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He is going to wrestle with seeing her as she still sees everything he did as its his fault when she played a part too.
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You do... virtual friends
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Emily is in for a rude awakening when she comes out of the hospital but she is in there for a very serious reason. It will take a miracle for her to turn around and that will eventually occur. I wanted Dr. Kev and Jeff to get off to a normal life. After being kidnapped they needed a fresh start and were already in progress to have a kid, which TJ didn't know about. As I hinted he's almost 5 (I changed it in the story).
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so your friends are crappy. Dully noted and you can call them friends not connections I know what you mean... the internet where I am is terrible. My parents live on the base of a mountain in the middle of no where.
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First BHO has finally learned to blend in... In this chapter with his conversation with Dr. Hottie he said he didn't trick himself out. He and JC will be just fine once he eventually visits. With Emily being in the hospital it will delay the trip for JC. Oh and Congratulations on beating @Wesley8890 to the first comment
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We rode up in the elevator in silence but JC grasped my hand as soon as the door closed. When we got to my room we sat on the couch and looked at him and could tell how hurt he was “With all the lies and deception around me, I had to leave. Julian outed you by cloning my phone and posting those private pictures of us. I ruined your tour and I got Jake and Josh killed.” I said “You had no way to know your Uncle Julian was deranged and was trying to get what your father had.” JC said “
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I won't say either way Brayden and the Karma bus are definitely going to meet.
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When JC comes to visit him in chapter 25 that will be covered. Brayden's arrogance is going to play out... and so will someone else's. TJ is definitely listening to CC but someone else is going to help him and that person is hinted at in chapter 24.
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Yes he has grown and is kicking butt and taking names. You won't have to wait as he and his mother talk in the next chapter.
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He is going to talk to his mom and you are right it won't be pleasant. He will struggle with what to do and something or some will intervene and provide the guidance he needs.
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They were able to see what was going on and protected him.
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I figured it was good for TJ to step away and needed to create some reason for him to go. He is going to be torn about what to do. I'm glad you like it.
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He and beau are getting married. Beau asked him to be his best man
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Her and Bob did.
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“TJ?” I felt someone shaking me and I looked up and it was Uncle Brayden. I heard one of the other security team say on the radio we got him. “You shouldn’t have run away TJ. It was very dangerous.” Uncle Brayden said making me angry “So you can keep secrets but when I need to breathe and clear my head from all the drama it’s wrong?” I challenged “Enough back talk, we are heading back to Florida.” “I know about Jake and Josh. How could you keep that from me?” Anger was rising in
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Just wait to see how bad they fuck up in the next chapter.
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Yes they aren’t very effective when it comes to protecting their own. This does occur again in the next chapter and is addressed in the time jump
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He very could. You will see what happens in the next chapter. Kind of ties things together and we see a different TJ after a time jump.
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TJ is TJ is all I am saying.
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@Wesley8890 you might want to sit down and have pillows around you for the next chapter.
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Yes they were not major characters but they had a purpose. I will dive in the next chapter about why they were important at least to TJ.
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“What did he do I asked” “TJ, please keep calm.” CC said while looking at my mom, I’ve got a bad feeling. “He shot up the school.” CC had dropped the bomb “HE WHAT! I need my phone I need to check on my friends.” I said as I started to panic. “Tracy is leaving to go take care of things at the school but will be super protected. We cannot risk anyone finding you TJ. Until we can safely remove the things installed on your phone you can’t have it.” CC said “My friends might thin
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Chapter 18 is where he found out. The other two will be addressed soon regarding BHO. I chose Key West on whim... its remote and far away. Not somewhere you'd look for a bunch of hiding people. I will be turning things on its head and that is where his journey will start.
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Just wait....
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If I wasn’t this story would be boring
