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I won't make you wait too long--now that it's all written I can post quicker It gets a little more tense in the next few chapters, so I won't make you hang on too long for the next chapters.
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Yes, I've be told that before I won't make you wait too long! Glad you are enjoying it!
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Chapter 28 Already he could feel the powerful riptide trying to push him sideways, along the shore. Casey powered through it, silently grateful for his mutant half. He sliced beneath the breakers and drove himself through the strong current. A school of silver fish scattered at his approach, and he saw the baby reef shark from his periphery give chase a few yards away. Good maybe that would keep it occupied. He wasn't terribly worried about the pup, but even a baby's teeth could give a
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thank you! Casey is definitely confused and hurt; they both are. But Shawn's near drowning here might be enough to get him the chance to get to Casey... next chapter, coming soon (it's at the editor)!
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Yes, Martin is quickly becoming desperate. These last few chapters all happen within a very short time... Hope you enjoy them!
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yep, he's definitely going to hide... so getting through to Casey will be Shawn's biggest challenge. And doing it before Martin has time in enact his plans as well...
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Yes, Martin's actions relate back to pleasing Thomas, not his own concern towards Casey. With Thomas gone, he reverts back to his own selfishness. I hope Shawn's mental 'working it all out' came across okay. There's a lot of 'thinking' going on here...
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Shawn definitely just needs to talk to Casey, as he's certainly not disgusted, just shocked. But getting Casey to listen....well...
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So many questions... answers coming soon!!
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The ocean is Casey's escape, where he can let his mer side take over and just not think anymore. His get away, and right now he thinks he has to get away because he can't face Shawn again.
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Definitely a busy chapter. Thanks for your faith! And thank you (and Reeves) for the wonderful compliment!
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Chapter 27 "Casey!" Shawn pounded on the front door. Martin's SUV was gone so he knew that Casey's uncle wouldn't be answering and most likely driving him away. It was probably better that way, since Shawn was sure he might tear the man's head off knowing Martin had to have been the one to lock Casey in that damn cave. He was certain now that this was the true reason that Martin hadn't wanted him around, but he wasn't sure yet of the man's intentions. Was the man really just trying to k
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Chapter 26 Casey didn't remember much of what happened after he'd set off his collar--only the agony of his heart breaking outweighing the burning searing his neck. He knew he must have finally given in to exhaustion and floated on the turbulent ocean currents that slowly pushed him back towards the shore. When he finally focused enough from staring at the clearing night sky, he could tell dawn would be approaching soon, probably in another couple hours. He had actually drifted past their
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Very cool! Congrats!
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Chapter 25 Casey had watched the storm rolling in with a rising sense of panic. The winds kicked up, thunder rumbled in the dark and lightning split the sky. As it inched closer, Casey was sure that his uncle would be down any minute to open the gate. There was no way he wouldn't hear the booming of the thunder and the crack of lightning. But as the waves multiplied, filling his cave with every angry crash upon the shore, his worry increased. The pounding currents had thrown him around
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! They needed some time together before I put them through the wringer!
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Very good guesses! How Casey reacts to Shawn seeing him in his mer form is the big question--next chapter! And definitely more turmoil to come!
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Yes, the secret is definitely out. Now to see how he deals with it. Thanks for letting me know that the imagery of the storm came out well, I was hoping it would.
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Shawn is definitely going to be a bit in shock.
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I know, cliffies suck... but I'm so good at them But you won't have to wait too long...
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Since I am getting close to finishing, the rest of the chapters may come closer together (maybe every other day instead of every three/four days)... just need to send them off to my beta editor!
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Wow, thank you so very much. I am so glad that you are enjoying my works!
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oooh so many good guesses!
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oooh so many good guesses!
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He is definitely feeling the need to change since he has held off for so long. And it is most definitely the calm before the storm
