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Smarter than the average bear- 🤣 I died reading this. I know Ed's a bear, but I never pictured him as an actual bear until I read that. 🧸 Ed is damaged- Alex knows. He doesn't know all the details, but he knows getting involved with Ed is a big challenge. Pathways- Not sure what you're envisioning, but trust me. It's gonna be good. 👀
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Ed turned on the engine and was about to put on his seat belt when he saw a woman answering the door. Though it was difficult to tell from that far of a distance in the dark of night, he was still able to make out her big belly and the confrontational body language. "Oh shit. This isn't going to end well." Ed mumbled to himself and sank back into the driver seat and ran his hand over his face. From what Alex had told him, he should have figured out that there was more going on than j
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Who answered the door? We'll literally find out in a couple of days. Our guys helping one another to start resolving their own issues? Hopefully! 😇
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Ed was about to make himself ready to head out to the pub when he heard familiar screaming and shouting from next door. It wasn't the first time he had heard Alex and his mother fight like that, but it seemed like it had worsened over the past two weeks. He didn't understand what they were arguing about because they were talking in Russian. But one thing was sure, it caused them to constantly be at each other's throats. The blond had wanted to ask Alex multiple times what was going on but
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And these guys are in Germany, which has harsher winters. Ed would have been a frozen block of ice! 🤣
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Already being late for school, Alex stuffed his keys into his pocket after locking the door and rushed towards the elevators. To his horror he saw that both were out of order. "FUCKING GREAT! Just what I fucking needed!" He yelled and kicked the metal door, immediately regretting it because of the pain that shot up his leg. With a sigh he then limped towards the staircase. The thought of walking down the same nine floors he had to climb back up again after school already made hi
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Alex nervously fumbled around with a plastic bag in his hands while trying to encourage himself to follow through with his plan. In his mind, it had sounded so much easier. Ring the bell, give Mister Schneider the cat food, and hope he accepts it as a peace offering. But now that he was actually standing in front of the older man's door, he was terrified. The man was probably still angry at him for what he had done a few days ago. With a heavy sigh, Alex gathered all his courage up and ra
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I know, right? This was one of my favorite chapters. 🥰
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The doorbell rang, waking Ed from his nap. With an annoyed grunt, he opened his tired eyes and glanced at the clock above his old television. It was only three o'clock. He closed his eyes again, hoping that whoever had dared to wake him up would just leave eventually. Still the bell rang a second time and after a few minutes, even a third time. Ed finally stood up with a low growl, having had enough of this bullshit. He stretched until his joints popped back into place and then grumpily st
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He's really struggling with himself, with others...everything. Alex is a wake up call.
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I'd say one shouldn't do that to anyone regardless of age. But, yes. Ed was clearly reacting too hastily there. This is basically his rock bottom, though.
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About as opposite from a "meet cute" as you can get, but I still love it. 🤣 Don't worry, Alex has guts to spare.
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Sit that gyarados out on this playthrough. Go with something crazy like water/poison like that anemone thing near one of the beaches...Mareanie/Toxapex! That's what they're called. I really wanted to raise that Bisharp line too! But, he's steel/dark and I already have dark on my team. 😭 It's always so much harder to balance my team whenever I pick grass as the starter.
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The dark-haired boy sprinted towards the elevator, not wanting to stay in the long, dimly lit corridors that gave him chills down his spine for any longer than necessary. When Alex saw the doors closing he yelled for whoever was in there to wait and to his surprise they really did because the doors opened again. With a slight jog, he slipped into the elevator. The teenager hastily pressed the button for the ground floor and waited for the thing to start moving before he finally turned around tow
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If I were you, I'd eventually trade out the extra lighting bellibolt with something else for balance (Pawmi gets good lightning attacks too). As for the coins, the reason I warned you was because I totally traded a bunch of mine. I now have to go back and get them all over again. Luckily the little coin guy respawns in the same places. He's even on top or behind road signs. It's fun to find him. I think I'm going to name my Gardevoir "Terminadora" (Female Terminator in Spanish, since it's fitting) since she still kills everything in sight better than any of my other pokemons in "let's go" mode. It's crazy that her line of vision is so much sharper.
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OH! Don't sell/trade for points the Gimminghoul coins as you collect them (the little coin guy is found randomly on rocks and ruins around the field and sometimes even in towns, you go up to him to "talk" and he gives you a few coins). You need 999 of them to evolve the actual pokemon, which is found on top of towers.
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Yes, I've a cat that seems to thwack mobs with a yoyo, a raltz (already a gardevoir) that destroys everything, a new rock type that's a total tank but has smiley face eyes whenever it wins a fight...and the creepiest looking lizard head that evolved into some sort of poison monkey. To be honest, I'm not sure which of its evolutions freaks me out the most, but he's a useful little guy. I found the little fire megaman, but he's very weak at the moment. Oh! And I've a pawmi (now a pawmo?) on my team, as well. And as ridiculous as his riding form is, I adore my Scarlet Legendary and his love of sandwiches (which I imagine is the same in the Violet version but I've yet to verify that).
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Leo, if you like them already, you are going to be so invested in them. I fell hard for these two while I was editing. 🤣
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Thanks for placing your trust in me...and I told you so. 😈
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Glad you think it flows well already. It only gets better from here. I wouldn't have shared it if I didn't champion it 100%. I can't wait for everyone to read more about both of Luna's wonderfully crafted characters.
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"Fuck you! Stupid bullshit!" Alex cursed under his breath while wiping away the burning tears with the sleeve of his hoodie. His stomach once again painfully twisted up from all the pent-up frustration and anger, making him quickly get to his feet and rush to the bathroom. Just a second after he had lifted the toilet seat, his meager breakfast made its way up his throat and down into the water. After emptying his stomach, he sank to his knees and let his throbbing forehead rest on the cold
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Ooo! I second that! Do it~ do it~ do it~!
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🤣That one was just for you! And I'm glad you like Ash's full description. I usually don't try to bombard full on descriptions everywhere, but he had a goal in that moment of making sure he didn't look too childish or too formal.
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His body knows what it wants. 👀 But, he's still a coward in regards to everything else.
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And yet both are still great prompts!
