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Thanks a lot, Robert! I'm glad you're liking the story so far. I wondered for a bit if I should tone down the sex scenes a little, but now I can see I was right in leaving them as is
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Chapter 1. The Stranger “Get down.” “Yes, sir.” “Faster!” “Sorry, sir!” “Now lick it clean.” I nodded eagerly. “Yes, sir.” The man sighed appreciatively above me as I went down on all fours and started licking his boot. I couldn't see his face, but I felt the pressure of his heavy hand on my back, shoving me further down against the floor. I didn't resist it. Instead I focused on using my tongue to lap the glossy surface of his other boot clean of the couple drops of cum that had lande
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It was close. Humanity almost destroyed itself. Among the ruins there's only one Island city which still has technology the rest of the world can only envy. The entire city depends on spark. If anything were to happen to it… Well. it's better not to think about it. My name's Rick. I'm a Peacekeeper in that city. My city. I'll defend it from anyone who tries to destroy our source of spark. Even if it's a secret agent, deadly and cunning...
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Thank you very much for the review
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We'll get to meet them in Book Two, so I won't add too many details, but they are... unconventional.
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The next chapter is packed with stuff, but there's not enough space and I want to give this tale the chance to develop fully, so some things will be explored further in the sequel.
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Aw, thank you so much! While living on Tantalus may become much more dangerous in the near future, Kyle is very attached to Tag, so he's very likely to take good care of the little guy
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Thank you very much for the kind words! I hope you'll find the next and final chapter for Book One satisfying
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Kyle and Jim have their work cut out for them, that's for sure!
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Chapter 17. Memory Touch me, Echo directed us. Information transfer works best with physical contact. Jim took a step forward, but I hesitated. He turned around to look at me. "What's wrong, Kyle?" "I don't know. I…" But I couldn't even finish my own sentence. I was still going over the terrifying spectacle of seeing Echo destroy a missile in midair as easily as flicking a bothersome fly away. Without really meaning to, I started taking a few steps back from the disturbingly powerful
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The going will get tougher, that's for sure!
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Thanks! I like the name Echo quite a lot, too
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Thanks for reviewing, EagleIsaac! The next chapter is packed with revelations
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Ah, the cliffies and I, we cannot part ways...
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LOL, don't worry, the wait won't be long!
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Chapter 16. Echo Walking through the wilderness of Tantalus with Jim was a very different experience from my unauthorized exploration session, when I had only recently come to the planet. Back then, I’d had no idea of what I was seeing, and just a few minutes later I’d been worrying too much about staying alive to be able to appreciate the true beauty of the world. Now, I found it hard to see anything else. I didn't let go of Jim’s hand as the two of us walked in the direction of the ne
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Yeah. I think we can all agree at this point that nobody likes Commander Wylon and what she represents. Sadly, I think I have a little bit of her in me. Maybe we all do, but thankfully we do our best to be decent people and not go around killing furry little guys.
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Thank you for the review! I'm really glad you're liking the story.
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Thank you! they left behind some very fun toys indeed.
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Furballs tend to mostly to stay away from things they don't understand, and the Spire makes them uneasy and sometimes downright scared.
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Oh, and I am only getting started on the revelations…
