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  1. Fisherman
    Carlos: Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. I repeat: Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Those cliffhangers were way beyond vexing. They were cruel. Cheers, Wayne
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    Hi Carlos, Nicely handled last couple of chapters. Great that the guys are married now, and the other relationships seem to be either solid or blossoming. Except for CJ, of course ... he's yet to find Mr. Right. Still, he's only 15 so I guess his focus needs to be on his studies. Links to songs mentioned in the story ... now where have I seen that done before? LOL. Unfortunately, being in Australia, I couldn't access one of the clips, but I enjoyed the other one. Cheers, Wayne
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    Hi Carlos, Really enjoyed this latest chapter - especially the surprise reference to Tyson Hill from 'Love on the rocks' and how cleverly you had the guys listening to his song on the radio! I wonder if the author knows? Does this mean that the guys might see his concert in America? That’s where Marcus McNally is up to in his story – Tyson’s first US tour. Looking forward to next week’s instalment! Cheers, Wayne
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    Morning Carlos, Another great read, although so much sex over breakfast could have given me indigestion! All the street words for drugs was foreign to me. In my day (says the old guy) the most anyone did was roll a joint! Although here's one non-Aussies might never have heard ... you might "go to a party and drop a few mandies!" And Bucket's "cocktease" was new to me, also. Is that what they call it now? In my day (says the old guy) it was "prick tease"! Was this chapter shorter than the others, Carlos? I didn't even finish half a cup of coffee, and the chapter ended. There's another story I follow at weekends (!) and with that one, I need three cups of coffee, and often, a full box of Kleenex. And before Bucket says anything inappropraite, the Klennex are for tears ... Cheers, Wayne
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    Hi Carlos, Another nicely written chapter, with lots happening. I like the way you weave morality through the narrative, in this case, infidelity in the gay community (which is really no different from infidelity in the straight community.) At least while CJ is a pogostick of teen hormones, he's being exposed to his fathers' values and likely soaking them up. I'm guessing if there's no going back for Doc (and he seemed quite definite) then Chip is out of the picture from now on ... unless you have plans for him in the future. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, knowing that Doc will be supported and cared for. Cheers, Wayne
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    Hi Carlos, Loved having two chapters this weekend. Made me feel like my 'Summer' fix was as long as my 'Love on the rocks' fix ... although those chapters are always at least 10K long! Great to see CJ finally exloring his sexuality ... and you didn't 'overblow it' (if you'll pardon the expression!). All very tasteful, and no nasty aftertaste! Speaking of nasty tastes ... I'll weigh in on the mouthwash for what it's worth. There is nothing more offputting than somebody with bad breath ... and halitosis was not invented by Listerine ... it's a medically recognised condition caused by bacteria below the gumline and the back of the tongue. I agree that mouthwashes are generally useless - full of sugar, and potentially damaging to the enamel on the tooth. I grew up with a grandmother who insisted that bad breath can be cured very simply - by drinking a small amount of juiced continental parsley - and 50 years on, Grandma's remedy has proved itself time and time again. PS Carlos - nice touch referncing the Australian wine. If I'm not mistaken, Coldstream Hills is the favoured Aussie drop of a certain handsome lawyer down under ... <g> Cheers, Wayne
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    I'm surprised he says he couldn't handle a large cast - "Love on the rocks" has at least a dozen central characters that I can think of, plus the four kids. Maybe because they're mostly family, it's easier to keep tabs on them! How I wish I could read his chapters ahead of time; those cliffhangers of his are like Chinese water torture! Here in Australia, the age of consent varies, which is a bit odd. It's 16 in all states except South Australia and Tasmania, where it's 17. And in Queensland, the age of consent is 16, except where it applies to anal sex, and then it jumps to 18! As Queensland teenagers probably say, "That's a pain in the arse!" Wayne
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    Hi Carlos, I've enjoyed the last couple of chapters. CJ's personality is revealing itself, and it appears he's made of sterner stuff than earlier chapters suggested. The latest chapter appears to be sowing the seeds (so to speak - LOL) of CJ's first sexual encounter. I'll be keen to see how his Dads react to their 15 year old son having sex. Is that legal age in the US? I thought you handled the confrontation with the bully in the previous chapter very well - the kid has balls! I've gotta say, though ... I was intrigued that you posted a chapter dealing with homophobia in the same week Marcus McNally posted a chapter with the same theme. His main characters are about to visit the US for the singer's tour ... I'm wondering whether one of the concerts will be in Washington? Looking forward to next week's chapter! Cheers, Wayne
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    LOL - that's funny! Shameless plugs for stories? Shameless self promotion, more like it.
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    OK, now I understand ... except I don't know why that role is referred to as a 'Beta read.' I looked up 'beta' in the urban dictionary online and it says - "a beta is a male who, instead of being alpha and manning up, completely bitches out.' So I've obviously missed something, somewhere! If you needed Marcus's permission for a reference, does that mean you're going to have CJ's reading "Love on the rocks"? LOL
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    It might be a language thing (or even an age thing) but I don't actually know what a 'Beta read' means. If it means the Beta reader gets to read chapters so far in advance, then I volunteer my services!
  12. Fisherman
    Damn you, Carlos! You're starting with the cliff hangers now. I think you've been taking lessons from a certain Australian writer Seven more days ...
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    Hi Carlos, I've really enjoyed the last couple of chapters, especially CJ and his dad having a little down time together. Life has been a whirlwind for CJ since he arrived, so a bit of chilling with the old man was a settling touch for him. I'm intrigued how the easy access to seemingly endless funds will pan out for CJ. I'd imagine most boys CJ's age would take full advantage of having credit cards, but so far CJ hasn't spent anything himself ... but his dads have spent a lot of money on him. He'll either be a responsible teen and seek permission to make purchases, or he'll start splashing cash. Looking forward to more! Cheers, Wayne PS - I'm guessing that the reference to Carlos the Cuban gardener in the latest chapter of the 'Love on the rocks' sequel is a nod to you! Made me laugh!
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    The most sensible comment I’ve read so far in this debate was Bucket’s remark about “sporty, blokey banter and a dad ready to step in if necessary.” Had to laugh when I realised it was made by a fellow Aussie! Bucket’s correct – here in Oz, the dialogue in chapter 6 would be blokey banter … nothing more. What appeals to me about ‘Summer’ is the fact that this displaced, emotionally abused teenager has suddenly found himself in an environment where he’s welcome, and where he feels loved. Even better, he’s being treated as an equal. CJ is 15 going on 20. He has acknowledged his sexuality and in his new environment, he is being taught to embrace it, rather than feel ashamed of it. Of course, Cesar and Brett could pack the boy in cotton wool and shield him from the real world. Or, they could introduce him to that world, with protective eyes on him at all times; watching from a distance as he takes his first tentative steps, and always ready to step in and steer him if he heads in the wrong direction. Carlos, I hope the feedback doesn’t make you feel you need to change the way your story proceeds. You’re doing a great job so far!
  15. Fisherman
    Thanks for your reply to my post Carlos. I shared it with Marcus McNayy when I emailed him to says thanks for his latest chapter. I thought his response was great: Hi Wayne, Glad you enjoyed Chapter 17 of “Five Years On.” Your email made me laugh! In response to Carlos’ comments, please feel free to pass this on! So … “Marc is a pain in the butt.” … He wishes! And … “He writes these long-assed chapters that keep you happy and glued to the page and then plops a little cliffie at the end to piss me off.” Please! The end of Chapter 17 in not a cliffhanger! It’s a small tease. If both of you dislike my cliffhangers, then you’re gonna hate Chapter 18! And … “I keep bitching and he keeps ignoring me!” I’d never ignore him - my parents taught me to be polite to old people! Cheers, mate … and Happy Australia Day for tomorrow! Marcus
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