Ok this is now my new favorite!! Poor Nate he is sooooo confused! Lol I can't wait to find out what Erin's parents left for him! Who created Nate? Why are people looking for him? Who did he kill? All these questions! At least I'm not asking Nate hahaha! Can't wait for more!
I really really hope Vincent isn't one of the bad guys! Poooor Haje losing a sibling is so hard but then you add in almost being murdered three times and not knowing why. That just sucks. Great story so far!!!! Can't wait for more!
What I would like to know is, why is he so interested in Talon? Why does his family keep telling him to be careful? What happened in Talons past? All these questions!!!!! Keep up the good work!
Oh my gosh!!!! Chris and Eric suck!!!!! Poor Jonah, but really at least talk to the guy! It's completely understandable that he didn't though, it just suck all around. Can't wait for the next one!
Imu at want to say, I know Scott is a flippin nut case. BUT I LOVE HIM!!!! I have always liked the crazy, mental, and just plain old insane people in books, and Scott ranks up there with my all time favorites! Good job!
I absolutely LOVE Jonas! He is so cool, he just takes everything in stride and then has his own little freak out party in his head lol. I can't wait for more chapters! I would love to read more about Opie, and I hope that Jonas and Opie get closer "hint hint".
Wow. That was great!!!!!! Oh my gosh! Please tell me you have another chapter to come out or a book or something!? Loved Jerry he is sooooo cool! Good work!
I love love love this story!!!!! Gabe is awesome! And oddly enough I absolutely adore Scott!!! I think they would make a good couple. Keep up the good work!!!!
Oh that nasty old Man!!!!! I hope Guy eats him or something! A dark chapter but it looks like there is going to be some light at the end of the tunnel. Keep up the good work!