AquariusGuy
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We will learn more as the story goes on. There are so many things that could happen.
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Without spoiling it the cops will remain in the dark.
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He gets a little rough around the edges next chapter and throws some accusations. Yes the boys have gone missing. Did they stage it? Were they kidnapped by someone else? We will meet CC just not how anyone suspects.
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I schedule the chapter to post last night but for some reason there was no notification.
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He doesn't know it's his cousin. We haven't met Dylan's mother yet.... who knows maybe she is a good person. The whole cop situation plays out in the next chapter. Well the kidnapping plays into why the cop is there and now you understand why in the next chapter my tease about Emily occurs. We will know sooner or later who was responsible for them disappearing.. I've left some hints.
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Potomac, Maryland “Are those the two guys?” “Yeah they are” “Ok, let’s do this” ***** “So Jack this anticipation is killing me, what did you learn?” Emily said “Well Tristan’s older sister married name is Dr. Caroline Carmine, commonly known as CC” “Holy shit, isn’t that Dylan’s mother?” “The one and only” “What a small world this is turning out to be.” The phone rang and it the hospital letting us know that we could come back. “JC please stay here
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**DISCLAIMER** Please buckle up shit's about to get real Like any person Emily has hit a boiling point. Pardon the pun except it was a cop she hit Just you wait and see why.
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Just wait to you see why she did it. She had her reasons and you might want to deck him too.
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When you point fingers there are 3 pointing right back at you. Any misbehaving will delay the next chapter so here's a teaser: Mom did something no one in the room expected. She decked the detective.
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I've been wanting to use that emoji... I don't watch soaps... I use them to clean.
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So you didn't say them but then washed your own keyboard with soaps? Just think of the song One way or another... a day of reckoning is coming soon.
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I have to allow 8 hours between chapters. I am revising 13 as some of the dialogue is a little rough. I might hold it back a day, two or three. Jack has people in all kinds of places, so he can get Intel fast.
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You want to talk Cliffs... there is another Cliff King @C James. Read his work. He writes some awesome stories. @Ronyx does great cliffs too. So what I am saying I've learned from two great authors. You need to walk your reader to the edge and then..... end it. And by end it I mean the chapter
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Well chapter 13 is a ___________________. I kind of had fun writing the beginning and end of 13. Needless to say it's a cliff.
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TJ will have a lot to work through and JUST wait for chapter 13. I have a feeling you may like it but it does bring more questions.
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Dylan and Sebastian want control over TJ. They do not know what is going on in Ohio. They are dumb enough to think they will be ok. As for TJ not remembering JC... they met when they were little. Sometimes if you don't see someone you don't always remember them. Remember Lucas said they seemed similar and JC and Trace seem to remember them both. We will see some recognition come in the coming chapters. Chapter 12 and 13 will dive more into what happened.
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Many of the adults mentioned are High school friends with a few twists coming.
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She narrates most of the next chapter too. As for Dylan..
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Yes I do... tons of it.
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oh dylan is in some deep crap... just wait till you see what happens. He and Sebastian will be wrapped up pretty quickly.
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First... I don't know your sleeping schedule. I apparently reached the point that I don't need MOD approval to post, so it posted faster than I thought it was going to. So I have decided what will happen to Dylan and Sebastian. It won't be until after another little twist occurs. Speaking of twists... have your heart meds ready for the next chapter.
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Thank you. Big TJ will become a bit of a voice of reason.
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Narration from Emily –TJ’s mom Beau called me in a panic that TJ had come into the house and saw Grayson showing the album to JC and Trace and had run up the stairs locked himself in the room. After picking the lock, they found him incoherent in the closet rocking back and forth and crying. I pulled out of the Woolery’s driveway and sped home in record time. As I pulled in an ambulance was sitting in the driveway. “What’s going on?” I asked no one in particular. “He passed out
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I love cliffs... standing at the top looking down at all the angry readers. Just be glad I post fast. I could make you wait weeks or months.
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Yes he is dealing with the loss of his dad but something happened before that happened and will show its face very soon.
