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TJ's journey to love 1. TJ's Journey

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TJ Michaels is dealing with the loss of his father, finishing High School and then going off to college. Before his audition he meets the boy of his dreams  dancing and singing sensation JC Woolery the winner of America's Got Talent. This story will follow the boys as they rediscover their love for each other. Some characters names maybe familiar to you from Ronyx's Dancing on a Star. While they will make some appearance the story is focusing on TJ and JC. You don't need to read his story for this one to make sense. There are no spoliers as this is of my own imagination as I do not know how D.O.S. will end. 

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  • Addictive/Pacing 6
  • Characters 6
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 8
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  • Smoldering 3
  • Tearjerker 4
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  • 1. Chapter 1
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  • 2. Chapter 2
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  • 3. Chapter 3
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  • 4. Chapter 4
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  • 5. Chapter 5
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  • 6. Chapter 6
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  • 7. Chapter 7
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  • 8. Chapter 8
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  • 9. Chapter 9
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  • 10. Chapter 10
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  • 11. Chapter 11
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  • 12. Chapter 12
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  • 13. Chapter 13
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  • 14. Chapter 14
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  • 15. Chapter 15
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  • 16. Chapter 16
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  • 17. Chapter 17
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  • 18. Chapter 18
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  • 19. Chapter 19
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  • 20. Chapter 20
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  • 21. Chapter 21
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  • 22. Chapter 22
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  • 23. Chapter 23
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  • 24. Chapter 24
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  • 25. Chapter 25
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  • 26. Chapter 26
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  • 27. Chapter 27
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  • 28. Chapter 28
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  • 29. Chapter 29
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  • 30. Chapter 30
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  • 31. Chapter 31
    • 3,089 Words
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  • 32. Chapter 32
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  • 33. Chapter 33
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  • 34. Chapter 34
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  • 35. Chapter 35
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chris191070

   5 of 6 members found this review helpful 5 / 6 members

This is the fantastic story about TJ Michaels and JC Woolery.

TJ is dealing with the death of his father, we follow his audition for college where he meets JC who is the winner of Americas Got Talent.

What follows isn't just a love story as the boys rekindle there rediscovered love for each other. This is a much more complex tale that is full of espionage, murder, humour and plenty of family.

This is a fantastic story that has a cliffhanger at the end of almost every chapter, but it is a real page turner that you will want to read and read again. Highly recommended.

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weinerdog

· Edited by weinerdog

   4 of 5 members found this review helpful 4 / 5 members

OK I apologize if this review is not written well for I am very limited.

We have a debut story by this author but you would never know it because it reads like the best seasoned authors GA has to offerThe story is loosely set in the world of author's Ronyx's Dancing On A Star. If you're expecting a Ronyx clone(although that would not be bad thing)you would be mistaken.This author has a unique and effective style and imagination all his own.

The story starts and centers around high school teenager named TJ.On the surface everything looks great loving parents two younger brothers who are very close and a lifelong friend who is pretty much like another brother. TJ is also a very talented dancer good enough to get a scholarship at the acclaimed school Julliard .Two event happen that would be tough on any teenager TJ's father who's in the military dies  while doing an assignment and his boyfriend does the ultimate betrayal.While this is terrible on its own it leads to a chain of event where a lot of stuff previously unknown to TJ and his brothers come to light.One incident leads to another involving among other things rape,death,crooked police and up til then unknown relatives.TJ doesn't know who to trust what was up is now down it gets to the point where TJ just has remove himself from this situation including his scholarship at Julliard and goes underground.

What does TJ do from there? well you will have to read the story.Like every good story the author is very good at having the characters express emotion and you as a reader get involved with these emotions.A lot of readers can guess what will happen next in a story that won't be the case with this author and that's what  makes this story so fun

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Atlboy

· Edited by Atlboy

   3 of 4 members found this review helpful 3 / 4 members

This is a review of the entire series, not just the first story.

The author should be proud of their first effort, and the interesting story line.  The main problem with the series is that it would take a large, detailed spreadsheet for any reader to keep track of what is going on.  I was totally lost - over and over again.

As the author continues to write, they should try to improve on several problem areas:

1) Character names should be consistent.  It's very difficult for readers to follow a story where the same person is interchangeably referred to by three to six different names.  Initials are even harder to track.

2) Relationships between characters shouldn't constantly change.  It's okay for one or two relationships to change over time, but not changes in relationships dozens of times.  

3) Don't state that everything previously presented in dozens of chapters is wrong - here's what actually happened.  And then change that all over again.

4) I don't care much about grammar, but please attempt some basic editing of your story for the sake of coherency.  

I'm not sure why a few others gave this series a five-star review.  The creativity was good, but the execution needs a lot of work.

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