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Hi Bill: I really like the fact that you write the whole story before you post it. So many good stories go unfinished for reasons beyond the control of the writers. That is so annoying.

I personally would love to see, an adult rated series from Bridgemount , That would be awsome!!

Fair enough. I still do not see how where the money comes from, should effect the story. It is good the way it is.

I enjoyed this story. I enjoy stories that are not sexually active. You may hint at it, but not describe it in any detail. The question by "drpaladin" regarding where the money comes from is really not important. His family must have had money for the grand father to purchase the first 135 foot long Blue Coast catamaran. Those boats are not cheap. His grand father did have set him up with a trust fund in chapter 2. Maybe he was bringing in drugs on his boat! The Fact is he is spending it, the banks have not stopped him, or repossessed the boats. He spends it like water. So his family must have had money for quite some time. Looking forward to the next Book. Also enjoyed Firestorm, looking forward to more of that story as well. Live Long and Prosper Have a Great Day And a Better Tomorrow Bill

Well Mark I am surprised Gumbel did not hang for this. 50 lbs of powder is quite a lot. I guess there are limits on punishment , on crimes. I am enjoying this story a lot. As well as your others. Looking forward to your next chapter.