Chezakeeba
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Dragons.....AWESOME!! great story! a little hard to tell the difference of who was talking, but still cool.
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Oh this shall be very entertaining!
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Does Damien REALLY think Kayden will let him go alone? Really? I foresee a fight about Kayden not going, Damien leaving thinking he won, and Kayden following behind. LOL
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Ok, so the warden is a scuz bucket (not sure what that is but it sounds bad lol). Love the story so far, can't wait for the Warden to get his dues! The lovemaking scene, even if they were forced into it, was beautiful. Can't wait for the next chapter! P.S. One thing that might need some work is when the POV's switched from MC to MC. Nothing major, just a little hard to tell.
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I really love these stories! Shy Louis is soooo cute? Is he naturally shy or did something happen to him to make him that way? Why does Cade "need" to get to know him? The only thing I have trouble with in these stories is how many people have names that start with "C", it's probably not as many people as I think there are, but it's still kind of confusing. Especially when they are talking.
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Wow ok. Ummmm lying to him probably wasn't th best way to go lol.
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I really hope Damien doesn't let jealousy get in the way of they're relationship, cause that would suck!
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Now Damien lol I agree with Litlover, it's fine to be a little jealous but don't let it fester and cause problems.
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Aww poor Damien so lonely.
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The first chapter and Kayden is already getting people in trouble lol I am soooooo happy that I now have this to look forward too! I can hardly wait!!!
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Yay! I am sooo happy he didnt die! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Zebra! Lol I love these little short stories! I can't wait for the neko book!
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Awesome! It's great to see an author who lets her characters work through something horrible instead of "poof! Even if you've been abused here is a boyfriend now your better!"
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Ok so Lester should die the most horrible death you can think of, what a monster! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let Guy show up with reinforcements! What he has been through is traumatic, not something you get over in a couple of days. He is going to need a LOT of help to get over this, he may seem fine now, but stuff has a way of creeping up on you when you least expect it.
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Yay!! Revenge is awesome! I do hope he remembers to take the collar off of Erin though.
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Perfect ending!! SOOOOO happy the monsters got what they deserved! You are an amazing writer! I can't wait for more stories from you!
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Awww man soooo many misunderstandings already lol
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YES! He is away from the "sperm donor", the Desiago guy is going to get arrested! The butler dude better speak up, he failed Avery and all of the kids before him, he better not wimp out now! Thank you soooooo much for the chapter! (By the way seeing it from Matt's point of view was a nice touch)
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FINALLY!!! Thank goodness Matt called the cops before going there. Avery is going to have such a hard time after this. He's going to need therapy so badly, and he will probably have to testify in court. But only if the "sperm donor" doesn't die "accidently" great chapter!
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Lizard-man to the rescue
Chezakeeba commented on jvaughn's story chapter in Lizard-man to the rescue
Oh. My. Gosh. You are evil! Lol soooo mean! Can't wait for the next chapter! -
i am sooo glad I ate before I read this chapter lol I really want some fresh bread now. Great chapter!
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Alright, I'm ready for the stupid Governor to be dead. GAHHHH!!! I can't wait to find out how Erin ended up on the other side of the mirror, and I am really ready for him to be rescued.
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Oh I hope it's the sherif!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let it be the sherif!
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I think he should stay with Sandro, but meet Ren one more time just to clear the air. Life hurts, you just have to roll with the punches.
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Wyatt is really cute. You got me craving homemade bread and cream puffs, you suck. Is this story going to have magic and some other side of the mirror people?
