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I won't drag out the whole inheritance thing, I promise. Yes, the boys are finding themselves attracted to each other and I rewrote this chapter several times trying to pick a direction. It almost ended a completely different way, but I decided to save that revelation for another time.
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We sat in silence for a while, the night pressing cool and quiet around us. The stars above were perfectly still — the exact opposite of what my head felt like. “You okay?” Shiloh finally asked, voice soft. There was no pressure in the question — just concern. I took a breath. “Yeah. Things just… suck right now.” Understatement of the year. He nodded like he understood more than he was letting on. For a moment, neither of us spoke. “So,” he said, changing the subject carefull
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I vote for the Pistachio. Sleek yet sophisticated, it blends in while standing out.
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I thought the same thing....
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The town this story is based in is real and most of the places are real but a few things have been changed in the story. Bowie, Maryland (the original city limits) was built by Levitt and Sons starting in 1957. They built a lot of houses nationwide (usually called Levittown) and were known for getting homes together quickly. They were well-built and solid homes. There are some mansions in the entire city limits to include the historic Belair Mansion. The area where Noah Sr. died is currently larger homes and used to be a turf farm.
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To put it in perspective where TJ Michaels grew up houses were in the low millions. Where the Jacob’s live the house would now sell for 600k. They didn’t pay all that much and also they don’t drive fancy cars.
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She cut all her children out so they get nothing. There will be drama cause why not.
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Money from a person he doesn't know. More will be revealed about that situation. Yeah he sneaks out and Shiloh joins him....
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Noah’s paternal grandparents live modestly. He didn’t know how well they were doing. He has a lot more to learn about his family.
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“Noah, I think this conversation is better to have in private,” Grandma said. “Nate, honey, would you come too?” My uncles gave her puzzled looks, clearly feeling left out. Grandpa just chuckled. “I think your mother wants me,” he joked as we followed her into the house and into the office. I took the couch beside him while Grandma settled into the chair. “Noah… the call I took was from Grayson,” she began. “He meant to reach me sooner, but there was an emergency—” “Honey, pl
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What a chapter that was. I initially started to think maybe Nick was having a nightmare, but definitely not. It sounds like Jack has a lot more demons in his closet and hopefully this is his path to recovery. I am glad that Tommy was able to come over and talk. I half expected the others to show up since he hadn't answered their texts. Tommy is turning out to be a true friend. I had a good chuckle at the Nifty comment. I wrote something similar in my stories, but more so, giving my muse a plug. The boys will be immortal forever. Thank you for the wonderful chapter and look forward to seeing Jack on the road to recovery, although I am expecting some hiccups along the way.
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Chapter 5 The unwanted visitors
AquariusGuy commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Chapter 5 The unwanted visitors
His mother is a descendant of that line and that's all I will say -
Chapter 5 The unwanted visitors
AquariusGuy commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Chapter 5 The unwanted visitors
Are you new here??? You know me so much better than that.... Graduation just happens to be a coincidence. -
Chapter 5 The unwanted visitors
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There are a whole lot of secrets. -
Chapter 5 The unwanted visitors
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The backyard went silent the moment my Uncle Mark stepped through the gate. “Mark,” Grandma said, moving past Matt, Nathan, and Nick. Her voice was sharp as broken glass. “What are you doing here?” “It’s my nephew’s graduation,” Mark said, chin lifted. “I have every right to be here.” “You may be his uncle,” Grandma replied, “but you were not invited. You need to leave.” I’d heard rumors that my uncles and Mark used to be close — best friends even — before something shattered
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Chapter 4 The cookout continues
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So about that.... -
Matt and Noah will have a lot in common that will become more apparent as the story progresses. The person Noah saw with Jay was Shawn BUT.... he is.... whoops no spoilers
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Chapter 2 After Graduation
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Maybe... well one of them will be. -
Chapter 4 The cookout continues
AquariusGuy commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Chapter 4 The cookout continues
What on earth do you mean??? Me do drama??? Never. -
Chapter 4 The cookout continues
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We needed a little spice. The next chapter will set something in motion. -
Chapter 4 The cookout continues
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You didn't hear the music???? I will let our magical friends know there is a glitch. -
Chapter 4 The cookout continues
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Mark appears in Finding Love and was Matt's best friend. He exploited things that happened to Matt and made money selling the videos. He claimed to have donated the money, but that never happened. -
I sat in the driver’s seat, running my hand over the dashboard, the smooth curve of the steering wheel. My dad’s truck. The one I’d only ever seen in photos. The passenger door opened quietly. “Were you surprised, honey?” Grandma asked as she settled into the seat beside me. “Yeah,” I whispered. “How did you even find it? I never saw the truck—only pictures.” She was quiet for a long moment, her gaze fixed on the windshield. When she spoke, her voice was steady, but her eyes
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I have to agree that the letter from Jack's parents was reprehensible. To call themselves Mommy and Daddy is not a title they deserve. They need to go with the vile former dorm figure... what's his name. I am glad that Nick finally cleared the air. Sadly, he sat on it long enough to cause a panic attack (been there, done that). I am glad he recognized he needed help and sought out Miss Charice. This had me laughing as I could totally smell that car myself. Thank you for the wonderful chapter.
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