AquariusGuy
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He's been using Kevin's for the face to face but yeah he doesn't really need it. Thank you for your kind words. I was planning on bringing Stephanie and Darren in but couldn't work them in. You will see more family in the next story because JC and Trace do have cousins and their brothers from Liz will show up too.
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Yes there will be in the next story. I had to decide who else would get engaged. I didn't want TJ also popping the question... I was thinking of Kellan and Jordan but decided against it but the logical choice was Brooks and Miles
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“Rusty?” Mark said “Yeah it’s me, I thought I’ve never seen you again” he said as ran towards Mark and embraced him and both men were crying. “I am so glad to have found you, I have wanted to contact you for years but after my parents died I was shipped off to Vermont to live with my Aunt and Uncle and a few years ago moved to Oakland to live with my cousin.” “I’ve missed you so much and I was devastated when you left abruptly.” Rusty said “My parents didn’t want a gay son and th
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Two birds one stone... Tristan is going to be a huge part of TJ's life and so will Josh and Jake eventually will too. Remember TJ is their godfather. Tristan is one of my favorite people to write. He is young but so full of knowledge. He will play a huge part into how BHO moves forward.
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I was combining weddings? I have fixed it I guess I shouldn't write about a wedding while listen to my commanding unit talk about inclusion. Thankfully I didn't have them making any weapons purchases.
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The reunion will continue into the next chapter and they will be a part of the new story since TJ and JC will be living in San Francisco. In other news I've been looking for a place for those two to live and it's super expensive there. Maybe they will love outside the city?
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No he is not... some one is of British decent.
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So it is pure coincidence that he works for a BHO vendor. No malice or anything and I have succeeded in corrupting your train of thought. Everyone who is alive in this story will appear in the new one... including little Tristan. @Wesley8890 one more chapter left
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This story could go on but I want to switch gears and let TJ have a semi-normal life. The other reason is I am going to write a lot of chapters a head of time and might not post as often. Reason being is I may need to have surgery on my right should and won't be able to type. Oh and this was the penultimate chapter. 1 Chapter left.
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When we left BHO and arrived home I decided I need a smile so I called little man “Hey TJ, how are you doing” Kevin said “I am doing ok considering. Are you back home yet?” “We just got here this morning and everything is spotless. Tristan couldn’t wait to get into our pool, in fact he, Cody and Christian are out there now.” “Oh well I don’t want to interrupt their fun.” “So I’m chopped liver now?” Kevin said laughing “No Kev, it’s just he always brightens my day and I wa
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Actually no, @Ronyx has no idea about me integrating one of his stories into this one. He knows of my spin off but not that I put Apple of her eye. He knows I made him and Tony the grandparents in this story. Just wait till JC reads Dancing on a Star BHO will undergo a through change out soon. Kellan and Jordan will remain in their positions but someone else may help take the lead. One thing I have addressed yet is who got CC's portion of the company and that will come out soon. I was always annoyed by Dora and Diego so I made them evil. Evelyn is a ditz but at least we know she sticks to company policy.
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You will get your dose of Tristan in the next chapter. He's got some news for his brudder. Rusty just got caught up in his brother's web but he did stop providing information so he knew it was wrong.
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Things are going to smooth out when I start the new story. TJ is going to step up in ways he didn't know he could and crack that whip .
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Yes they were creeps but the karma bus came roaring back... Yes everyone should know who TJ is and Evelyn was new and you know new people are always right. I just realized there was no Young Tristan in this chapter. I will have to make up for it in the next one.
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“What do you mean there is a bomb in my apartment?” I asked “We were doing our precautionary sweep and found one in your place. It looks like the one found in CC’s hotel.” Kellan replied “What are they going to do?” “We’ve had the area evacuated and the story is being picked up by the news. The good thing is they said it was the apartment of Millionaire Prescott Grant’s son Russell; you haven’t been mentioned.” “Let’s keep it that way. Please talk to Mr. Grant and check on Rusty
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Maybe... Jury is still out. Since you edited it... Yes there will be more Tristan... as for trust who knows lol
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Things will get better. As I mentioned above this story will end soon and the new one won't be as dramatic
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We have one or two more folks to end this drama... Karma takes care of them.
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CC is no longer in this world... Whoever planted the bombs outsmarted her. I will address this in the very next chapter. Jack, Kellan, Jordan and Emily have no stake in BHO. TJ 50%, CC 25%, Beau 12.5% and Grayson 12.5% for 100%.
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Yes the bomb's were planted by someone else, Richard was a misdirect and Jack realizes it after the bomb in San Francisco is found.
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I thought it would be interesting to have CC narrating and then meet her maker. There is 1 more person out there and it will be slightly shocking, someone we haven't heard from in quite some time. They don't work at BHO. CC's position will be filled as someone decides to step up and take over and before you ask... it's either TJ, Jack, Grayson or Trace. No the wedding will go off without a hitch. I'm going to spoiler here: The story will end with a double proposal and a new story will start said couple(s) moving forward. Grayson will get married in the new story.
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Yes but who blew her up? Inquiring minds want to know.
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“Hey CC, why did we have to meet here?” Jack said “We have a major leak in BHO. I can’t believe I didn’t see it.” CC said “Would you stop with the theatrics and tell me.” “Well, we knew it was still happening and I purposely set someone up and they took the bait and it was Dora and her brother Diego.” “What? Your own assistant and Kellan’s assistant?” Jack said shocked “Yes, I had their phones monitored and Dora called Diego and told him everything. Then he turned around and
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See the mole(s) and Richard are not taking Tristan's full potential into consideration and will be in for a big surprise. The joke will be on them and that's all I'll say.
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When I chose a story for him to read I knew it had to be Apple. TJ does want his mother's approval we just don't see it. That is something every kid wants and it can be such a shame when they don't get it. I made a joke in one of the chapters about dancing on a star... it was more of an inside joke between Tracy and Jack.
