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    Saturday

    Ray169 commented on faxity's story chapter in Saturday

    Another Awesome chapter, I really thought they would do something together, like kissing then maybe more in this chapter or soon? Wow building their own House or cabin even drawing up their own plans. Awesome plans for the cave, boy the other reviews are blood thirsty looking for some heart break!! nasty.
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    Friday

    Ray169 commented on faxity's story chapter in Friday

    Great!! You can not put any thing past Grand Parents I believe they know something about Asher and Ben, both seem to have a sixth sense, I to believe that love is in the air.
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    Thursday

    Ray169 commented on faxity's story chapter in Thursday

    Excellent story, Uncle Tommy is treating his nephew, like the son he does not have, but loves Ben just like a son. That is my dream cabin house or both. great writers get lots of reviews.
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    Wednesday

    Ray169 commented on faxity's story chapter in Wednesday

    AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
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    School's Out

    Ray169 commented on faxity's story chapter in School's Out

    very good and suspenseful, ???who was the idiot???
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    Chapter 14 Visions

    Ray169 commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 14 Visions

    WOW!!!
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    All I can say is AWESOME!! oh one more thing about time it is all out in the open now.
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    Awesomely awesome
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    Chapter 7 Discovery

    Ray169 commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 7 Discovery

    perfect so far I can not stop crying, Andy and Joey hopefully will be together without any fear, and the bullies, and parents of joey get their just reward, the song is not only meant for Andy but Joey, and should be their song and may be latter in life it could be played at their wedding.
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    Embers

    Ray169 commented on faxity's story chapter in Embers

    Perfect!! Fire!!! Fire!!! class A Fire!!! now get the blank out of the house both Erin and Nate. Some one trying to kill them or just Nate?
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    Pine Needles

    Ray169 commented on faxity's story chapter in Pine Needles

    WOW another boy that can not admit that he is in love, people are so afraid of love.
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    Chapter 6 Safe Haven

    Ray169 commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 6 Safe Haven

    AWESOME story, did not review a few chapters because I could not see with the tears flowing, I hate abuse of any type especially child abuse and also sexual abuse.
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    Chapter 3 New Friend

    Ray169 commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 3 New Friend

    I love the story but the limit they place on likes, I can not click the like button. love is far better than like.
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    just excellent
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    Chapter 1 A New Year

    Ray169 commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 1 A New Year

    Billy excellent so far, Timmy is in love with Andy is my guess, but I believe Andy and Joey will be friends, boyfriends and more.
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    Moving on.

    Ray169 commented on Enoch's blog entry in Billy Martin's Blog

    please do not leave!! what you give to this place, is what you get from it. I am asking you to stay, even I do not know you, I have yet to read any of your stories, and will soon just to let you know if you leave I will be very sad.
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    Ok well I have Fallen Angels who I forgot to list, they are Gate Keepers with flowers five total, I bet some author could write great stories about them, as for me I am not allowed to write about them.
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    Magic

    Ray169 commented on faxity's story chapter in Magic

    I will not reveal my guess but you may see my guess in another place on site, a still excellent story I will not review more till later need to read more.
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    Skittles

    Ray169 commented on faxity's story chapter in Skittles

    Your story so far is better than just good it is excellent, love the challenge of guessing who the person is, I have a strong idea who he is but will wait to see if I am correct, your story sounds like you may be a English Major, I like the use of the Skittles and different eye colors, I my self have three different colors they change with the time of the day, please keep up with the excellent writing.
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    OK the ones I have are all spirits. which I left out in my statement
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    Curiosity

    Ray169 commented on faxity's story chapter in Curiosity

    astounding is all I can say, so many authors kill off parents why is that?
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    All of Gone rom daylight is excellent, just a small problem is with Rage, if he just like the other vampires but mostly Justin, can get other vampires abilities, then he should be able to figure out what really happened to him and no longer blame Taryn. the blame really fall to the vampire that turned him,
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    Well I like Gay Vampires any type, Gay Were Wolfs, Gay Incubus, Gay Demons, and Gay Djinn's
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    Hello I am new here, not an author just a reader and a huge fan of Com. love his story Gone From Darkness which is incomplete even though it great. He writes about several friends of mine this may sound strange or even crazy but it is not, Why because my friends are real Vampires (Spirits) of all kinds who say Coms, vampires in his story are mostly correct except for one. Ray
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    Chapter 33

    Ray169 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 33

    Just perfect!! The story should be made into a movie, then I will watch it 5 times or more Ray.
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