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This story could go on but I want to switch gears and let TJ have a semi-normal life. The other reason is I am going to write a lot of chapters a head of time and might not post as often. Reason being is I may need to have surgery on my right should and won't be able to type. Oh and this was the penultimate chapter. 1 Chapter left.
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When we left BHO and arrived home I decided I need a smile so I called little man “Hey TJ, how are you doing” Kevin said “I am doing ok considering. Are you back home yet?” “We just got here this morning and everything is spotless. Tristan couldn’t wait to get into our pool, in fact he, Cody and Christian are out there now.” “Oh well I don’t want to interrupt their fun.” “So I’m chopped liver now?” Kevin said laughing “No Kev, it’s just he always brightens my day and I wa
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Actually no, @Ronyx has no idea about me integrating one of his stories into this one. He knows of my spin off but not that I put Apple of her eye. He knows I made him and Tony the grandparents in this story. Just wait till JC reads Dancing on a Star BHO will undergo a through change out soon. Kellan and Jordan will remain in their positions but someone else may help take the lead. One thing I have addressed yet is who got CC's portion of the company and that will come out soon. I was always annoyed by Dora and Diego so I made them evil. Evelyn is a ditz but at least we know she sticks to company policy.
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You will get your dose of Tristan in the next chapter. He's got some news for his brudder. Rusty just got caught up in his brother's web but he did stop providing information so he knew it was wrong.
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Things are going to smooth out when I start the new story. TJ is going to step up in ways he didn't know he could and crack that whip .
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Yes they were creeps but the karma bus came roaring back... Yes everyone should know who TJ is and Evelyn was new and you know new people are always right. I just realized there was no Young Tristan in this chapter. I will have to make up for it in the next one.
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“What do you mean there is a bomb in my apartment?” I asked “We were doing our precautionary sweep and found one in your place. It looks like the one found in CC’s hotel.” Kellan replied “What are they going to do?” “We’ve had the area evacuated and the story is being picked up by the news. The good thing is they said it was the apartment of Millionaire Prescott Grant’s son Russell; you haven’t been mentioned.” “Let’s keep it that way. Please talk to Mr. Grant and check on Rusty
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Maybe... Jury is still out. Since you edited it... Yes there will be more Tristan... as for trust who knows lol
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Things will get better. As I mentioned above this story will end soon and the new one won't be as dramatic
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We have one or two more folks to end this drama... Karma takes care of them.
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CC is no longer in this world... Whoever planted the bombs outsmarted her. I will address this in the very next chapter. Jack, Kellan, Jordan and Emily have no stake in BHO. TJ 50%, CC 25%, Beau 12.5% and Grayson 12.5% for 100%.
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Yes the bomb's were planted by someone else, Richard was a misdirect and Jack realizes it after the bomb in San Francisco is found.
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I thought it would be interesting to have CC narrating and then meet her maker. There is 1 more person out there and it will be slightly shocking, someone we haven't heard from in quite some time. They don't work at BHO. CC's position will be filled as someone decides to step up and take over and before you ask... it's either TJ, Jack, Grayson or Trace. No the wedding will go off without a hitch. I'm going to spoiler here: The story will end with a double proposal and a new story will start said couple(s) moving forward. Grayson will get married in the new story.
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Yes but who blew her up? Inquiring minds want to know.
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“Hey CC, why did we have to meet here?” Jack said “We have a major leak in BHO. I can’t believe I didn’t see it.” CC said “Would you stop with the theatrics and tell me.” “Well, we knew it was still happening and I purposely set someone up and they took the bait and it was Dora and her brother Diego.” “What? Your own assistant and Kellan’s assistant?” Jack said shocked “Yes, I had their phones monitored and Dora called Diego and told him everything. Then he turned around and
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See the mole(s) and Richard are not taking Tristan's full potential into consideration and will be in for a big surprise. The joke will be on them and that's all I'll say.
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When I chose a story for him to read I knew it had to be Apple. TJ does want his mother's approval we just don't see it. That is something every kid wants and it can be such a shame when they don't get it. I made a joke in one of the chapters about dancing on a star... it was more of an inside joke between Tracy and Jack.
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She wouldn't have called Jack if he was the leak. All will be revealed in the next chapter....
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Reports were filed and people were briefed. Could be anyone. I love all of his stories and that one seemed to fit very well into this one.
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Not giving away the leak BUT you won't have to worry about Richard touching Tristan... someone else will be waiting for him.
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“Well what do you have to tell me?” I asked “You know your father and I arranged a marriage for you.” “YOU WHAT!” I said losing my cool “TJ, honey, listen to me. We thought it was a great idea for you to marry this person. You would do so well together.” “What gives you the right to say who I marry?” I was about to blow my top “Honey, we arranged for you to marry Jackson Woolery” she said with a smile “What did you say?” “I said JC sweet heart, now come sit here” she
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Yeah maybe I should make a list of everyone. I toyed with making Emily bisexual and that being her news but I decided against it. Henry could have had another partner other than Brayden. We will find out... we still need to address the Henry and Rusty interrogations.
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Young Tristan is going to be a very interesting character. I can tell you that Kevin and/or Jeff are the biological father but what do we know about his mother? Is she miss cleo?
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1. I know I wrote the chapter 2. Well I guess I could find someone... let me run a DNA test and send it to 23andme. 3. Game on 4. Some one could have a kid they don't know about. 5. Yes they are. 6. I've written it and it's so left field you'll be shocked 7. As you wish.... (movie reference)
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interesting theory. Him being watched was 5 years ago... so that rules Martin, Dylan and Sebastian. You are on the right path though.
