on the bench outside of the animal clinic finishing his lunch. He was peeling an orange, dropping the rind pieces into the plastic bag Avery had packed his lunch in. He thought it was cute his boyfriend wanted to pack his lunch every day. When Avery had discovered he was going across the street everyday for a hamburger, fries, and Dr. Pepper, the teen had sudden
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    Chapter 16

    That's the idea, isn't it? to keep you on edge so you keep coming back hopefully hehe
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    Chapter 10

    hehe, pulling him out of the boat would be funny. There are several chapters coming with Shawn and Casey... lots of relationship development
  24. craftingmom

    Chapter 4

    Hehe, I do that alot too... waiting for several chapters to be posted before reading. I hope you enjoy it!
  25. craftingmom

    Chapter 18

    Thanks so much for your in depth review. This story is more about the emotional/psychological abuse like you said. I hope to answer your questions about Martin's plans in an upcoming chapter. Please let me know if they work...
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