TJ's journey to love

OK I apologize if this review is not written well for I am very limited.

We have a debut story by this author but you would never know it because it reads like the best seasoned authors GA has to offerThe story is loosely set in the world of author's Ronyx's Dancing On A Star. If you're expecting a Ronyx clone(although that would not be bad thing)you would be mistaken.This author has a unique and effective style and imagination all his own.

The story starts and centers around high school teenager named TJ.On the surface everything looks great loving parents two younger brothers who are very close and a lifelong friend who is pretty much like another brother. TJ is also a very talented dancer good enough to get a scholarship at the acclaimed school Julliard .Two event happen that would be tough on any teenager TJ's father who's in the military dies  while doing an assignment and his boyfriend does the ultimate betrayal.While this is terrible on its own it leads to a chain of event where a lot of stuff previously unknown to TJ and his brothers come to light.One incident leads to another involving among other things rape,death,crooked police and up til then unknown relatives.TJ doesn't know who to trust what was up is now down it gets to the point where TJ just has remove himself from this situation including his scholarship at Julliard and goes underground.

What does TJ do from there? well you will have to read the story.Like every good story the author is very good at having the characters express emotion and you as a reader get involved with these emotions.A lot of readers can guess what will happen next in a story that won't be the case with this author and that's what  makes this story so fun

This is the fantastic story about TJ Michaels and JC Woolery.

TJ is dealing with the death of his father, we follow his audition for college where he meets JC who is the winner of Americas Got Talent.

What follows isn't just a love story as the boys rekindle there rediscovered love for each other. This is a much more complex tale that is full of espionage, murder, humour and plenty of family.

This is a fantastic story that has a cliffhanger at the end of almost every chapter, but it is a real page turner that you will want to read and read again. Highly recommended.

This is a review of the entire series, not just the first story.

The author should be proud of their first effort, and the interesting story line.  The main problem with the series is that it would take a large, detailed spreadsheet for any reader to keep track of what is going on.  I was totally lost - over and over again.

As the author continues to write, they should try to improve on several problem areas:

1) Character names should be consistent.  It's very difficult for readers to follow a story where the same person is interchangeably referred to by three to six different names.  Initials are even harder to track.

2) Relationships between characters shouldn't constantly change.  It's okay for one or two relationships to change over time, but not changes in relationships dozens of times.  

3) Don't state that everything previously presented in dozens of chapters is wrong - here's what actually happened.  And then change that all over again.

4) I don't care much about grammar, but please attempt some basic editing of your story for the sake of coherency.  

I'm not sure why a few others gave this series a five-star review.  The creativity was good, but the execution needs a lot of work.