theoneagus

Well...I wasn't really planning on reviewing at all. I mean, although I've been following the story for almost a year now, this is the first time I actually write back. I have to say that I've fallen in love with your writing and your characters, and with the story as a whole. It deserved a review before its end. Not really sure I'm very good at it, but I'm trying to do it as best as I can. When I read the title I kinda figured the outcome of the Bufords' visit. It was illustrated in a very complete way and it made me feel very emotional. I think I even shed a tear or two. However, I didn't think Geoff was going to make such a drastic change in accepting Luke. I certainly didn't expect them to end up talking about Elliott. But I guess it's for the best. As others have said, I don't like the idea of the story ending. However, I can see how it is necessary. This years on Luke's life were Ryan's too. He even got circumcised trying to look like Ry. This stage in Luke's life has come to an end as his parents are open to accept him for who he is. That was ultimately Ryan's legacy to Luke. What I would love to see is a story that shows us how our beloved characters' lives go on. Maybe from Si or Jacko's perspective. All the characters you have created deserve a sequel. And there are a lot of things to tell, too. Simon needs to come out, as he was the one who actually stsrted this process by telling Luke about his own sexuallity. I personally am a fan of Elli, so I'd love to keep an eye on him. Hopefully, the next story you write doesn't need to have somebody die... right? So, after that I only need to thank you Riley for everyting you've done for us. I hope to hear from you sometime soon, especially if it means I'll be able to see Elli again Take care!

Thanks! Don't worry, it depends on every situation. It'll happen in it's own time. If you asked me a few year ago I would've never thought this was happening.

Thanks Ashi! I certainly will... when the time is right, that is.

We need to reestablish the family. We need to put it once again in the center of our hearts. We need to prioritize the bonds that link us, prioritize the hugs that bring us together, prioritize the tenderness that makes us love each other, prioritize compassion against an impersonal world that negotiates everything, that corrupts everything. I’m willing to compromise, that’s why today I told my parents about that part of me that has been hiding for so long. We need to start the change in society at our homes. Small people at small places doing small things can create something big, and that’s us. Things are changing, everywhere, is it for good? We need to take part in those changes, move the world to where we want it to go. We’ve already broken down tons of barriers, now we need to build. And not just us LGBT people. Everybody, do we give a shit about where we’re going? I think we do.

Welcome guys! Feel free to dig in and enjoy yourselves! There's a big amount of great people here, so do not hesitaste to join the chatroom or send some private messages, you can get to make really good friends here. Also the stories are really cool, and you'll find lot's of help if trying to write youselves.

Well, I've just finished reading the whole story and had decided to wait till I reached this point to write a review. Great work ya have here! Before I get started with this chapters review, I gotta say that previous chapter really made my day, Luke's strategy was amazing, it felt like a game or something. Anyway, focusing in this last chapter I'd like to say that there are some interesting messages you have transmitted us in your writing: The way some guys that had made bad things realized, thought about it and made a change was one of them, showing that there's not bad guys, just guys which do bad stuff... people is not what they do, as long as there's life there are possibilities to change. The other one is at the end of the chapter in the chat with Damon and, while it might not be as 'deep' as the first one, it is important to our identity as 'gay guys' or any other group to that matter, here you're saying that to 'brand' people and people's actions is wrong. Just because a guy seems to be dressed as a homeless man, it doesn't mean he's gonna steal from you. This is one of the causes of me giving you those 'likes', you're transmitting your ideas in a great way, through what you love to do. Of course, I don't really need to point out that your style of writing is really compelling and I love the story and the characters. Keep up the good work!

Thanks for the review!!!

It kinda was the idea to generate that with the timing and stuff, and thanks a lot for the review!!!

Thanks Lisa!!! I actually was pretty much the same while writing it, LOL. I had the idea of transmitting exactly what he felt and how he felt it, that's why I tried to show the chain as a simbol of love in the water, which may be related to life instead of the blood in the dream which was related to death. Thanks again for the review! By the way, Theon, Theo or Agus, it's the same.

Thanks!! Actually yes, it's one of my first attempts. I had been thinking about this story for quite a long time before I finally decided to sit down and write it... I really wanted to make it feel vivid and I'm happy to hear it was that way with you. I'm glad you enjoyed it and reviewed, it really means a lot. See ya soon!

The Tree Chain By Theoneagus Silence. I disconnected the Wi-Fi of my cell phone and I turned off the computer. I listened to the echoing of a thunder and seconds later the rain started. The books for the next day were on a pile on top of my desk, and my backpack was lying next to it, the clothes piled waiting for me to take a bath the next day. I made sure the alarm clock was properly set and that the notebook and pencil I kept near the bed in order to write my dreams on awakening was in

A short story about how we feel things that will happen, and about what we make to try to stop them.

Hey Mater! It's nice to meet you, I hope you feel as welcome as I felt when I joined! Lot's of good people around, do no hesitaste to dive in and enjoy yourself. Remember that you deserve to be happy!

Ethan, Gabriel and Bob. I took another glimpse at the paper I had in my pocket, those were the first three names on the list. Of course, if they didn’t want to, then I’d have to try to convince someone else, that’s why I had made a list of every guy in our grade that played an instrument. Actually, I made the list for that, yes, but also I did it trying not to worry about Phil’s dad, Mr. Reed. Needless to say, Phillip didn’t come to school the day after the incident, so I had started worrying.

It's my turn now! I'm from Montevideo, Uruguay (in South America) I have two main places I'd like to move to. The first one is here in Uruguay and it's called Piriapolis (it's a kind of beach city, great warm weather all year and that kinds of things) And the second one is some place in USA, but I've never really thought of it... maybe Georgia, idk. So if anyone wants to recommend a place, it'd be great! Anyway, here in Uruguay right now we're in summer, and we do have tons of beaches and stuff, so it's great here.