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Yes, Jason is still clueless, still willing to believe the best of his friend since he was his financial savior...if you re-read that part about his throat you'll find it deliberately vague...Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Yes, there is a reason he has so many 'tutors' And you're right Brad doesn't care about Devyn's education, and Jason is still so enthralled with Brad's help that he's not willing to believe Brad would be doing anything wrong... yet.
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Brad is definitely not who Jason thinks he is right now. Hope you continue to enjoy!
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You'll meet Michael soon--think in chapter 8! Glad you are enjoying it!
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Yeah, Jason still very much believes in his friend, so he's a bit ignorant about what's happening to Devyn. I'm glad it's keeping you hooked! Hope you continue to enjoy it!
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Yep, he does...And I think, at this point, having contained and controlled Devyn for four years now, he probably feels like he can continue to do so for a bit longer.
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Thank you! That's one of the best complements ever. In fact in the current story I'm posting--All In--I've had to rework a chapter like five times because I couldn't seem to get their reactions/dialogue right for their characters. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. Hope you like the rest!
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I'm pretty sure you meant you 'hope that Jason meets Michael' not Brad, since Brad isn't likely to help Devyn You'll find out more, eventually, as to what Brad is up to. But slowly, as you'll only get Jason and Devyn's POV. I think your opinion of Brad will change even more as the story progress... Hope you continue to enjoy! And thanks for reviewing!
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Chapter 6 Jason was glad that Devyn seemed to want to hide away in his room today. The boy had glared at him again when he'd unlocked the door and invited him down to breakfast. He was grateful for Chris and Trent's easy banner to break up the baleful glare that the kid kept casting at him. When the boy gestured at the patio doors again this morning, Jason just lifted his brow, waiting for the boy to relent and say please, well, mouth please, anyway. Jason was getting pretty good just in
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So glad to hear from you! I'm glad you are enjoying this one. I can see that you see right through Brad's schemes. I hope you continue to enjoy where this goes--no matter how much I put poor Devyn through!
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Glad to see that you are enjoying it. I just finished it yesterday (24 chapters total), and my beta has gotten to chapter 9 so we are moving along pretty well! So they should be coming about once a day or every other.
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Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it!
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Chapter 5 Devyn flopped on his stomach on his bed, careful of his sore back. The welts from the soft leather belt would be faded by tomorrow morning. He should have known better than to piss off Brad yesterday, but Sam's comment about Kieran's accident being his fault had hit a nerve. Kieran had helped him and had paid for it. He was sure that Brad had intended for Kieran's accident to be fatal, but a coma was good enough as well. Kieran had been the one man that Devyn had finally trust
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I had the similar problem of being harrassed on another site(she kept post crude posts anon)...I took down the story for a while. Hopefully now that she can't post anon reviews anymore, she's Given up.
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Chapter 4 Devyn stared down into the sink, trying to calm himself. His blond hair hung in his eyes as usual. His breathing came in harsh pants as he thought of the new guy. The man had caught him off guard--in the middle of drawing a picture of Michael. He'd allowed himself to be sucked into the dream of escaping with the new stable hand that he hadn't heard the man coming in. A tear slipped down his cheek as he thought of Michael. They hadn't known each other long, only the last coupl
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American Pie by Don McLean keeps going through my head this week! I can't get it out!
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We're in a townhouse neighborhood so we get lots of kids--some who come in from the neighboring rural areas. Even my mom and sister come here since their neighborhoods are so light with trick-or-treaters. I'm wearing my daughters old butterfly wings and going as a 'social butterfly. Happy Halloween everyone.
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Thank you for all your comments! I'm glad you like the scene setting--I feel like describing setting is my worst so I have to really think about it. I'm glad you like Devyn's name--it's funny you mention it because all of my m/m characters have a 'y' in their name: Kayden (tears of the neko), Avery (What no ones sees--which I can't post here; too graphic), and now Devyn. I love names with 'y's in them--both my daughters have 'y's in their names too! (Mine doesn't though) And you're right about everything not being quite as it seems...
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yes, yes, answers will come... eventually.
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Wow, I'm so glad the story has got you thinking...hope you enjoy seeing where it goes.
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Chapter 3 Jason tried to wrap his head around everything that he had learned yesterday. After he left the Milburn estate last night, he'd gone back to his father's old house where he had been living the last few months and packed up his clothes, laptop and a few other personal items. Brad had shown him the small room that he'd be staying in, apologizing for it not being bigger. Jason had just shook his head--the room was almost bigger than his whole apartment had been. The room was on th
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Hehe, you've nailed them right. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
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Thanks! Hope you continue to enjoy it!
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Just posted the next chapter! Hope you enjoy it!
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Glad you are enjoying it so far. And yeah, you pegged Sam right. And Brad... well, you'll see!
