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RomanRomaan

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    Self-Editing Tips!

    thanks cia, helpful stuff.
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    Nothingness

    Thanks for the review, Rob. Guess that makes you an MVP.
  3. Here you go, Lady Renee: http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/story/romanromaan/promptmesenseless/2
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    Nothingness

    LOL! I'll leave it up to your imagination...for now.
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    Charlie

    I've been reading Landfall and it's making me think of entering a similar story type in the future with the mystery and the police, etc. Thanks for reviewing!
  6. Love the descriptive language! Great job!
  7. Tag – The Nap You have been feeling totally drained lately and just don’t know why. Rather than go to see the doctor you decide you just need rest. You call into work and take a week off. Your boss isn’t happy but it is your first vacation in two years. You curl up on your couch and proceed to fall into a deep sleep. When you finally do wake up, you find you are in a hospital bed and fifteen years have passed. What happened? *** I stared around the room, blankly. I had no sense of reality. Thi
  8. First person POV, I like it--bold move!
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    Charlie

    Thanks Reader1810! The nature of Charlie's problems with his parents might very well surprise you...at least what I had in mind.
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    Remember

    Also taking your advice Carlos. Let's see what happens to Elliot and AJ.
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    Remember

    Glad you're enjoying it, Lenny. Think I'm gonna slow it down and spend more time building the characters.
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    Remember

    I'm taking your advice.
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    Remember

    Thanks Jae. I'll surely keep your words in mind. This is my first story so I'll take all the help I can get.
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