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"There we go." Ludwig cheerfully exclaimed once he had managed to light the campfire again. He put down the firestones and turned towards the pouty redhead, who was sitting on his makeshift bed out of large leaves underneath a very unstable looking canape made out of sticks. "Your camp looks uhm…cozy?" The vampire commented, earning himself a death glare from the human. "I'm not an architect or a survivalist so that's the best I could do." Caden grumpily admitted and looked down at his inj
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You and me both.
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"Ludwig! You fucking dick, why the hell are you sneaking up on me?! Also you could have just asked!" The redhead complained to the vampire, who only seconds before had sunken his fangs into his neck and was now sucking greedily on it. After only a few gulps Caden could already feel how he got light headed, so he tried telling Ludwig that he should stop but to his panic the vampire wasn't listening. With no other option he started struggling against the tight grip, elbowing and scratching t
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"You fucking stupid bullshit! Why won't you work?!" Caden screamed at the lighter in his hand. It had been almost three days since Ludwig had told him that he needed some time alone, and Caden had moved his camp to the beach to give him the space he needed. At first, the redhead thought that surviving on his own wouldn't be much of a problem, especially considering how easy hunting, fishing, making a fire and so on looked when Ludwig was doing it, but he was wrong. Not only had he barely b
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I think we both know Caden well around now.
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So...does anyone want to do a vote as to whether Caden can actually take care of himself or not? 🤣
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"You are an idiot." Caden commented once Ludwig had finished telling him the story of how he had become a vampire. Baffled, the dark-haired man just stared at his companion. He had expected the redhead to maybe be scared or infuriated, after hearing his darkest, most shameful sin but instead Caden just sneered and insulted him. "W-what?" He stammered, still unable to comprehend why the human was behaving like that. "Oh, come on, dude, you can't really believe that God cursed you to be
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Yeah I learned American English for survival…to know exactly when we escaped our prison cells (classrooms).
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Ludwig is made of sturdier, stronger stock. Luna's vampires even grow stronger with time.
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"FUUUUCK!" Caden screamed and held his aching hand. "You broke my fucking hand!" He yelled at the vampire, who was still laying on the ground, rubbing the spot on his jaw where the redhead had punched him just a moment ago. "And you hit me!" Ludwig retorted and tried to get back up but was almost immediately pushed to the ground again by the furious redhead. "So?! You fucking deserved it!" "I… I did, didn't I?" The vampire admitted, finally realizing what he really had said in t
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"I'm going to kill you!" Ludwig yelled after the still laughing Caden, who had managed to get a good distance between them. Frustrated with himself and tired from chasing around his prey, he slumped against a tree and looked up at the starry night sky. What in God's name have I gotten myself into? If I weren't already dead, this human surely would be the death of me. Just a few weeks ago when Caden’s blood was still running through his veins he wouldn't have any trouble catching the human,
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Chapter 20- The Dawn's Dusk
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 20- The Dawn's Dusk
Thank you! I improved my overall writing while working on it to some degree so it has a special place in my heart. I'm still not at the level I want to be, but I will get there. -
"Ludwig, the sun went down like an hour ago! Wake up, I'm bored and hungry!" Caden yelled while strolling into their cave. It had been a few weeks since he had washed up on the island and he and the handsome, prudish vampire made peace. It wasn't always the easiest to get along, especially when Ludwig got on Caden's nerves by bombarding him with thousands of questions regarding the current state of the world, but the young man still tried to always remind himself just how long the vampire
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I do warn that one is different! I still love it, but it is a trans x intersex main pair. Though there is also a male x male pairing, too.
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Don't feel bad. As the editor I even missed that altogether.
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"Do you feel better now?" Ludwig questioned the still slightly fidgety human, who shook his head and grumbled that he should have just killed that disgusting spider. "I don't kill defenseless beings that aren't a threat to anybody." The vampire retorted and sat down next to the redhead. "Oh but almost killing the guy that's jerking you off is totally fine, huh?" Caden sarcastically asked, causing Ludwig to blush. He had desperately hoped that the human had forgotten what had happened
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"Fuuuuck!" Caden groaned and slowly opened his eyelids, that felt like they were made out of lead. Once again he found himself in the cave of the vampire who, to the redhead's surprise, was nowhere to be seen. He probably is further down in the cave. Caden concluded with a glance towards the entrance of the cave, where the sun was shining through the waterfall. "You are a fucking dick! Like seriously you could have at least made me breakfast!" Caden angrily croaked in the direction of
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Sorry, it’s just that he can’t use coldness as an excuse for his lack of size and I just realized that after reading that.
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Ludwig didn't understand why, but he actually liked it. Worse, he loved it. He loved the warm body that was snuggling up against his bare chest, the hot breath that was fanning his icy cold skin, and he even enjoyed the slimy, wet tongue that was exploring his mouth. Before he even realized it, his body had moved on its own accord, embracing the redhead even further and returning his passionate kisses. Since he had become a vampire over a thousand years ago, he had never embraced a human in
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"You want WHAT?!" Ludwig questioned, hoping that he had misheard what the red-haired human just requested from him. "I want to fuck you." Caden confirmed, even more determined than the first time he had spoken it out loud. Before he had only said it to mess with the vampire but now that he had said it again and seen his reaction, it just felt right to demand that in exchange for his blood. In his mind, making the blue-eyed vamp his bitch meant that he was still somewhat in charge of their
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"Is helping you survive this island and not killing you myself, not already enough?"- That has to be my favorite line out of the whole story. Then again, I have a lot of favorite lines from this story. The opening "What in God's name is he doing?" killed me, too. 🤣
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"What in God's name is he doing?" Ludwig mumbled to himself, watching from the thicket how the red-haired human attempted to light a fire with a strange looking metal object. Apparently he had spent all day tying sticks together, so they would form crosses and creating very badly improvised spears. Does he really think some pointy sticks and crooked crosses would be able to harm me? He thought and shook his head in amusement. It was maybe true that he was nowhere near his full strength and
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Wow, Val, I'm not sure whether to congratulate you or bemoan your added workload. But, if there's anyone who was practically already an admin before being officially one, it's you, love.
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I agree however our hippies are grounded by touch and affection...imagine all those hugs and invasions of your private bubble. 😂
